Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn nên sử dụng số nhiều cho từ 'flowers' và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'so bad'. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn, đồng thời tránh lặp từ và diễn đạt mơ hồ.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really love flowers because their colors and fragrance help me feel relaxed and comfortable when I am stressed or feeling down.

Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và trật tự từ, ví dụ như 'many people good love flowers' không đúng. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời nên có cấu trúc rõ ràng hơn và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Hãy sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu hoàn chỉnh.

Ví dụ: Yes, I know many people who love flowers. For example, my mother is very passionate about gardening and has a big garden where she grows different kinds of flowers such as roses and lilies. She enjoys taking care of them.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp nghiêm trọng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers planted in my city. For example, my school has a big garden where flowers and trees are grown.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng từ đúng nghĩa, ví dụ 'shower' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Ngoài ra, câu trả lời cần rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng liên từ để kết nối ý. Hãy nói rõ hơn về thói quen của bạn.

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I take photos of flowers in my daily life. When I see a beautiful flower, I take a photo and post it on social media or send it to my friends.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn bị thiếu phần kết thúc và có lỗi ngữ pháp như 'other' thay vì 'others'. Bạn nên hoàn thiện câu trả lời, sử dụng danh sách các dịp một cách rõ ràng và thêm chi tiết cụ thể.

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions like birthdays, Valentine's Day, and Women's Day. It is a common way to express love and appreciation.

× Yes, I really love flower because their colors and perfume are so relaxed and comfortable with me when I feel stressed or so bad.

✓ Yes, I really love flowers because their colors and perfume are so relaxing and comfortable to me when I feel stressed or bad.

The word 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the plural possessive pronoun 'their'. Also, 'relaxed' is an adjective describing a person, but here it should be 'relaxing' to describe the effect of colors and perfume. 'Comfortable with me' is incorrect; it should be 'comfortable to me' or 'comforting to me'. 'So bad' is informal and should be 'bad'.

× Yes, I know many people good love flowers.

✓ Yes, I know many people who love flowers.

The phrase 'many people good love flowers' is incorrect. 'Good' is unnecessary and 'who' is needed to connect 'people' and the relative clause 'love flowers'.

× For example, my mother is very passionate about gardening and has the a big garden where she grows different kinds of flowers such as rose and lilies.

✓ For example, my mother is very passionate about gardening and has a big garden where she grows different kinds of flowers such as roses and lilies.

The article 'the' before 'a big garden' is redundant; only one article is needed. 'Rose' should be plural 'roses' to match 'lilies' and because multiple kinds are implied.

× She enjoy taking care.

✓ She enjoys taking care of them.

The verb 'enjoy' must agree with the third person singular subject 'She', so it should be 'enjoys'. Also, the phrase is incomplete; 'taking care' should be followed by an object, e.g., 'taking care of them'.

× Yes, in my city flower are planted in the past and.

✓ Yes, in my city flowers have been planted in the past.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to agree with 'are'. The sentence is incomplete and awkward; 'have been planted' is better to indicate past action with present relevance.

× In my school has a big garden to plant flower and trees.

✓ My school has a big garden where flowers and trees are planted.

The original sentence lacks a subject before 'has'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and correctness.

× Yes, sometime I take photo or shower in my daily life.

✓ Yes, sometimes I take photos or showers in my daily life.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Photo' and 'shower' should be plural to indicate multiple instances.

× When I catch up a beautiful flower, I will take photo with it and post in social media or send it from my friends.

✓ When I come across a beautiful flower, I will take a photo of it and post it on social media or send it to my friends.

'Catch up' is incorrect; 'come across' is appropriate. 'Take photo with it' should be 'take a photo of it'. 'Post in social media' should be 'post it on social media'. 'Send it from my friends' should be 'send it to my friends'.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to other in special occasion like birthdays, Valentine's Day, on Women's Day and they also.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on special occasions like birthdays, Valentine's Day, Women's Day, and so on.

'Other' should be 'others' to indicate other people. 'In special occasion' should be 'on special occasions'. The sentence ending 'and they also' is incomplete and should be replaced with 'and so on' or omitted.