Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然，但存在语法错误和重复（"They they"），且表达不够简洁。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并用更地道的表达方式描述花的意义。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they have pleasant scents and often carry special meanings. For example, roses symbolize romance, and receiving one from my boyfriend always makes me very happy.

Gợi ý: 回答内容具体，但表达不够流畅，存在语法错误（"according to its difference"不明确）。建议使用更准确的表达，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: My mother loves flowers a lot. She grows orchids at home and other flowers at her workplace. She takes care of them daily; for example, she waters them once or twice a week depending on the type.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法错误和表达不清（如"flowers ponders"），句子过长且缺乏逻辑连接。建议简化句子，注意语法，并使用连接词使表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: No, there are not many flowers at home because my grandmother lives with us and she is allergic to pollen. Therefore, only my mother plants some small trees in her bedroom, and there are no flowers in other rooms.

Gợi ý: 回答表达不够自然，存在语法错误（"I haven't pay attention"），句子结构重复。建议简化表达，注意时态和语法，避免重复。

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos of flowers, but not regularly. I usually take pictures when I see many beautiful flowers at my college or home, although I don't pay much attention to them.

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰，存在语法和表达错误（如"like all trees to present and express"），逻辑不连贯。建议明确表达观点，使用简单句并注意语法。

Ví dụ: I'm not completely sure, but I think people in China often send flowers to show appreciation. For example, flowers are commonly given as gifts to express gratitude or respect.

× Yes, I love flowers because they smell very nice and many flowers have their own meanings embodied in them, such as rose.

✓ Yes, I love flowers because they smell very nice and many flowers have their own meanings embodied in them, such as roses.

这里“rose”应使用复数形式“roses”，因为前面提到的是“many flowers”，表示多种花，举例时应使用复数。

× They they symbolize Roman romance and when a boyfriend took a rose to me, I will be filled with happiness.

✓ They symbolize Roman romance and when a boyfriend takes a rose to me, I am filled with happiness.

“symbolize”应使用一般现在时，因为描述的是普遍事实；“took”应改为一般现在时“takes”，与条件句保持时态一致；“will be filled”改为一般现在时“am filled”，表达习惯性动作。

× She plants orchids at home and other flowers in her workplace.

✓ She plants orchids at home and other flowers at her workplace.

“workplace”前应使用介词“at”表示地点。

× She takes care of them every day. For instance, she will water them once a week or twice a day, according to its difference.

✓ She takes care of them every day. For instance, she waters them once a week or twice a day, depending on their differences.

“will water”改为一般现在时“waters”，表示习惯动作；“according to its difference”表达不准确，改为“depending on their differences”，更符合语境。

× No, there aren't a lot of flowers at my home because my grandma live with us and she is allergic to flowers ponders so only my mother plant some all trees in her bedroom and there aren't any other flowers in the living room, kitchen or any other place at my home.

✓ No, there aren't a lot of flowers at my home because my grandma lives with us and she is allergic to flower pollen, so only my mother plants some small trees in her bedroom and there aren't any other flowers in the living room, kitchen or any other place at my home.

“grandma live”应为“grandma lives”，主谓一致；“flowers ponders”应为“flower pollen”，拼写错误；“plant”应为“plants”，主谓一致；“some all trees”表达不清，改为“some small trees”。

× Yes, I will take photos of them in my life, but it's not on a regular basis because only when I see a lot of beautiful flowers in my college or at my home, I will take a photo of that.

✓ Yes, I take photos of them in my life, but not on a regular basis because only when I see a lot of beautiful flowers in my college or at my home, I take a photo of them.

描述习惯动作应使用一般现在时，故“will take”改为“take”；“a photo of that”改为“a photo of them”，指代花。

× But I won't do it regularly because I haven't pay attention to them very much like my.

✓ But I don't do it regularly because I haven't paid attention to them very much like my mother.

“won't do”改为一般现在时“don't do”，表示习惯；“haven't pay”应为“haven't paid”，过去分词形式；句尾不完整，补充“mother”。

× I'm not quite sure, but I think yes, because in China, if we appreciate your values, we will implicitly send flowers, like all trees to present and express. Express our appreciation to you and we will send flowers to you as a gift.

✓ I'm not quite sure, but I think yes, because in China, if we appreciate someone's values, we will implicitly send flowers, like orchids, to present and express our appreciation to them, and we will send flowers as a gift.

“your values”改为“someone's values”，避免直接对话中的错误指代；“all trees”应为“orchids”或具体花名；句子结构不完整，合并并调整表达，使其更通顺。