Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more concise and natural. Avoid redundancy such as repeating 'I love flowers' and improve sentence structure for better flow. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. I have a beautiful garden behind my house with a variety of flowers like lilies and tulips. I really enjoy their fragrance and make sure to water them every day.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that affect clarity. Focus on correct verb forms and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to make your answer coherent and add specific details about how your mother cares for the flowers.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers and takes great care of them. She has both indoor and outdoor plants, and tending to them helps her relax in her free time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but could be more direct and natural. Avoid repeating the question and improve sentence cohesion by using linking words. Also, specify more about the flowers in your area beyond your garden if possible.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live, including roses, tulips, lilies, and dahlias in my garden. Their beautiful fragrance makes the atmosphere very pleasant, and I enjoy taking care of them.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb tenses and sentence structures. Also, use linking words to connect ideas and express your feelings more naturally.

Ví dụ: Absolutely, I often take photos of various flowers from different angles. I start photographing them when they begin to blossom and take more pictures once they are fully bloomed. Seeing these photos always makes me very happy.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains hesitations and unclear phrases. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence clarity. Use linking words to organize your answer logically and provide specific examples of occasions when flowers are sent.

Ví dụ: Yes, in my country, people often send flowers to relatives and friends on occasions such as weddings and birthdays. Additionally, flowers are commonly sent to express condolences during funerals or times of loss.

× I have a beautiful garden at the back of my house which I have wide variety of flowers including lilies, tulips, roses.

✓ I have a beautiful garden at the back of my house which has a wide variety of flowers including lilies, tulips, and roses.

The phrase 'I have wide variety' is incorrect because 'variety' is singular and requires an article 'a'. Also, the subject of the relative clause should be 'which has' instead of 'which I have' to correctly refer to the garden having the variety of flowers.

× My mother is the one who who likes flowers and who taken care of flowers.

✓ My mother is the one who likes flowers and who takes care of flowers.

The verb 'taken' is the past participle and incorrect here; it should be the present tense 'takes' to agree with the singular subject 'who' referring to 'my mother'. Also, 'who who' is a repetition and should be corrected to a single 'who'.

× She has indoor flower, outdoor flowers, so she really taken care of them and she makes her relax the time.

✓ She has indoor flowers and outdoor flowers, so she really takes care of them and she makes herself relax during that time.

'Indoor flower' should be plural 'indoor flowers' to match 'outdoor flowers'. 'Taken care' is incorrect; it should be 'takes care' for present tense and subject-verb agreement. 'She makes her relax the time' is incorrect; the reflexive pronoun 'herself' is needed and 'during that time' is a better phrase.

× Is there a wide variety of flowers where I live?

✓ There is a wide variety of flowers where I live.

The original sentence is a question but the context requires a statement. Also, 'There is' is the correct form for singular 'a wide variety'.

× The different variety of flowers in my garden are roses, tulips, lilies and dahlia.

✓ The different varieties of flowers in my garden are roses, tulips, lilies, and dahlias.

'Variety' should be plural 'varieties' because it refers to multiple types of flowers. Also, 'dahlia' should be plural 'dahlias' to match the list of plural flower names.

× From the time it start blossoming I take the picture of that and once it's fully blossom I take a different picture.

✓ From the time it starts blossoming, I take pictures of it, and once it's fully blossomed, I take different pictures.

The verb 'start' should be 'starts' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Blossom' should be past participle 'blossomed' to describe the completed action. 'Picture' should be plural 'pictures' to indicate multiple photos.

× So it really feels me so happy when I see the pictures.

✓ So it really makes me so happy when I see the pictures.

The verb 'feels' does not take an object pronoun 'me' in this context. The correct expression is 'makes me happy' to indicate causing happiness.

× Yes, people in my country often send flowers to their relatives, their friends for different occasions such as wedding or on or for their birthday.

✓ Yes, people in my country often send flowers to their relatives and friends for different occasions such as weddings or birthdays.

The phrase 'such as wedding or on or for their birthday' is awkward and contains unnecessary prepositions. 'Weddings' and 'birthdays' should be plural to indicate general occasions. Also, 'and' is better than a comma before 'friends'.

× And also if we have like uh, occasion or like situations like death and all, we used to send flowers for a second. Condolences from our family.

✓ Also, if we have occasions or situations like death, we send flowers as a sign of condolences from our family.

'Used to' implies past habit which is incorrect here; present tense 'send' is appropriate. 'For a second' is unclear and incorrect; 'as a sign of' clarifies the meaning. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.