Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical errors and unclear words like 'pregnancy'. Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and keep your answer clear and concise. For example, say 'I love different kinds of flowers such as roses, sunflowers, and tulips, especially tulips because of their shape and variety of colors.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers very much. I like different kinds of flowers such as roses, sunflowers, and tulips. Especially, I like tulips because of their beautiful shape and variety of colors.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases like 'in our trees of flowers'. Try to use simple and correct sentences, and add linking words for coherence. For example, say 'Yes, many people around me love flowers, including my parents and friends. My dad has made a small flower garden near our house, so he enjoys seeing the flowers when he walks in the morning.'

Ví dụ: Yes, many people around me love flowers, including my parents and friends. My dad has made a small flower garden near our house, so he enjoys seeing the flowers when he walks in the morning.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear expressions like 'make me so speechful'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer vocabulary. For example, say 'Yes, there are many flowers around where I live, especially on my rooftop where there is a small garden. The flowers and their fragrance make me feel peaceful.'

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers around where I live, especially on my rooftop where there is a small garden. The flowers and their fragrance make me feel peaceful.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows interest but has grammatical mistakes and unclear words like 'pregnancy of flowers'. Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially when I pass a flower shop. The pictures look beautiful, and the place feels very peaceful. If possible, I would love to spend a whole day there.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, especially when I pass a flower shop. The pictures look beautiful, and the place feels very peaceful. If possible, I would love to spend a whole day there.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'bring up peaceful'. Try to use correct grammar and clearer expressions. For example, say 'Yes, people often send flowers on occasions like weddings, birthdays, or when visiting someone who is sick. Sending flowers is a respectful and kind gesture.'

Ví dụ: Yes, people often send flowers on occasions like weddings, birthdays, or when visiting someone who is sick. Sending flowers is a respectful and kind gesture.

× I do love flowers and I love different kind of flowers like roses, sunflower, Tulip, especially Tulip because of its pregnancy and and the shape and the color varieties is just awesome.

✓ I do love flowers and I love different kinds of flowers like roses, sunflowers, tulips, especially tulips because of their fragrance and the shape and the color varieties are just awesome.

The word 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. 'Sunflower' and 'Tulip' should be pluralized to 'sunflowers' and 'tulips' to match the plural context. 'Pregnancy' is incorrect; the intended word is 'fragrance'. Also, 'varieties' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' instead of 'is'. These corrections ensure subject-verb agreement and correct plural forms.

× My dad make a small garden in our trees of flowers so he when he walk in the morning he can see this flower and my mom also.

✓ My dad makes a small garden with trees of flowers so when he walks in the morning he can see these flowers, and my mom can too.

The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'dad' (third person singular). 'Walk' should be 'walks' for the same reason. 'This flower' should be 'these flowers' to match the plural context. The sentence structure is also improved for clarity.

× Yes there is a lot of flower around me especially in my rooftop there were there is a mini garden and whenever I walk in the roof the there the flower, fragrance and everything make me so speechful.

✓ Yes, there are a lot of flowers around me, especially on my rooftop where there is a mini garden, and whenever I walk on the roof, the flowers, fragrance, and everything make me feel so peaceful.

'There is' should be 'there are' to agree with the plural noun 'flowers'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'In my rooftop' should be 'on my rooftop' as 'on' is the correct preposition for rooftops. 'There were there is' is redundant and confusing; corrected to 'where there is'. 'Make me so speechful' is incorrect; likely intended 'make me feel so peaceful'.

× Of course I take photos of flower in my daily life, especially when I pass a flower shop, I always take a picture and that picture really looks so good and the place is so peaceful.

✓ Of course, I take photos of flowers in my daily life, especially when I pass a flower shop. I always take a picture, and that picture really looks so good, and the place is so peaceful.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the plural context. Added commas and periods for better sentence structure and clarity.

× I if I could, I will spend my whole day in that place with pregnancy of flowers.

✓ If I could, I would spend my whole day in that place with the fragrance of flowers.

'Pregnancy' is incorrect; the intended word is 'fragrance'. Also, 'I if I could' is corrected to 'If I could'. 'Will' is changed to 'would' to match the conditional mood.

× Yes, people send flower to others when it's their wedding anniversary or birthday or any occasion is or anyone who is sick they of when they visited them.

✓ Yes, people send flowers to others when it's their wedding anniversary, birthday, or any occasion, or when someone is sick and they visit them.

'Flower' should be plural 'flowers' to match the plural context. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× They take flowers with them is really a bring up peaceful and it's also respectful.

✓ They take flowers with them; it really brings peace and is also respectful.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Corrected to a clear sentence with proper subject-verb agreement and meaning.