Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I definitely love flower because they are so beautiful and they can brighten up any rooms. Just imagine if you have a vase of flowers in the room, it's so cute and bright.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
I think everyone loves flower because it's really cute and beautiful, but I think the one who love flowers in my home is my mother. She's so upset with flower. My house always have a vase of flowers every day.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Defiantly next to my house there are a garden of beautiful flower of my neighborhood. It's so cute and uh, I sometimes visit there because I really like its atmosphere and the fresh flowers bring to me.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Of course, I like taking picture of beautiful scenes, so I really like take photos of flowers in my daily life. Whenever I see a flower or a vase of flower, it's really cute things and I always take taking a picture of it.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's a way to express love. I really like to send flowers to my family, my friends and beloved ones. It can strengthen our relationship and really cute.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn nên sử dụng số nhiều "flowers" thay vì "flower" để chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn nên tránh dùng từ lặp lại như "cute and bright" mà nên dùng từ đồng nghĩa hoặc mô tả chi tiết hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và phong phú hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely love flowers because they are beautiful and can brighten up any room. For example, having a vase of fresh flowers on the table instantly makes the space feel more welcoming and lively.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp số nhiều và chia động từ đúng, ví dụ "flowers" thay vì "flower" và "loves" thay vì "love". Câu "She's so upset with flower" không phù hợp về nghĩa, có thể bạn muốn nói "She's very fond of flowers". Hãy sử dụng các cụm từ chính xác và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: I believe many people love flowers, but in my family, my mother is especially fond of them. She always keeps a vase of fresh flowers at home every day.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý chính tả từ "definitely" và sử dụng số nhiều "flowers". Câu "there are a garden" không đúng ngữ pháp, nên dùng "there is a garden". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh dùng từ như "cute" cho hoa mà nên dùng từ phù hợp hơn như "beautiful" hoặc "colorful".
Ví dụ: Definitely, there is a beautiful flower garden near my house in the neighborhood. I often visit it because I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and the fresh scent of the flowers.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp như "taking pictures" thay vì "taking picture", và tránh lặp từ như "take taking". Thay vì dùng từ "cute" nhiều lần, bạn có thể dùng các từ khác để mô tả hoa. Hãy làm câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: Of course, I enjoy taking pictures of beautiful scenes, especially flowers. Whenever I see a flower or a vase of flowers, I find them charming and always take a photo to capture their beauty.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên tránh dùng từ "really cute" để mô tả việc gửi hoa, thay vào đó nên dùng các cụm từ phù hợp hơn như "meaningful" hoặc "thoughtful". Ngoài ra, câu trả lời có thể được mở rộng thêm để làm rõ hơn ý nghĩa của việc tặng hoa trong văn hóa.
Ví dụ: Yes, sending flowers is a common way to express love and appreciation in my country. I often send flowers to my family and friends because it helps strengthen our relationships and shows that I care.
× Yeah, I definitely love flower because they are so beautiful and they can brighten up any rooms.
✓ Yeah, I definitely love flowers because they are so beautiful and they can brighten up any room.
The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because it refers to flowers in general. Also, 'rooms' should be singular 'room' after 'any' because 'any' is usually followed by singular noun when referring to an unspecified single item.
× I think everyone loves flower because it's really cute and beautiful, but I think the one who love flowers in my home is my mother.
✓ I think everyone loves flowers because they're really cute and beautiful, but I think the one who loves flowers in my home is my mother.
'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to refer to flowers in general. 'It's' should be 'they're' to agree with plural 'flowers'. 'Who love' should be 'who loves' to agree with singular subject 'one'.
× My house always have a vase of flowers every day.
✓ My house always has a vase of flowers every day.
The verb 'have' should be 'has' to agree with the singular subject 'My house'.
× Defiantly next to my house there are a garden of beautiful flower of my neighborhood.
✓ Definitely next to my house there is a garden of beautiful flowers in my neighborhood.
'Defiantly' is a spelling error; it should be 'Definitely'. 'There are a garden' should be 'there is a garden' because 'garden' is singular. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to describe multiple flowers. 'Of my neighborhood' should be 'in my neighborhood' for correct preposition use.
× It's so cute and uh, I sometimes visit there because I really like its atmosphere and the fresh flowers bring to me.
✓ It's so cute and uh, I sometimes visit there because I really like its atmosphere and the fresh flowers bring me joy.
The phrase 'bring to me' is incorrect; it should be 'bring me' or 'bring me joy' to be grammatically correct and natural.
× Of course, I like taking picture of beautiful scenes, so I really like take photos of flowers in my daily life.
✓ Of course, I like taking pictures of beautiful scenes, so I really like taking photos of flowers in my daily life.
'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' because it refers to multiple images. 'Like take' should be 'like taking' to maintain parallel verb form.
× Whenever I see a flower or a vase of flower, it's really cute things and I always take taking a picture of it.
✓ Whenever I see a flower or a vase of flowers, they're really cute things and I always take a picture of it.
'Vase of flower' should be 'vase of flowers' to be plural. 'It's' should be 'they're' to agree with plural 'flower or vase of flowers'. 'Take taking' is incorrect; it should be 'take'.
× Yes, it's a way to express love. I really like to send flowers to my family, my friends and beloved ones. It can strengthen our relationship and really cute.
✓ Yes, it's a way to express love. I really like to send flowers to my family, my friends, and beloved ones. It can strengthen our relationships and is really cute.
'Relationship' should be plural 'relationships' because it refers to multiple relationships. The phrase 'and really cute' is incomplete; it should be 'and is really cute' to be a complete sentence.