Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“add some beautiful”应为“add some beauty”，“make me feel happy and unwanted”表达不清。建议注意语法准确性，避免用词错误，同时回答应更简洁自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they add beauty to my home and make me feel happy. For example, when I see beautiful flowers, I can forget my worries and relax.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法结构混乱，句子冗长且不连贯，如“my neighborhood she has”应简化为“my neighbor has”。建议简化句子结构，使用连词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, my neighbor has a big garden full of various beautiful flowers, which create a pleasant and wonderful atmosphere. The flowers form a vivid and breathtaking picture.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和句子未完成，表达不够清晰。建议注意句子完整性，避免重复和语法错误，使用恰当的连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many different kinds of flowers in my city because the warm weather is suitable for their growth. Moreover, I often see workers watering them to keep them healthy.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不完整，如“in on my social media that some that”不通顺。建议简化表达，确保句子完整且逻辑清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers in my daily life. For example, when I see beautiful flowers, I capture the moment with my camera and share the pictures on my social media.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整，但存在用词错误，如“see the flowers”应为“send flowers”，“convene good wishes”表达不准确。建议注意词汇准确性，避免用词错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to express affection and good wishes. For example, during festivals like the Spring Festival or weddings, flowers are given as symbols of celebration and happiness. They are also sent to cheer someone up or show appreciation.

× I particularly enjoy flowers because it can not only add some beautiful in my home but also it can make me feel happy and unwanted.

✓ I particularly enjoy flowers because they can not only add some beauty to my home but also make me feel happy and wanted.

句中“add some beautiful”中“beautiful”是形容词，应该用名词“beauty”来表示“美丽”。此外，主语“flowers”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“can”。“unwanted”意思是“不受欢迎的”，与语境不符，应改为“wanted”表示“被需要的”。

× I particularly enjoy flowers because it can not only add some beautiful in my home but also it can make me feel happy and unwanted.

✓ I particularly enjoy flowers because they can not only add some beauty to my home but also make me feel happy and wanted.

“flowers”是复数，代词应使用复数形式“they”，而不是单数“it”。

× I particularly enjoy flowers because it can not only add some beautiful in my home but also it can make me feel happy and unwanted.

✓ I particularly enjoy flowers because they can not only add some beauty to my home but also make me feel happy and wanted.

“add some beautiful”中“beautiful”是形容词，不能与“some”连用，应使用名词“beauty”表示“美丽”。

× For example, when I see the beautiful flowers, I can forget my tear and my work.

✓ For example, when I see the beautiful flowers, I can forget my tears and my work.

“tear”应使用复数形式“tears”，表示“眼泪”，因为通常是复数。

× Yes, of course, my neighborhood she has a big garden and there are so many various beautiful flowers in her garden where the atmosphere is pleasant and wonderful.

✓ Yes, of course, my neighbor has a big garden and there are so many various beautiful flowers in her garden where the atmosphere is pleasant and wonderful.

“my neighborhood she”中“neighborhood”指“邻居”应为“neighbor”，且不需要重复主语“she”。

× The beautiful flowers really com compose of the umm vivid and breathtaking picture.

✓ The beautiful flowers really compose a vivid and breathtaking picture.

“compose of”是不正确的搭配，正确用法是“compose”直接接宾语。

× There are various and a lot of flowers in my city because the weather in my city is warm and is suitable for the flowers to be growing and what's more, I always see that some workers water them and.

✓ There are various flowers and a lot of them in my city because the weather is warm and suitable for flowers to grow. What's more, I always see some workers watering them.

“various and a lot of flowers”表达不自然，应分开表达。动词“to be growing”应改为动词不定式“to grow”。句尾“and”多余。

× There are various and a lot of flowers in my city because the weather in my city is warm and is suitable for the flowers to be growing and what's more, I always see that some workers water them and.

✓ There are various flowers and a lot of them in my city because the weather is warm and suitable for flowers to grow. What's more, I always see some workers watering them.

“see some workers water them”中“water”应改为现在分词“watering”，表示正在进行的动作。

× For example when I see the beautiful flowers I capture the wonderful moment with my camera and then I will share the beautiful pictures in on my social media that some that.

✓ For example, when I see the beautiful flowers, I capture the wonderful moment with my camera and then I share the beautiful pictures on my social media.

“share the beautiful pictures in on my social media”中“in on”重复，应只用“on”。

× For example when I see the beautiful flowers I capture the wonderful moment with my camera and then I will share the beautiful pictures in on my social media that some that.

✓ For example, when I see the beautiful flowers, I capture the wonderful moment with my camera and then I share the beautiful pictures on my social media.

句尾“that some that”无意义，应删除。

× People in my country often see the flowers to express their affection and convene good wishes.

✓ People in my country often send flowers to express their affection and convey good wishes.

“see the flowers”应为“send flowers”，表示“送花”；“convene good wishes”应为“convey good wishes”，表示“传达祝福”。