Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and hesitations, and add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Keep answers within 2–4 sentences and use accurate grammar (singular/plural, articles).

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they are beautiful and brighten the home. For example, roses and lilies have strong scents and vivid colors, which make me feel relaxed and cheerful.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear statement, use correct plural and articles, and give one specific example with a linking word (for example/for instance). Avoid fillers and repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, many people I know enjoy flowers. For instance, my sister loves orchids because of their elegant shape and subtle scent, and she always smiles when someone gives her a bouquet.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, use correct grammar for quantities, and organize details with a linking phrase (for example/also). Be specific about types, colors, or scents and state how it affects you concisely.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers in my garden. For example, I grow roses, marigolds and jasmine in different colors and scents, and seeing them every morning makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Gợi ý: Give a clear frequency phrase, use correct collocations (take photos of), and add a brief reason or where you post with linking words. Keep it concise and grammatical.

Ví dụ: Not every day, but I often take photos of flowers when I see interesting ones and post them on social media. I do this because I enjoy sharing beautiful images with my friends and getting their reactions.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly and accurately; avoid unclear phrases and pronoun mistakes. Use linking words to give situations when flowers are sent (for example, birthdays, funerals) and give a short personal example correctly.

Ví dụ: Yes, people often send flowers for occasions such as birthdays, weddings and funerals. For example, I sometimes send bouquets to my partner on special days, and he always appreciates them.

× And I think everyone does so because of flower appearance.

✓ And I think everyone does so because of the flowers' appearance.

The sentence uses 'flower appearance' incorrectly. It needs a plural noun 'flowers' and a possessive to show appearance belongs to flowers. Use 'flowers' (plural) and the possessive form 'flowers'' or 'the appearance of flowers' for clarity.

× Is there a more unshareable and it looks so beautiful and it's a great, uh, umm, great things of the nature and I think yes, I do.

✓ They are unique and look so beautiful; they are great things of nature, and I like them.

The original is ungrammatical and fragmented. 'Unshareable' is the wrong word for uniqueness and the sentence has subject and verb mismatches. Rewriting into clear independent clauses with correct subjects and verbs fixes structure and meaning.

× Obviously my friends, my family, everyone loves flower and uh, because uh, they are shaped, they are uh, flavor their color.

✓ Obviously my friends and family — everyone loves flowers because of their shapes, scents, and colors.

'Everyone loves flower' is singular where plural 'flowers' is needed. 'Flavor their color' is incorrect collocation; use 'scents' or 'fragrance' and separate items with commas. Quantifiers and noun forms adjusted for agreement and clarity.

× Everyone love flower as far as I know.

✓ Everyone loves flowers as far as I know.

'Everyone' is singular and requires the third-person singular verb 'loves'. Also 'flower' should be plural 'flowers' when speaking generally.

× And uh, when they received flower, when they get flower, they make happy and all.

✓ When they receive flowers, they become happy.

Tense inconsistency and wrong verb forms: use present simple 'receive' for general truth. 'Make happy' is unnatural; use 'become happy' or 'are happy'. Also plural 'flowers' needed.

× Yes, I have a garden where, uh, a lots of flowers are, uh, grow and uh, there are various in color, various in scent.

✓ Yes, I have a garden where lots of flowers grow; they vary in color and scent.

'A lots' is incorrect — use 'lots of' without 'a'. 'Are grow' is wrong verb form; use 'grow'. 'Various in color' is awkward; use 'they vary in color'.

× They're, uh, red, they're yellow, they're white and their appearance is great and this makes me feel very enjoyable and funny things is that, uh.

✓ They are red, yellow, and white, and their appearance is beautiful; this makes me feel very happy.

Use 'their' correctly but 'appearance is great' is fine; change 'very enjoyable' to 'very happy' (adjective for feelings). 'Funny things is that' is unclear and ungrammatical—omit or rephrase.

× Not every day in my life, but I do take pictures with flower and I do love it and post on social media.

✓ Not every day, but I do take pictures of flowers and post them on social media.

Use 'take pictures of' not 'with'. 'Flower' should be plural 'flowers'. 'Post them' clarifies the object. Present simple is appropriate for habits.

× Uh, a great varieties of flower. Uh, I like to introduce with uh, my friends through social media.

✓ There are a great variety of flowers. I like to share them with my friends on social media.

'A great varieties' mixes singular and plural; use 'a great variety' or 'great varieties'. 'Introduce with my friends' is wrong preposition and verb — use 'share them with my friends on social media'.

× Yes, obviously Hoyen uh, people laugh with each other. They send flowers to them and they love that to do and I also sent her my lovers to.

✓ Yes, people often show affection to each other. They send flowers to others, and they like doing that. I also sent flowers to my loved one.

Pronoun and noun choices are incorrect: 'laugh with each other' likely meant 'show affection' or 'celebrate'. 'They send flowers to them' is vague; 'others' is clearer. 'My lovers' is wrong; use 'my loved one' or 'my partner'. Tense 'sent' fits past; keep consistent.

× Flower and he loves. He loves it.

✓ I sent flowers to him, and he loved them.

Original has wrong word order and pronoun reference. Use clear subject 'I' and past tense 'sent'. Use 'them' for plural 'flowers' and 'loved' for past reaction.