Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases that affect clarity. Try to use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: I absolutely love flowers because they are vibrant and a great way to express emotions on special occasions like birthdays or anniversaries. For instance, flowers not only enhance appearances but also create warm and inviting atmospheres.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some unclear vocabulary (e.g., 'lorses'). Use correct verb agreement and precise vocabulary. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Definitely yes. My mother loves gardening and has a beautiful flower garden. We particularly enjoy roses and sunflowers because their bright colors always lift our spirits and make us feel more connected to nature.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but contains minor grammatical errors. Use correct article usage and verb tenses. Adding linking words can improve flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many parks and gardens in my area filled with flowers. I enjoy taking walks there because the natural beauty helps me unwind and feel emotionally refreshed after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good content but some phrases are unclear or incorrect (e.g., 'gathering the beauty flowers'). Use clearer expressions and correct grammar. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement.

Ví dụ: Absolutely, I enjoy taking photos of beautiful flowers during my work. I often share these photos with my family, especially my mom, which makes me feel proud of preserving nature's beauty.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and plural nouns. Also, add linking words for better coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, people usually give flowers for special occasions. For example, they give flowers on Valentine's Day, weddings, or important ceremonies. Sending flowers is a proper way to show love and respect.

× I absolutely love flowers because they vibrant and flowers are a great way to express emotion and surveyed occasional birthdays or anniversaries.

✓ I absolutely love flowers because they are vibrant and flowers are a great way to express emotion and celebrate occasional birthdays or anniversaries.

The sentence is missing the verb 'are' after 'they' to correctly form the present tense. Also, 'surveyed' is incorrect in this context and should be replaced with 'celebrate' to convey the intended meaning of marking special occasions.

× For instance, facilities only lead not only enhance authorities appear or bloom, but also create warm and inventing atmospheres.

✓ For instance, flowers not only enhance appearance or bloom, but also create warm and inviting atmospheres.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect words such as 'facilities only lead' and 'authorities appear' which do not fit the context. Replacing them with 'flowers' and correcting 'inventing' to 'inviting' clarifies the meaning and corrects the adjective usage.

× My mother love gardening and has beautiful flowers garden.

✓ My mother loves gardening and has a beautiful flower garden.

The verb 'love' should be in third person singular form 'loves' to agree with the singular subject 'My mother'. Also, 'flowers garden' should be 'flower garden' and include the article 'a' for correct noun phrase structure.

× We particularly enjoy lorses and sunflowers due to their sheer color which always leave our spirit and make us feel more connected to nature.

✓ We particularly enjoy roses and sunflowers due to their sheer color which always leaves our spirits and makes us feel more connected to nature.

The word 'lorses' is a misspelling of 'roses'. The verbs 'leave' and 'make' should be in third person singular form 'leaves' and 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'color'. Also, 'spirit' should be plural 'spirits' to match the plural pronoun 'our'.

× I enjoy taking walk there because the nature beauty helped me unwind and feel emotionally refreshed after a busy day.

✓ I enjoy taking walks there because the beauty of nature helps me unwind and feel emotionally refreshed after a busy day.

The phrase 'taking walk' should be plural 'taking walks' to be grammatically correct. 'Nature beauty' should be 'the beauty of nature' for proper noun phrase structure. 'Helped' should be present tense 'helps' to match the present tense 'enjoy' and the habitual action.

× Absolutely, I enjoy gathering the beauty flowers during my work.

✓ Absolutely, I enjoy capturing the beauty of flowers during my work.

The phrase 'gathering the beauty flowers' is awkward and incorrect. 'Capturing the beauty of flowers' is a more natural expression, especially if referring to taking photos. Also, 'beauty flowers' should be 'beauty of flowers' to correctly modify the noun.

× I often share this photo with my family, especially my mom, that make me feel proud of preserving nature's beauty.

✓ I often share these photos with my family, especially my mom, which make me feel proud of preserving nature's beauty.

'This photo' should be plural 'these photos' if referring to multiple photos. The relative pronoun 'that' should be 'which' to refer to the photos. Also, 'make' agrees with plural 'photos'.

× Yeah, flowers are probably give for a special occasion.

✓ Yeah, flowers are probably given for a special occasion.

The verb 'give' should be in past participle form 'given' to correctly form the passive voice with 'are'. This is a modal verb usage issue related to passive construction.

× For example, they give flowers on Valentine's Day, wedding or important ceremonies.

✓ For example, they give flowers on Valentine's Day, weddings, or important ceremonies.

The word 'wedding' should be plural 'weddings' to match the plural form of 'ceremonies' and maintain parallel structure in the list.

× Sending flower is the proper way to show love and respect.

✓ Sending flowers is the proper way to show love and respect.

The noun 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' because the action of sending flowers generally involves more than one flower, and it is the common collocation.