Part 1
Giám khảo
How do you like geography?
Thí sinh
I really enjoy geography when I was in high school because I was quite interested in learning about different countries and their unique cultures. I also found it fascinating to study various natural environments around the world and how environments influence.
Giám khảo
Do you think geography is useful?
Thí sinh
Well, as a subject, geography might not be as practical as some other majors like engineering and medicine. However, it is very useful because it helps us broaden our horizons and understand different cultures and environments around the world.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learned geography?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have learned geography since elementary school in Taiwan. I found it quite interesting because it helped me understand different countries and the information of the environment. Also, I studied geography as my major in college.
Giám khảo
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Thí sinh
Well, this question reminds me of why I came to New Zealand on a working holiday. Also, I didn't get a teaching license after graduated from college. I have always been interested in teaching children because I enjoy sharing knowledge about different place.
Giám khảo
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Thí sinh
Oh, of course, I have always been fascinated by other countries, culture and natural environment. For example, I want to learn about different climates and landscapes because this knowledge help me appreciate the diversity of our world when I travel.
How do you like geography?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答时时态不一致,应该保持时态统一。此外,回答较长且略显重复,建议简洁表达并避免冗余。
Ví dụ: I really enjoyed geography in high school because I was interested in learning about different countries and their unique cultures. It was fascinating to study various natural environments and how they influence people.
Do you think geography is useful?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使表达更连贯,同时增加具体例子增强说服力。
Ví dụ: Although geography may not be as practical as engineering or medicine, it is very useful because it broadens our horizons. For example, it helps us understand different cultures and environments, which is important in today's globalized world.
Have you ever learned geography?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答中“information of the environment”表达不够准确,建议使用更具体的词汇,并注意句子流畅性。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have studied geography since elementary school in Taiwan. I found it interesting because it helped me understand different countries and their environments. Moreover, I majored in geography in college.
Do you want to be a geography teacher?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答内容有些偏离问题,且语法错误较多。建议直接回答问题,注意语法和句子结构。
Ví dụ: I don't have a teaching license, so I don't plan to be a geography teacher. However, I enjoy sharing knowledge about different places with children.
Will you learn more about the geography of other countries?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富,但有语法错误,如“help”应为“helps”。建议注意主谓一致和细节表达。
Ví dụ: Of course, I have always been fascinated by other countries, their cultures, and natural environments. For example, I want to learn about different climates and landscapes because this knowledge helps me appreciate the diversity of our world when I travel.
× I really enjoy geography when I was in high school because I was quite interested in learning about different countries and their unique cultures.
✓ I really enjoyed geography when I was in high school because I was quite interested in learning about different countries and their unique cultures.
句子中描述的是过去的经历,动词时态应使用过去式。'enjoy' 应改为过去式 'enjoyed',以符合时间背景。
× I also found it fascinating to study various natural environments around the world and how environments influence.
✓ I also found it fascinating to study various natural environments around the world and how environments influence them.
句子末尾缺少宾语,导致结构不完整。应补充宾语 'them',使句子完整且表达清晰。
× this knowledge help me appreciate the diversity of our world when I travel.
✓ this knowledge helps me appreciate the diversity of our world when I travel.
主语是单数 'knowledge',谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'helps',以保持主谓一致。
× I didn't get a teaching license after graduated from college.
✓ I didn't get a teaching license after graduating from college.
'after' 后应接动名词形式,'graduated' 应改为 'graduating',以符合语法规则。
× I enjoy sharing knowledge about different place.
✓ I enjoy sharing knowledge about different places.
'place' 应使用复数形式 'places',因为这里指多个不同的地方。