Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯，语法和表达存在错误，建议简化句子结构，确保表达清晰自然。可以先直接回答问题，然后用具体例子支持观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers very much because they lift my spirits and bring me peace. For example, my university campus is full of beautiful flowers, which makes me feel happy every day.

Gợi ý: 回答较简短，缺少连接词和细节描述。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并增加具体细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, my sister is really into flowers. She often brings fresh flowers to my home, so my living room is always filled with their lovely fragrance.

Gợi ý: 表达不够准确，存在语法错误和用词不当。建议使用正确的词汇和句式，清晰表达意思。

Ví dụ: Yes, I live on my university campus, which has many flowers. The school invests a lot of money to maintain the gardens and create a beautiful environment.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但语法有小错误，建议注意主谓一致，并使用更自然的表达。

Ví dụ: Absolutely, I often take photos of flowers with my phone and share them with my family. Seeing these beautiful flowers really brightens my day.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，建议补充完整句子，使用连接词，并提供具体例子。

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often send flowers to close friends or family, especially on anniversaries. For example, many couples exchange beautiful flowers to celebrate their special days.

× they just had is incredibly wave of lifting my spirit and bringing a sense of peace and joy into my day

✓ they just have an incredible way of lifting my spirit and bringing a sense of peace and joy into my day

这里使用了错误的过去分词形式“had is”，正确的应该是现在时态“have”，表示一般现在时的习惯动作。

× my there are many flowers in my university when I.

✓ there are many flowers in my university.

句子结构混乱，去掉多余的“my”和不完整的“when I”，使句子完整且符合语法。

× my sister really into flowers.

✓ my sister is really into flowers.

缺少系动词“is”，导致句子不完整。

× She always brought some flowers to my home and my living room is always filled with flowers.

✓ She always brings some flowers to my home and my living room is always filled with flowers.

“always”表示习惯动作，应使用一般现在时“brings”，而非过去时“brought”。

× My school invents many money to maintain these gardens, to provide with a wonderful experiment.

✓ My school invests a lot of money to maintain these gardens, to provide a wonderful experience.

“invents many money”错误，正确表达是“invests a lot of money”；“experiment”应为“experience”，且“provide with”应改为“provide”。

× to provide with a wonderful experiment.

✓ to provide a wonderful experience.

动词“provide”后不接“with”，直接接宾语；“experiment”应为“experience”，意思更合适。

× I always take photos of flowers using my phones and I also post them to my family to share my feelings about these flowers.

✓ I always take photos of flowers using my phone and I also post them to my family to share my feelings about these flowers.

“phones”应为单数“phone”，因为通常指一个手机。

× It really make my day.

✓ It really makes my day.

主语“It”是第三人称单数，谓语动词应加-s，变为“makes”。

× especially in some anniversary For example, many couples will share beautiful flowers to each other when.

✓ especially on some anniversaries. For example, many couples will share beautiful flowers with each other.

“anniversary”应为复数“anniversaries”，介词用“on”；“share flowers to each other”应为“share flowers with each other”；句子不完整，去掉“when”。