Geography— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cümle yapınızı ve dilbilgisini düzeltin; gereksiz tekrarları azaltın; daha doğal bağlaçlar ve tek bir net ana fikir kullanın. Örneğin, ’I like geography’ ile başlayıp ardından nedenini ve özel bir örneği kısa ve tutarlı şekilde ekleyin. Ayrıca ‘different hobby for the other peoples’ gibi ifadeler yerine ‘a hobby different from my classmates’ gibi doğru ifadeler kullanın.

Ví dụ: I really enjoy geography because I love studying maps. For example, I often try to find countries and cities on a map, which I find relaxing and interesting. Unlike my classmates, my mother and I share this hobby.

Gợi ý: Cevabı doğrudan ve net verin; argo veya dolgu kelimelerden kaçının; nedenleri mantıklı maddeleyin ve uygun bağlaçlar kullanın. Örneğin ‘Yes, it is useful’ diyip sonra iki kısa gerekçe verin (yön bulma, kültürel anlayış) ve bir örnekle bitirin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think geography is very useful because it helps us locate places and understand different cultures. For instance, knowing geography makes it easier to plan travel and learn about world events.

Gợi ý: Daha düzgün zaman kullanımı ve daha akıcı ifade kullanın; tekrarları kaldırın. ‘I have learned’ veya ‘I am learning’ gibi doğru zaman formlarını seçin ve kısa bir destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin (ne öğrendiğinize dair).

Ví dụ: Yes, I have studied geography at school and I am still learning it because I am in the ninth grade. This year we started topics like maps and climate, and I am excited to learn more.

Gợi ý: Çelişen ifadelerden kaçının; negatif cevabı net verin ve kısa bir sebep ekleyin. Gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın ve ‘enjoyable’ yerine ‘an enjoyable’ şeklinde artikeli unutmayın.

Ví dụ: No, I don't want to be a geography teacher because I prefer a career that involves technology. However, I think it would be an enjoyable job for someone who likes teaching.

Gợi ý: Daha spesifik ve doğru ifadeler kullanın; ‘learn all of the countries’ gibi abartılardan kaçının ve hangi ülkeler veya bölgeler olduğunu belirtin. Bağlaçlarla mantıklı akış sağlayın ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I have already learned many countries in Asia and Europe, but I would like to learn more about African countries, especially their locations and cultures.

× Uh, I really like to geography, uh, to maps.

✓ Uh, I really like geography and maps.

The student used 'like to' incorrectly with nouns; 'like' should be followed by a noun or verb+ing. Use 'like geography' or 'like studying geography'. Suggested improvement: say 'I really like geography and maps.'

× I really like to find the country places on a map.

✓ I really like finding countries on a map.

Use gerund after 'like' (verb + -ing) and use 'countries' plural or 'a country' singular; 'country places' is unnatural. Suggestion: use 'finding countries on a map' or 'finding places on a map.'

× This is my different hobby for the other peoples.

✓ This is a different hobby from other people.

Use 'a different hobby' (article and adjective order) and 'from other people' not 'for the other peoples'. 'Peoples' refers to ethnic groups; use 'people'. Suggestion: 'This is a different hobby from other people.'

× Actually my umm, classmates don't like it, but I and my mom for two.

✓ Actually, my classmates don't like it, but my mom and I do.

Use subject order 'my mom and I' and 'do' to avoid repeating the verb. 'for two' is incorrect; use 'both' or 'do' to indicate agreement. Suggestion: 'my mom and I do.'

× Definitely us, because we must to learn where we are or what can we do to find the blah blah place or find the world, explore the world.

✓ Definitely. We must learn where we are and how to find places and explore the world.

Do not use 'must to'; after 'must' use base verb. 'Definitely us' is ungrammatical; use a full sentence. 'What can we do to find...' word order in statements should be 'how to find' not question word order. Suggestion: 'We must learn where we are and how to find places and explore the world.' },{