Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and concise. Instead of 'It's because that I have allergic to pollen,' say 'I am allergic to pollen, which is found in flowers.' Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'component of flowers.'

Ví dụ: No, I don't love flowers because I'm allergic to pollen, which is present in many flowers.

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and more coherent. Use linking words to connect ideas and correct pronoun usage. For example, say 'I have a crush who loves flowers a lot. On her social media, you can always see different varieties of flowers and the ones she receives on various occasions.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I have a crush who loves flowers a lot. On her social media, you can often see pictures of different types of flowers she has received on special occasions.

Gợi ý: Try to organise your answer with clear sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words like 'but' and 'because' properly. For example, 'Currently, there aren't many flowers where I live, which I'm glad about because I'm allergic to pollen. However, when I was a child, I was surrounded by many flowers in my garden, and I only discovered my allergy when I turned 18.'

Ví dụ: Currently, there aren't many flowers where I live, which I'm glad about because I'm allergic to pollen. However, when I was a child, I had a garden full of flowers, and I only found out about my allergy when I turned 18.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more structured and clear. Avoid filler words and incorrect phrases. For example, say 'Nowadays, I occasionally take photos of flowers when I find interesting ones. However, I try to avoid them as much as possible because of my allergy. I often remind myself that what doesn't kill me makes me stronger.'

Ví dụ: Nowadays, I occasionally take photos of flowers when I find interesting ones. However, I try to avoid them as much as possible because of my allergy. I often remind myself that what doesn't kill me makes me stronger.

Gợi ý: Try to be more concise and avoid hesitation sounds like 'umm' and 'you know.' Also, use plural forms correctly and link your ideas smoothly. For example, 'Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as Valentine's Day, Christmas, Mother's Day, Father's Day, and birthdays.'

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions such as Valentine's Day, Christmas, Mother's Day, Father's Day, and birthdays.

× Unfortunately no. It's because that I have allergic to pollen, which is a component of flowers.

✓ Unfortunately no. It's because I am allergic to pollen, which is a component of flowers.

The modal verb 'have' is incorrectly used here; the correct expression is 'I am allergic to pollen'. The phrase 'have allergic' is ungrammatical; 'be allergic' is the correct form to express allergy.

× Yes, to be honest I have a crush that love flowers a lot and on her social media you always see different variety of flowers and also the flowers he got from you know, different occasions.

✓ Yes, to be honest I have a crush who loves flowers a lot and on her social media you always see different varieties of flowers and also the flowers he got from, you know, different occasions.

The verb 'love' should be 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'a crush'. Also, 'that' should be 'who' when referring to a person. 'Variety' should be plural 'varieties' when referring to multiple types.

× Currently no and I'm very glad about that since I am allergic to pollen.

✓ Currently no, and I'm very glad about that since I am allergic to pollen.

A comma is needed after 'Currently no' to separate the clauses properly for clarity.

× But back when I was a kid I'm actually I was surrounded by lots of flowers since I have a garden outside my house and before I would turn before I turned 18 I didn't really know that I have allergic to pollen which I suffer until I was 18.

✓ But back when I was a kid, I was actually surrounded by lots of flowers since I had a garden outside my house, and before I turned 18, I didn't really know that I was allergic to pollen, which I suffered from until I was 18.

The sentence has multiple tense errors: 'I'm actually I was' is incorrect; 'I was actually' is correct. 'Have allergic' should be 'was allergic'. 'Have a garden' in past context should be 'had a garden'. Also, 'which I suffer' should be 'which I suffered from' to indicate past experience.

× Yup, I would say nowadays I would take flow photos of flowers occasionally and no sometimes when I look found some very interesting one I also take a picture of it.

✓ Yup, I would say nowadays I take photos of flowers occasionally and sometimes when I find some very interesting ones, I also take a picture of them.

The phrase 'would take flow photos' is incorrect; 'take photos' is correct. 'Look found' is incorrect; it should be 'find'. Also, 'one' should be plural 'ones' to match 'some'.

× But I guess I should actually in avoid them more as more as much as I could.

✓ But I guess I should actually avoid them as much as I can.

The phrase 'should actually in avoid' is incorrect; 'should actually avoid' is correct. 'As more as much as I could' is redundant and incorrect; 'as much as I can' is the proper expression.

× And sometimes I would just say whatever doesn't kill me makes me stronger.

✓ And sometimes I just say whatever doesn't kill me makes me stronger.

The modal 'would' is unnecessary here; simple present 'just say' is more appropriate for habitual statements.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers during special occasion and also during birthday.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers on special occasions and also on birthdays.

The preposition 'during' is incorrect with 'special occasion' and 'birthday'; 'on' is the correct preposition. Also, 'occasion' and 'birthday' should be plural to match the context.

× So for a special occasion I would say during Valentine's days, during umm Christmas or during some special occasions like Mother, Mother days, Father days and also other, you know, con context, relevant occasions.

✓ So for special occasions, I would say on Valentine's Day, on Christmas, or during some special occasions like Mother's Day, Father's Day, and also other, you know, context-relevant occasions.

The preposition 'during' is incorrect with 'Valentine's days' and 'Christmas'; 'on' is correct. 'Valentine's days' should be singular 'Valentine's Day'. 'Mother days' and 'Father days' should be 'Mother's Day' and 'Father's Day'. Also, 'con context' is a mishearing or typo; corrected to 'context-relevant'.