Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (singular/plural, articles), avoid repetition, and give one specific supporting detail. Use linking words like 'also' or 'for example' to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I love flowers because they symbolize love and affection. For example, the water lily is our national flower and people often use it in ceremonies to show respect.

Gợi ý: Begin with a direct answer, then give a specific example with correct grammar and clear linking. Avoid awkward phrases and repeat words; use 'one of the biggest fans' or 'a big fan'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. My cousin is a big fan of flowers; for instance, he keeps a large flower garden beside his house where he grows roses and marigolds.

Gợi ý: Remove fillers ('uh'), use accurate vocabulary (e.g. 'rose', 'marigold'), and keep sentences short and precise. Give one or two clear examples and use linking words like 'for example' or 'in addition'.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers where I live. In addition to several nearby flower shops, I often see roses, marigolds and lilies in people’s gardens.

Gợi ý: Be careful with word choice: say 'helps me feel better' or 'improve my mood' instead of 'feel mentally unwell'. Start with a clear statement, then give a reason, and avoid hedging words like 'I guess'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph flowers because it improves my mood and helps me relax after a busy day.

Gợi ý: Use correct articles and plural forms, be specific about occasions, and provide one clear example. Link ideas with 'for example' or 'such as'.

Ví dụ: Yes, people commonly send flowers, especially on religious occasions and national remembrance days. For example, many people lay flowers on 21 February to honour victims.

× Definitely, I'm very fond of flowers because it's a symbolic of love and affection.

✓ Definitely, I'm very fond of flowers because they are a symbol of love and affection.

The original sentence uses 'it's a symbolic' which has two issues: incorrect article/adjective form and singular/plural reference. 'Symbolic' is an adjective, while 'symbol' is the correct noun. Also 'flowers' is plural, so referent should be 'they' and the noun should be singular 'a symbol' or plural 'symbols'. Use 'they are a symbol' or 'they are symbols'. Suggestion: use 'they are a symbol of love and affection.'

× Apart from that, water Lily is our national flowers, which is which represents our affection.

✓ Apart from that, the water lily is our national flower, which represents our affection.

Errors: article use and singular/plural agreement. 'Water Lily' should be 'the water lily' as a specific common name; 'national flowers' conflicts with singular 'water lily' so use 'national flower' singular. Remove extra 'which is which'. Use 'which represents' to refer back to 'the water lily.' Suggestion: use 'the water lily is our national flower, which represents our affection.'

× Definitely, I know multiple people who love flowers.

✓ Definitely, I know many people who love flowers.

'Multiple people' is grammatically acceptable but 'many people' is more natural. This is a quantifier choice issue. Use 'many' for countable plural nouns. Suggestion: say 'I know many people who love flowers.'

× Among of them my cousin is one of big fan of flowers.

✓ Among them, my cousin is one of the big fans of flowers.

Errors: incorrect preposition 'Among of' should be 'Among' and missing articles/number agreement. Use 'one of the big fans' to indicate membership in a group. Add commas for clarity. Suggestion: 'Among them, my cousin is one of the big fans of flowers.'

× Apart from that he also has a flower garden beside his house.

✓ Apart from that, he also has a flower garden beside his house.

Minor punctuation: add comma after introductory phrase. Article usage 'a flower garden' is correct. Suggestion: include comma for natural spoken pause: 'Apart from that, he also has a flower garden beside his house.'

× Of course, there are lots of flowers where I live.

✓ Of course, there are lots of flowers where I live.

Sentence is grammatically correct in present tense and needs no change. It correctly uses 'there are' with plural noun 'flowers.' No improvement necessary.

× Additionally, uh, there are several flower shops, uh, just near my house.

✓ Additionally, there are several flower shops just near my house.

Remove filler 'uh' for clarity. 'Just near my house' is acceptable; no preposition change needed. Suggestion: omit filler words in formal answers: 'Additionally, there are several flower shops just near my house.'

× So I every day I often see the several types of flowers such as rose water, lady Marigold and so many others.

✓ So every day I often see several types of flowers such as roses, water lilies, marigolds, and many others.

Multiple problems: word order ('So I every day I often' is awkward/redundant), article/quantifier ('the several types' should be 'several types'), incorrect flower names and pluralization ('rose water' is wrong; 'lady Marigold' should be 'marigolds' or 'lady's marigold'), and punctuation. Suggestion: streamline to 'So every day I often see several types of flowers such as roses, water lilies, marigolds, and many others.'

× Well, in my daily life I like to take photos of flowers personally, I guess because it helps me to feel mentally unwell and also reduces my stress.

✓ Well, in my daily life I like to take photos of flowers personally, I guess because it helps me feel mentally well and also reduces my stress.

Problems: comma splice (two independent clauses joined incorrectly), awkward phrase 'helps me to feel mentally unwell' which contradicts reducing stress — should be 'mentally well'. Remove unnecessary 'to' after 'helps me' (both are acceptable but concise form is common). Suggestion: split into two sentences or use a conjunction correctly: '..., because it helps me feel mentally well and reduces my stress.'

× Absolutely. In my country people often send flowers to others, especially on the religious occasion and also some of historical events like 21 February.

✓ Absolutely. In my country, people often send flowers to others, especially on religious occasions and on historical events like 21 February.

Errors: article and number use. Use plural 'religious occasions' and 'historical events' rather than singular with articles. Remove 'the' before 'religious occasion' and change 'some of historical events' to 'on historical events.' Add comma after introductory phrase. Suggestion: '...especially on religious occasions and on historical events like 21 February.'