Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est un peu redondante et manque de structure claire. Essayez de commencer par une phrase directe, puis ajoutez des détails spécifiques en utilisant des mots de liaison pour rendre votre réponse plus fluide et naturelle.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially tulips and lilacs. I find their colors very beautiful and they always brighten up my mood. For example, tulips come in many vibrant shades that can instantly make a room feel more cheerful.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est confuse et grammaticalement incorrecte, ce qui nuit à la clarté. Concentrez-vous sur une réponse simple et claire, avec une structure correcte et des exemples précis.

Ví dụ: Yes, many women I know love receiving flowers because it shows affection. For instance, when a boyfriend gives flowers, it often makes the recipient feel appreciated and loved.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est un peu confuse et répétitive. Essayez d'organiser vos idées clairement avec des phrases simples et utilisez des mots de liaison pour améliorer la cohérence.

Ví dụ: I live in the countryside, so there are many flowers around me, more than in the city. However, in parks or city areas, flowers are less common compared to rural places.

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Ví dụ: Although I enjoy photography, I rarely take pictures of flowers. I prefer to receive flowers as gifts because I like to appreciate their beauty in person rather than through photos.

Gợi ý: Votre réponse est un peu désorganisée et contient des erreurs. Essayez de structurer votre réponse en commençant par une idée principale, suivie d'exemples précis, et évitez les hésitations.

Ví dụ: In my country, people usually send flowers to loved ones on special occasions like Christmas, Valentine's Day, or birthdays. However, sending flowers on regular days is less common and depends on personal preferences.

× My favorite one I think is tulips or maybe Lila's.

✓ My favorite ones, I think, are tulips or maybe lilacs.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes singular and plural forms. 'My favorite one' suggests a singular noun, but 'tulips' and 'Lila's' (likely 'lilacs') are plural. The correction uses 'ones' to match the plural nouns and corrects 'Lila's' to 'lilacs' for clarity.

× I absolutely love it.

✓ I absolutely love them.

The pronoun 'it' is singular, but the antecedents 'tulips' and 'lilacs' are plural. Therefore, the plural pronoun 'them' should be used to agree with the plural nouns.

× Actually, I think that's a big part of girls and women act really enjoy receive flowers because of the affection there is behind this like to illustrate when you receive flowers from your boyfriend.

✓ Actually, I think that's a big part of why girls and women really enjoy receiving flowers because of the affection behind it, like when you receive flowers from your boyfriend.

The original sentence has several issues: 'act' is unnecessary and incorrect here; 'enjoy receive' should be 'enjoy receiving' to use the correct verb form; 'there is behind this' is awkward and should be 'behind it'; the sentence structure is confusing and needs rephrasing for clarity.

× I don't live in a big city like more in the countryside, so of course there are many flowers, more than in the city for example.

✓ I don't live in a big city but more in the countryside, so of course there are more flowers than in the city, for example.

The phrase 'like more in the countryside' is incorrect; 'but more in the countryside' is appropriate. Also, 'many flowers, more than in the city' is better expressed as 'more flowers than in the city' to compare quantities correctly.

× But I don't think that there are many flowers as as it they are, especially in the park or around the city, but not as much.

✓ But I don't think that there are as many flowers, especially in the park or around the city, not as much.

The phrase 'many flowers as as it they are' is incorrect and confusing. The correct comparative form is 'as many flowers' to compare quantities properly.

× Even if I really enjoy taking photos, I don't think that I have the habits of taking once about flower.

✓ Even though I really enjoy taking photos, I don't think I have the habit of taking photos of flowers.

The phrase 'the habits of taking once about flower' is incorrect. 'Habit' is singular here, and 'taking photos of flowers' is the correct expression. 'Once' is misplaced and should be removed.

× I think because I prefer receiving receive them than to photograph them.

✓ I think it's because I prefer receiving them rather than photographing them.

The original sentence incorrectly mixes 'receiving' and 'receive' and uses 'to photograph' instead of the gerund 'photographing' after 'prefer'. The corrected sentence uses consistent gerund forms after 'prefer' and 'rather than'.

× People mostly send flowers to the one they love, especially on important days like at Christmas, at the Valentine's Day or even at the birthdays.

✓ People mostly send flowers to the ones they love, especially on important days like Christmas, Valentine's Day, or even birthdays.

'The one they love' should be plural 'the ones they love' to match general meaning. Also, articles 'at' before holidays are unnecessary and 'the birthdays' should be 'birthdays' without 'the'.