Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally good but slightly incomplete as the last sentence is unfinished. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I have a deep love for flowers because they brighten up my home and add a fresh, natural touch to the furniture. Moreover, they release a pleasant aroma that helps me relax and clear my mind after a long day. For instance, I often place fresh roses or jasmine in my living room to create a calming atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structures. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, this question reminds me of my paternal grandmother. Besides growing vegetables and staple crops, she owns a vibrant personal garden in front of her house. She uses it to grow various flowers, including roses, lilies, and daisies.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains filler words and incomplete ideas. Avoid hesitation sounds and unclear phrases. Use precise vocabulary and organize your ideas logically with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, most families in my area have gardens where they grow vegetables and flowers. These green spaces brighten up the streets beautifully. Additionally, I have a small, charming garden on my balcony where I grow some flowers.

Gợi ý: Your answer shows enthusiasm but contains unclear phrases and some grammatical mistakes. Use clearer expressions and correct vocabulary. Also, provide more specific details with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I am fascinated by capturing the beauty in everyday life through photography. Recently, I took a stunning photo of some yellow flowers hanging in my grandmother's garden, which looked very vibrant and lively.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but incomplete and contains grammatical errors. Try to complete your sentences fully and use linking words to connect ideas. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure.

Ví dụ: Yes, in Vietnam, flowers are among the most popular gifts on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, and anniversaries. People often send flowers to express emotions like love, gratitude, or sympathy. For example, it is common to send roses to loved ones on Valentine's Day.

× I often place fresh roses or Jasmine in my living room to create.

✓ I often place fresh roses or Jasmine in my living room to create a pleasant atmosphere.

The sentence ends abruptly with 'to create' which is incomplete. It needs an object to complete the verb phrase. Adding 'a pleasant atmosphere' completes the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× She, besides growing vegetables and stable crops, also own her vivid personal garden in front of the house.

✓ She, besides growing vegetables and stable crops, also owns her vivid personal garden in front of the house.

The subject 'She' is singular, so the verb should be 'owns' (third person singular) instead of 'own'. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× She used it to grow all sorts of flowers ranging from roses, lilies and daisies.

✓ She used it to grow all sorts of flowers ranging from roses, lilies, to daisies.

When listing a range, the correct preposition pair is 'from... to...'. The original sentence uses 'from' but lacks 'to', which is necessary for correct parallel structure.

× Yes, most of the families in my area have their own garden which is used to grow vegetables and flowers.

✓ Yes, most of the families in my area have their own gardens which are used to grow vegetables and flowers.

'Families' is plural, so 'garden' should be plural 'gardens' to match. Also, 'which is' should be 'which are' to agree with the plural noun 'gardens'.

× Moreover, these uh, greeneries also have to bring the street into light by exquisite.

✓ Moreover, these greeneries also help to brighten the street exquisitely.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'Greeneries' is a plural noun but 'have to bring the street into light by exquisite' is incorrect. The correction uses 'help to brighten the street exquisitely' which is grammatically correct and clearer.

× Moreover, I also have my own bikini own mini garden, uh, right in the balcony, which is really cute.

✓ Moreover, I also have my own mini garden, right on the balcony, which is really cute.

The phrase 'bikini own mini garden' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. 'Right in the balcony' should be 'right on the balcony' because we say 'on the balcony'. The correction removes the unclear phrase and fixes the preposition.

× Recently I just took a really beautiful and stunning photo of some yellow receipt flowers hanging on the flakes in my grandmother gardens.

✓ Recently I just took a really beautiful and stunning photo of some yellow rice flowers hanging on the stalks in my grandmother's garden.

'Receipt flowers' is likely a mishearing of 'rice flowers'. 'Flakes' is incorrect; 'stalks' is appropriate for flowers. Also, 'grandmother gardens' should be 'grandmother's garden' to show possession. Prepositions and possessive form are corrected.

× Yes, I believe that flowers are among the most favored gifts in Vietnam in on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings or anniversaries, usually people would use flowers as a way to express emotions like love, gratitude or sympathy and while flowers can say it all, for example, it is common to send.

✓ Yes, I believe that flowers are among the most favored gifts in Vietnam on special occasions such as birthdays, weddings, or anniversaries. Usually, people use flowers as a way to express emotions like love, gratitude, or sympathy. While flowers can say it all, for example, it is common to send them.

The phrase 'in on special occasions' is incorrect; it should be 'on special occasions'. The sentence is also a run-on and needs to be split for clarity. Added missing commas and corrected verb usage for fluency and correctness.