Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and concise by avoiding filler words like 'umm' and 'uh', and correct grammatical errors such as 'I'm a flowers' to 'I think flowers'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really love flowers because they give positive feelings and can cheer people up. They are lovely and pretty, and their presence in daily life brightens the atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words like 'and' or 'so' to connect ideas logically. Also, be specific about who loves flowers and what you do together.

Ví dụ: Yes, many of my friends and family love flowers. We often take trips together to enjoy nature, especially visiting mountains to see cherry blossoms and other beautiful flowers.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more coherent by reducing repetition and using linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Also, correct grammar mistakes such as 'all the year' to 'all year round'.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live because I live beside a park that has flowers in every season, so I get to see them all year round.

Gợi ý: Try to avoid filler words and improve grammar, for example, 'can makes' should be 'can make'. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of beautiful flowers because capturing these small beauties in daily life makes me feel happy and grateful.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure by using linking words like 'and' and 'also'. Correct grammar errors such as 'is also quite frequent present' to 'it is also quite common to present'. Be more specific about occasions when flowers are given.

Ví dụ: Yes, flowers are common in my country. People often bring flowers when visiting friends in hospital, and it is also quite common to present flowers to celebrate a newly opened store.

× I think I'm a flowers can give a positive feelings and kind of provide people with the, umm, vibration and it it can cheers people up because it is so lovely and pretty, uh, presents in our daily life.

✓ I think flowers can give positive feelings and kind of provide people with the, umm, vibration and it can cheer people up because they are so lovely and pretty, uh, presents in our daily life.

The phrase 'I'm a flowers' is incorrect because 'flowers' is plural and cannot be preceded by 'a'. Also, 'a positive feelings' is incorrect because 'feelings' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'It it can cheers' is wrong because 'cheers' should be 'cheer' to agree with singular 'it'. Additionally, 'presents' should be plural 'presents' or better rephrased as 'presence' or 'things' depending on intended meaning. The sentence needs plural agreement and correct article usage.

× Oh yes, umm, lots of my friend loves flowers and my family loves flowers too and we often, uh, take a trip together and we love some nature and we love to go into the mountains and see all the flowers like the uh, cherry blossoms or other beautiful flowers.

✓ Oh yes, umm, lots of my friends love flowers and my family loves flowers too and we often, uh, take trips together and we love nature and we love to go into the mountains and see all the flowers like the uh, cherry blossoms or other beautiful flowers.

'Lots of my friend' is incorrect because 'friend' should be plural 'friends' after 'lots of'. 'Friends love' is correct plural subject-verb agreement. 'Take a trip' can be plural 'take trips' to match 'often'. 'Love some nature' is better as 'love nature' because 'nature' is uncountable and does not take 'some' here.

× Yes, there are a lot of flowers around the place I live, so they actually I live beside the park, so the park always has a lot of flowers in every season, so I get to see a lot of flowers all the year.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers around the place I live. Actually, I live beside the park, so the park always has a lot of flowers in every season, so I get to see a lot of flowers all year round.

The original sentence is a run-on and confusing. 'They actually I live beside the park' is incorrect and unclear. It should be split into two sentences for clarity. 'All the year' is better expressed as 'all year round' in natural English. Proper sentence structure and punctuation improve clarity.

× Oh yes, umm, when I see beautiful flowers, I would often, uh, take out my phones and take a snap. And I think that uh, uh, capture these kind of umm, small beauty in daily lives can makes me feel really happy and grateful for umm, what I have.

✓ Oh yes, umm, when I see beautiful flowers, I would often, uh, take out my phone and take a snap. And I think that capturing this kind of, umm, small beauty in daily life can make me feel really happy and grateful for, umm, what I have.

'Phones' should be singular 'phone' unless multiple phones are intended. 'Capture' should be 'capturing' to function as a gerund subject. 'These kind of' is incorrect; 'this kind of' is correct because 'kind' is singular. 'Small beauty' is uncountable and should not be plural. 'Daily lives' should be 'daily life' as a general concept. 'Can makes' should be 'can make' because modal verbs are followed by base form of verbs.

× Yes, I think flowers are a common presence in my country and it is very common to bring a flower with you if you are going to visit a friend in a hospital and is also quite frequent present if you are going to send it to a newly opened store.

✓ Yes, I think flowers are a common presence in my country and it is very common to bring a flower with you if you are going to visit a friend in hospital and it is also quite a frequent present if you are going to send it to a newly opened store.

In British English, 'visit a friend in hospital' is correct without 'a'. The phrase 'is also quite frequent present' is missing the subject 'it' and the article 'a' before 'frequent present'. Adding 'it is also quite a frequent present' corrects the sentence. Preposition and article usage are corrected for natural English.