FlowersPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you love flowers?

Thí sinh

Yes, I'd love flowers. They add beauty and color to an environment which lights my mood. For example, I enjoy have fresh flowers at home because I think it can relaxing atmosphere.

Giám khảo

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Thí sinh

Yes, my grandma loves flowers very much. She has a very large garden in front of the house where she grows many beautiful flowers. She interests spending time there and she also picked apples from the trees in her garden.

Giám khảo

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Thí sinh

Yes, there are many flowers where I live because there is a large park in front of my community. The park has a very good environment with fresh air and a lot of green plants which have the flowers grow well. I often enjoy walking there and admiring the beautiful.

Giám khảo

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Thí sinh

Umm no I'm not, even though I very love flowers, but I don't have spare time to take photos for flowers because I have a very very many home.

Giám khảo

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think my local people are very love flowers because this is a traditional favorite for Chinese people. They are very like take photos.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you love flowers?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“enjoy have”应为“enjoy having”,且表达不够自然流畅。建议注意动词形式和句子结构,使表达更地道。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they add beauty and color to any environment, which lifts my mood. For example, I enjoy having fresh flowers at home as they create a relaxing atmosphere.

Do you know anyone who loves flowers?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“She interests spending time”应为“She is interested in spending time”,且内容稍显混乱。建议理清句子结构,使用正确的动词短语。

Ví dụ: Yes, my grandma loves flowers very much. She has a large garden in front of her house where she grows many beautiful flowers. She enjoys spending time there and also picks apples from the trees in her garden.

Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题,如“which have the flowers grow well”和“admiring the beautiful”不完整。建议使用完整句子并注意修饰词的使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because there is a large park in front of my community. The park has a very good environment with fresh air and many green plants, which help the flowers grow well. I often enjoy walking there and admiring the beautiful scenery.

Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,表达不清晰,如“I'm not”应为“I don't”,且“have a very very many home”不合逻辑。建议简化句子,注意时态和词汇搭配。

Ví dụ: No, I don't take photos of flowers in my daily life, even though I love them. I usually don't have spare time to do that because I am very busy at home.

Do people in your country often send flowers to others?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误严重,如“are very love flowers”和“They are very like take photos”不符合英语表达习惯。建议使用简单句,表达清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others because it is a traditional custom. Many people like to give flowers on special occasions.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I enjoy have fresh flowers at home because I think it can relaxing atmosphere.

I enjoy having fresh flowers at home because I think it can create a relaxing atmosphere.

动词enjoy后面应接动名词形式,不能直接接动词原形。这里应将have改为having。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think it can relaxing atmosphere.

I think it can create a relaxing atmosphere.

句中缺少动词,it后应有动词create来表达“它能营造一个放松的氛围”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× She interests spending time there and she also picked apples from the trees in her garden.

She is interested in spending time there and she also picks apples from the trees in her garden.

动词interest用法错误,正确表达是be interested in + 动名词形式;另外时态应保持一致,描述习惯动作用一般现在时。

Verb + -ing form

× She interests spending time there and she also picked apples from the trees in her garden.

She is interested in spending time there and she also picks apples from the trees in her garden.

动词interest后应接介词in,再接动名词spending。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× The park has a very good environment with fresh air and a lot of green plants which have the flowers grow well.

The park has a very good environment with fresh air and a lot of green plants where the flowers grow well.

关系代词which用法不当,应改为where表示地点,且动词grow不需助动词have。

Sentence structure errors

× I often enjoy walking there and admiring the beautiful.

I often enjoy walking there and admiring the beautiful flowers.

句子缺少宾语,beautiful后应加名词flowers。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Umm no I'm not, even though I very love flowers, but I don't have spare time to take photos for flowers because I have a very very many home.

Umm no, I don't, even though I love flowers very much, but I don't have spare time to take photos of flowers because I have a lot of housework.

动词love前应加副词very much;take photos后应接介词of而非for;many用于可数名词,这里应用a lot of;home用法不当,应改为housework表示家务。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Yes, I think my local people are very love flowers because this is a traditional favorite for Chinese people.

Yes, I think local people love flowers very much because this is a traditional favorite for Chinese people.

主语和谓语搭配错误,are very love应改为love;副词very much修饰love。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× They are very like take photos.

They really like taking photos.

动词like后应接动名词taking;副词顺序调整为really like。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BeautifulAttractive
FreshNewly picked; Young; Refreshed; Chilly
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
LargeBig; Abundant; Wide-reaching
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
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