Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“a sense of happy”应为“a sense of happiness”，且句子结构较为重复。建议简化句子结构，使用更自然的表达方式，并注意语法正确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they bring me happiness and help me relax. Their beautiful colors and elegant scents always make me feel peaceful.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如“have a happy emotions”应为“feel happy emotions”，且表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意主谓一致和词汇搭配。

Ví dụ: Yes, my friends and I love flowers because they make us feel happy. Sometimes, we use flowers to decorate our homes, which creates a pleasant atmosphere.

Gợi ý: 回答中充满了填充词“uh”，影响流利度和自然度，且句子结构混乱，未完整表达观点。建议减少填充词，使用完整句子，并具体描述花的种类和特点。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because there is a large natural park near my home. The park has various flowers like tulips and roses, which make the area very beautiful.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清晰，如“accidentally take photos”用词不当，且句子结构不完整。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子，表达拍摄花卉的习惯和原因。

Ví dụ: I often take photos of flowers in my daily life, especially when I see unique or colorful ones. I think photos of flowers can capture beautiful landscapes.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误明显，如“when people to see people who are ill send a flower”结构混乱。建议简化句子，明确表达送花的场合和意义。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others. For example, when someone is ill, sending flowers can cheer them up and show care.

× I enjoy flowers because flowers can give me a sense of happy and help me reduce stress when I see some beautiful flowers.

✓ I enjoy flowers because flowers can give me a sense of happiness and help me reduce stress when I see some beautiful flowers.

这里“a sense of happy”中的“happy”是形容词，应该用名词“happiness”来表达“幸福感”。

× Additionally, some flowers with beautiful color and elegance smell which lets me feel relaxed.

✓ Additionally, some flowers with beautiful colors and elegant smells make me feel relaxed.

“beautiful color”应为复数“beautiful colors”，且“elegance smell”表达不当，应改为“elegant smells”。另外，句子结构调整使表达更自然。

× Actually my friends and I also love flowers because flowers can make us have a happy emotions and sometimes we also use flowers to create my home and they can give us a pleasant atmosphere.

✓ Actually, my friends and I also love flowers because flowers can make us have happy emotions and sometimes we also use flowers to decorate my home and they can give us a pleasant atmosphere.

“a happy emotions”中“emotions”是复数，前面不应加不定冠词“a”，应为“happy emotions”。“create my home”表达不准确，应改为“decorate my home”。

× Yes, I live in the place where have a lot of uh, flowers, uh, because, uh, there is a big natural park nearby my home and uh, there are so many flowers in their parks such as tulips, rose and other, uh, flowers.

✓ Yes, I live in a place where there are a lot of flowers because there is a big natural park near my home and there are so many flowers in the park such as tulips, roses and other flowers.

“where have a lot of flowers”缺少主语，应为“where there are a lot of flowers”。“nearby my home”应为“near my home”。“their parks”应为“the park”。“rose”应为复数“roses”。

× I accidentally take photos of flowers in my daily life.

✓ I often take photos of flowers in my daily life.

“accidentally”意为“偶然地”，与句意不符，应该用“often”表示频率。

× Especially when you see some special flowers or the flower with a beautiful color, I often take it as a photo because the photo with flower can great landscape.

✓ Especially when I see some special flowers or a flower with a beautiful color, I often take photos because photos with flowers can create great landscapes.

“you see”应改为“I see”保持主语一致。“take it as a photo”表达不自然，应改为“take photos”。“the photo with flower can great landscape”语法错误，应改为“photos with flowers can create great landscapes”。

× At some occasions, for instance when people to see people who are ill send a flower can give people a sense of achievement and let them feel happy.

✓ On some occasions, for instance when people visit those who are ill, sending flowers can give people a sense of comfort and make them feel happy.

“At some occasions”应为“On some occasions”。“when people to see people who are ill”结构错误，应为“when people visit those who are ill”。“send a flower can give”缺少主语，应改为“sending flowers can give”。“a sense of achievement”用词不当，应为“a sense of comfort”。