Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答自然且内容丰富，但可以稍微简化，避免重复表达相似的意思，使回答更简洁有力。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because their fragrance and bright colors instantly lift my mood and add beauty to any space.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了不完整或错误的部分，影响了表达的清晰度。建议注意回答的完整性和准确性，避免出现语句不通顺的情况。

Ví dụ: Yes, my close friend loves gardening and spends weekends planting various flowers, like roses, which brighten her home.

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容具体，表达清晰。可以尝试使用更多连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers around where I live, especially in parks and gardens. For instance, in spring, streets are lined with colorful blossoms like roses and tulips, which brighten the neighborhood.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且自然，可以尝试加入更多连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph flowers because their colors and shapes captivate me. For example, when I visit parks or gardens, I capture their beauty to share with friends or keep as memories.

Gợi ý: 回答中“nurseries”用词不当，可能是想表达“anniversaries”或其他节日。建议注意词汇的准确性，避免用词错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, people often send flowers on special occasions like birthdays, anniversaries, and festivals as a thoughtful way to express love, gratitude, or sympathy.

× she recently grew a variety of roses which ** *** says, brightening up her home.

✓ she recently grew a variety of roses, which she says brighten up her home.

句中“which ** *** says”结构不正确，缺少主语“she”，且动词“brightening”应改为“brighten”以与先行词“roses”保持一致。应使用关系代词引导定语从句，且动词形式需与先行词复数一致。

× people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions such as birthdays and nurseries and festivals.

✓ people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, and festivals.

原句中“nurseries”用词不当，应为“anniversaries”（周年纪念日）更符合语境；另外，列举多个项时应使用逗号分隔，且“and”只用在最后一项前。