Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более естественным и грамматически правильным. Избегайте тавтологии и используйте более точные выражения. Также стоит добавить связующие слова для плавности речи.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they have a pleasant fragrance. Moreover, I think they make great gifts, especially for girls like girlfriends or mothers, who always feel happy when receiving them.

Gợi ý: Используйте правильные формы глаголов и более разнообразную лексику. Добавьте связующие слова для улучшения связности ответа.

Ví dụ: Yes, my mother is very fond of flowers. We have many indoor plants at home, and she enjoys taking care of them. Whenever I give her flowers, she looks genuinely happy.

Gợi ý: Исправьте грамматические ошибки и избегайте использования сокращений типа 'etcetera' в устной речи. Используйте связующие слова для логичности.

Ví dụ: Yes, as I mentioned, my mother takes care of many flowers at home. Additionally, the streets in my city are decorated with various flowers such as roses and tulips.

Gợi ý: Ответ должен быть более грамматически правильным и естественным. Избегайте прямого отрицания без объяснения. Добавьте связующие слова для плавности.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take photos of flowers because I prefer to enjoy their beauty in person. I think seeing them directly is more satisfying than looking at pictures.

Gợi ý: Используйте более точные выражения и правильную структуру предложений. Избегайте неясных фраз и добавьте связующие слова.

Ví dụ: Yes, especially young men often send flowers to their girlfriends. I believe that in many countries, people admire how our youth frequently exchange flowers as a sign of affection.

× Yes, I like them because they smell well and especially girls like them.

✓ Yes, I like them because they smell good and especially girls like them.

The adverb 'well' is incorrectly used to describe the smell. 'Well' is generally used to describe how an action is performed, while 'good' is the correct adjective to describe the quality of the smell.

× If you present some flower to your girlfriend or mother, uh, they always happy.

✓ If you present some flowers to your girlfriend or mother, they are always happy.

The pronoun 'they' refers to 'girlfriend or mother' which is singular or plural depending on context, but here it is better to use 'they are' to form a complete sentence. Also, 'some flower' should be plural 'some flowers' to match the context.

× In our home we have many room flowers and she enjoy to look after them and when I present her some flowers she seems really happy.

✓ In our home we have many potted flowers and she enjoys looking after them, and when I present her with some flowers, she seems really happy.

'Room flowers' is not a common phrase; 'potted flowers' or 'indoor flowers' is more appropriate. 'She enjoy' should be 'she enjoys' to agree with the third person singular subject. 'Enjoy to look after' should be 'enjoys looking after' because 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund. Also, 'present her some flowers' should be 'present her with some flowers' for correct preposition usage.

× Yes, as I said before my mother look after many flowers in our home and also my city streets has many flowers like rose or tulpan and etcetera.

✓ Yes, as I said before, my mother looks after many flowers in our home, and also my city streets have many flowers like roses or tulips, etcetera.

The verbs 'look' and 'has' should be in third person singular form 'looks' and 'have' respectively to agree with their subjects 'my mother' and 'city streets'. Also, 'rose' and 'tulpan' should be plural 'roses' and 'tulips'.

× No, I like flowers but I never had to take it a photo of them because I think that it's not necessary.

✓ No, I like flowers but I have never taken a photo of them because I think that it's not necessary.

The phrase 'never had to take it a photo' is incorrect. The correct present perfect form is 'have never taken a photo'. Also, 'take it a photo' is incorrect word order; it should be 'take a photo'.

× Yes, especially young boys send to their girlfriends, and as I know many other countries are really interested that our young people present to each other many flowers.

✓ Yes, especially young boys send flowers to their girlfriends, and as far as I know, many other countries are really interested that our young people present many flowers to each other.

The verb 'send' requires a direct object before the preposition 'to', so 'send to their girlfriends' is incorrect; it should be 'send flowers to their girlfriends'. Also, 'as I know' should be 'as far as I know' for correct idiomatic expression. The phrase 'present to each other many flowers' should be reordered to 'present many flowers to each other' for natural word order.