Geography— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi dài dòng và có một số lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy sử dụng câu đơn giản, mạch lạc và tránh dùng từ không cần thiết.

Ví dụ: I'm not very interested in geography because I find it quite challenging. However, I enjoy studying English more.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ không chính xác như 'smuttering' và hạn chế tiếng ừ, à. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và câu trả lời rõ ràng, có liên kết logic giữa các ý.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe geography is very useful because it helps us understand the location, economy, and culture of different regions.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không rõ ràng. Bạn nên sử dụng thì đúng, câu ngắn gọn và rõ ràng hơn để truyền đạt ý tưởng hiệu quả.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have been studying geography since I was a child and I continue to learn it to improve my skills, which helps me in various jobs and understanding locations.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'she's have'. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có cấu trúc tốt hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to be a geography teacher because I enjoy learning about different regions and cultures, and my teacher's inspiring voice made the lessons very engaging.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ, đồng thời dùng từ phù hợp với ngữ cảnh.

Ví dụ: Yes, in the future I want to learn more about the geography, cultures, and customs of different countries because I am very curious about them.

× Actually I'm not really into geography because whenever I study geography in my class I find it that's quite challenging and hard for me and I still love studying English instead.

✓ Actually I'm not really into geography because whenever I study geography in my class I find it quite challenging and hard for me and I still love studying English instead.

The phrase 'I find it that's quite challenging' contains an unnecessary 'that's'. Removing 'that's' corrects the sentence structure and improves clarity.

× Yes, absolutely. I think geography is really useful because when we study geography in class, we will have a smuttering about location, umm, the, uh, location, uh, economy of some region and people.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I think geography is really useful because when we study geography in class, we will have a summary about location, umm, the, uh, location, uh, economy of some region and people.

The word 'smuttering' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'summary'. Using the correct quantifier or noun improves the meaning and clarity of the sentence.

× Yeah, I have start studied, uh, geography when I was a child to up until now I still studying geography to improve my skill and that's uh, bring to me many fields in work and location.

✓ Yeah, I have started studying geography when I was a child and up until now I am still studying geography to improve my skills and that has brought me many opportunities in work and location.

The phrase 'have start studied' is incorrect; it should be 'have started studying' to use the present perfect tense correctly. Also, 'still studying' needs the auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. 'That's bring to me' should be 'that has brought me' to use present perfect tense correctly. 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to match the context.

× Yeah, absolutely. Whenever my teacher teach me about some region, some location and some culture, I, I, I always immerse in the lecture and uh, she's have a inspired voice to convey.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. Whenever my teacher teaches me about some region, some location and some culture, I always immerse myself in the lecture and, uh, she has an inspired voice to convey.

The verb 'teach' should be 'teaches' to agree with the third person singular subject 'my teacher'. 'She's have' is incorrect; it should be 'she has'. Also, 'a inspired' should be 'an inspired' because 'inspired' starts with a vowel sound. 'Immerse' should be followed by 'myself' to be reflexive.

× I think yes, if I have checked in future, I will learn more about, uh, others, other cultures and custom of some region in the world. And I have because I can person who's really curious about a culture and traditional of some region.

✓ I think yes, if I have the chance in the future, I will learn more about other cultures and customs of some regions in the world. And I am because I am a person who's really curious about the culture and traditions of some regions.

The phrase 'if I have checked in future' is incorrect; it should be 'if I have the chance in the future'. 'Others, other cultures' is redundant; 'other cultures' is sufficient. 'Custom' should be plural 'customs' to match 'cultures'. 'I have because I can person' is incorrect; it should be 'I am because I am a person'. 'Traditional' should be plural 'traditions' to match the context.