Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和重复表达，如“I like, I like”。建议避免重复，注意语法一致性，并使用更丰富的词汇描述花的特点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because of their beautiful colors and pleasant fragrances. I often buy them from flower shops to decorate my home and make it more inviting.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误，如“who love”应为“who loves”，以及“decorate”应为“decorates”。建议注意主谓一致，避免重复“herself”，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my mom loves flowers very much. Not only does she buy them from flower shops, but she also plants and takes good care of them. She always decorates the room with the flowers she grows.

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，如“where are left”不通顺，“my mom grow”应为“my mom grows”。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和语法，使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers around my home because my mom grows a lot of them on the balcony. They make my home look beautiful, and there are also many flowers in the neighborhood.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，表达清晰且有逻辑。建议可以增加一些具体细节或原因，使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: Actually, I rarely take photos of flowers alone. However, I often take pictures of myself with flowers or include flowers and food together because it makes the photos more vibrant and appealing.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整，最后一句话未说完。建议完整表达观点，注意句子完整性，并使用连接词使内容更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, people often send flowers to their loved ones, especially couples. Students also give flowers to teachers to show appreciation, for example, on Teachers' Day, our class always sends flowers to our teachers.

× I love their smells, their color, the way that they look.

✓ I love their smells, their colors, the way that they look.

这里的'smells'是复数形式，表示多种气味，但'color'是单数，应该与'smells'保持一致，改为复数'colors'。

× She's a person who love flowers very much.

✓ She's a person who loves flowers very much.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'，所以'love'应改为'loves'。

× she always decorate the room with all the flowers she planted.

✓ she always decorates the room with all the flowers she planted.

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'，所以'decorate'应改为'decorates'。

× There are many flowers where are left because as I said before my mom grow a lot of flowers and plants on the balcony and I think they decorate my home and in the neighborhood there are also many flowers.

✓ There are many flowers left because, as I said before, my mom grows a lot of flowers and plants on the balcony, and I think they decorate my home. In the neighborhood, there are also many flowers.

1. 'where are left'结构错误，应为'many flowers left'。2. 'my mom grow'主语是第三人称单数，动词应加's'，改为'my mom grows'。3. 句子过长，需适当断句。

× my mom grow a lot of flowers and plants on the balcony

✓ my mom grows a lot of flowers and plants on the balcony

主语是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加's'，所以'grow'应改为'grows'。