Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and contains some errors, such as 'rose is my favorite food' which should be 'rose is my favorite flower'. Try to be more precise and avoid redundancy. Also, keep your answer within 5 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers very much because they refresh my mind and bring me inner peace. Among all, the red rose is my favorite flower because of its beauty and fragrance.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally good but contains some grammatical errors like 'loves flower' should be 'love flowers' and 'she love' should be 'she loves'. Use linking words like 'for example' to make your answer more coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I know many people who love flowers. For example, my girlfriend Nadia is very keen on collecting flowers, mainly marigolds and roses. She especially loves pink roses because pink is her favorite color.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but can be improved by correcting grammar and using linking words. For example, use 'although' to contrast the lack of a garden near your home with the nearby garden. Also, say 'hundreds of species of flowers' instead of 'species of flower'.

Ví dụ: Although there isn't a flower garden in the place where I live, there is one about a 10-minute walk from my home. It has more than hundreds of species of flowers.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes like 'I don't be able to see' should be 'I don't usually see'. Try to make your sentences more natural and concise. Use linking words like 'however' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I don't usually see flowers in my daily life; however, whenever I do, I immediately take photos because I love photography. Taking pictures of flowers is something I really enjoy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but contains some errors and redundancy. For example, 'or or' should be 'or', and 'as a greetings' should be 'as a greeting'. Try to use linking words like 'such as' to list occasions and be more concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to others on various occasions such as birthdays, the birth of a baby, or promotions. Sending flowers is a common way to congratulate and show good wishes.

× when I see any kinds of flowers it refresh my mind and gives me a fulfillment in my inner mind

✓ when I see any kind of flower it refreshes my mind and gives me a fulfillment in my inner mind

The phrase 'any kinds of flowers' is incorrect because 'kinds' is plural and should be used with plural nouns, but 'any' here is better followed by the singular 'kind' to refer to an unspecified type. Also, 'refresh' should be 'refreshes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× it refresh my mind and gives me a fulfillment in my inner mind

✓ it refreshes my mind and gives me a fulfillment in my inner mind

The verb 'refresh' must be in the third person singular form 'refreshes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× rose is my favorite food. Favorite flower mainly the red rose

✓ rose is my favorite flower, mainly the red rose

The word 'food' is incorrect here; it should be 'flower' to match the context. Also, the sentence structure is fragmented and needs to be combined for clarity.

× I know many people who loves flower

✓ I know many people who love flowers

The verb 'love' should be plural to agree with the plural subject 'people'. Also, 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the context.

× she love pink rose because pink is her favorite color

✓ she loves pink roses because pink is her favorite color

The verb 'love' must be in third person singular form 'loves' to agree with 'she'. Also, 'pink rose' should be plural 'pink roses' to be consistent with general preference.

× there are more than hundreds of species of flower

✓ there are more than a hundred species of flowers

The phrase 'more than hundreds' is incorrect; it should be 'more than a hundred'. Also, 'species of flower' should be 'species of flowers' for consistency.

× I don't be able to see flowers

✓ I am not able to see flowers

The phrase 'don't be able to' is incorrect. The correct form is 'am not able to' to express inability in present tense.

× Even if there is any promotion of someone then we definitely send him flowers as a greetings and for congratulating him

✓ Even if there is a promotion of someone, we definitely send him flowers as greetings and to congratulate him

The conjunction 'then' is unnecessary after 'even if'. Also, 'a greetings' should be 'greetings' without article, and 'for congratulating him' should be 'to congratulate him' for correct infinitive usage.