Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子较长且有些重复，建议简化表达，避免冗余，同时注意语法准确性。

Ví dụ: I don't love flowers because I'm allergic to pollen. When I'm near flowers, I feel uncomfortable, so I usually avoid them.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和连接词，使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, my close friend Mike loves flowers. He likes planting them in his garden and often takes photos to share on social media.

Gợi ý: 回答中信息重复且语法错误较多，建议直接回答问题并简洁说明原因，避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: No, there aren't many flowers where I live because I'm allergic to them, so I avoid places with flowers.

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了词汇错误（farmers应为flowers）和表达不清，建议注意词汇准确性并简洁表达。

Ví dụ: No, I don't take photos of flowers because I'm allergic to pollen and it makes me uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富且相关，但有重复词汇和部分表达不够自然，建议注意用词准确和避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers as gifts. For example, white lilies symbolize elegance and purity, so they are popular birthday gifts, and roses are also commonly given.

× Besides also take photos of the flowers he planted and showed them on the social media.

✓ Besides, he also takes photos of the flowers he planted and shows them on social media.

这里缺少主语和谓语动词，且动词形式不正确。应使用第三人称单数形式takes和shows，因为主语是he。并且需要加逗号分隔。

× No they're not because I'm allergic to flowers so I scarcely go near to the flowers because which will make me feel really uncomfortable and skin irritation.

✓ No, there aren't because I'm allergic to flowers, so I scarcely go near the flowers as it makes me feel really uncomfortable and causes skin irritation.

此句中使用了错误的否定形式和结构，'No they're not'不合适，应使用'there aren't'来表示'没有'。此外，'because which'结构错误，应改为'as it'或'since it'。

× So as a consequence I scarcely go near to the flowers so they can avoid potential damages.

✓ So as a consequence, I scarcely go near the flowers so I can avoid potential damage.

'go near to'中的'near'后不需要介词'to'，应直接用'go near the flowers'。另外，'damages'应为不可数名词'damage'。

× No I don't. I'm allergic to pollen so when I get close to the farmers I would feel really uncomfortable and my skin will become irritated.

✓ No, I don't. I'm allergic to pollen, so when I get close to flowers, I feel really uncomfortable and my skin becomes irritated.

原句中'farmers'应为'flowers'，因为前文讨论的是花。'would feel'和'will become'时态不一致，改为一般现在时更符合习惯表达。

× For example, many people will prefer to send the white Lily as a birthday gift to others because it is a symbol symbol of elegance and purity in Chinese culture.

✓ For example, many people prefer to send white lilies as birthday gifts to others because they are symbols of elegance and purity in Chinese culture.

'white Lily'应为复数形式'white lilies'，'birthday gift'也应为复数形式'birthday gifts'，'symbol'重复且应为复数'symbols'，以匹配复数主语。