Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，并注意冠词和单复数的使用。可以更清晰地表达原因和举例。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they make me feel happy. For example, I like lilies since my mother's English name is Lily. Also, my city hosts a tulip park every year that attracts many visitors.

Gợi ý: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，建议使用简单句子直接回答问题，并用连词连接补充细节，避免词序错误。

Ví dụ: My mother loves flowers the most in my family. She likes lilies because her English name is Lily, and they symbolize purity, which she appreciates.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，但存在语法错误和用词不当，建议注意动词形式和介词的正确使用，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, there is a flower park near where I live, and I enjoy going there. It is very popular, especially in summer when it becomes a tulip park that attracts many visitors.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误严重，句子结构混乱，建议简化表达，明确时间和地点，避免重复和错误的词汇使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers at my campus and at home. For example, every April, pink flowers bloom on campus, and many students, including me, enjoy taking pictures of them.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不清，句子不完整且语法错误多，建议用简单句直接表达观点，并用连词连接原因和结果。

Ví dụ: Yes, sending flowers is a long-standing tradition in my country. People send flowers like roses to make others happy and to express good wishes.

× Yes, I love flowers because it'll bring me a good feeling of happiness.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they bring me a good feeling of happiness.

这里的主语是复数flowers，应该用复数形式的动词bring，而不是缩写形式it'll（it will），主谓不一致。

× Additionally, there is a Tulip parks in my city every year it attracts many visitors to take a visit.

✓ Additionally, there is a Tulip park in my city; every year it attracts many visitors to visit.

Tulip parks是复数形式，但前面用了单数is，应该用单数Tulip park。句子中“to take a visit”表达不自然，改为“to visit”。

× It's my mom who love flowers most at my home.

✓ It's my mom who loves flowers most at my home.

关系代词who指代单数mom，谓语动词love应加s，变为loves，保持主谓一致。

× Not only release is her English name but also they symbolized purity.

✓ Not only is Release her English name, but it also symbolizes purity.

句子结构混乱，正确结构应为“Not only is... but also...”，且Release是单数，谓语用is和symbolizes。

× Gorgeous both properties is she appreciate so she.

✓ She appreciates both gorgeous properties.

原句语序混乱，正确表达应为“她欣赏这两个美丽的特性”，即She appreciates both gorgeous properties。

× Yes, there is a flower park near my living area which I really enjoy going there.

✓ Yes, there is a flower park near my living area which I really enjoy going to.

动词短语“enjoy going”后应接介词to表示方向，不能用there。

× It will turn into a Tulip park, which attracts a lot of people to visiting there.

✓ It will turn into a Tulip park, which attracts a lot of people to visit there.

动词不定式to后应接动词原形，不能用动名词visiting。

× Yes, I will take photos of flowers in my daily life and my campus or at home.

✓ Yes, I take photos of flowers in my daily life, at my campus, or at home.

表达习惯上用一般现在时表示日常习惯，且地点表达应清晰分开。

× For instance, every year in April I in my at my campus, the pink flowers will be bloomed so many students, including me will come into the Pinterest to.

✓ For instance, every year in April at my campus, the pink flowers bloom, so many students, including me, come to take photos.

原句语序混乱，时态应用一般现在时描述习惯动作，bloom为不及物动词不加被动形式，Pinterest用词不当，改为take photos。

× Yes, it's a very old tradition in my country to send flowers to others due to seeing that send roses, others and beautiful things left your hands.

✓ Yes, it's a very old tradition in my country to send flowers to others because sending roses and other beautiful things shows your feelings.

句子结构不完整且表达不清，改为因果关系清晰的句子。

× Which means sending flowers not only can make other people feel happy but also represent a good.

✓ This means sending flowers can not only make other people feel happy but also represent good wishes.

句子开头不能用Which，且表达不完整，补充完整意思。