Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Старайтесь давать более естественные и грамматически правильные ответы; избегайте повторов фраз «in my opinion» и общих утверждений без деталей. Постройте ответ: одно-двухпредложное утверждение по теме, затем 1–2 поддерживающих предложения с причинами или примером, используйте связки (for example, because, so). Исправьте грамматику (например, «women fans of it» → «many women like them»).

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially roses. I find them beautiful because of their colour and scent, and they always cheer me up. For example, I keep a small vase of roses on my desk when I study because they make the room feel brighter.

Gợi ý: Улучшите согласование времен и формы глаголов, убирайте лишние слова и говорите точнее. Используйте связки для плавного перехода от общего утверждения к примеру (for example, my mother). Дайте короткое мнение в начале, затем конкретный пример с деталями о человеке и его поведении.

Ví dụ: Yes, many people I know love flowers. For example, my mother is fond of chrysanthemums and arranges them on our table every week. My best friend is a florist, so she often makes beautiful bouquets for our family, which I really appreciate.

Gợi ý: Говорите прямо и стройте предложение логично: начальное утверждение + причины. Избегайте слов вроде «suddenly» в этом контексте. Уточняйте климат: назовите конкретные погодные условия и как они влияют на растения. Проверьте порядок слов и артикли.

Ví dụ: Not many flowers grow where I live because the climate is harsh. Winters are long and very cold, and it is often windy and rainy, so only hardy plants survive outdoors.

Gợi ý: Сосредоточьтесь на вопросе: расскажите о своей практике фотографирования, а не о профессиях. Дайте конкретность (когда, зачем, как часто) и используйте связки (because, so, for example). Избегайте общих фраз типа «it's the best thing».

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers when I walk in the park or visit markets. I usually photograph them on my phone to capture colours and shapes, and I edit the best shots to share with friends because it relaxes me.

Gợi ý: Дайте прямой ответ, затем конкретизируйте: какие праздники, кому обычно дарят цветы и почему. Исправьте конструкцию «send flowers to ours» и говорите о датах/традициях более естественно. Используйте связки (for example, on, such as).

Ví dụ: Yes, people often send flowers in my country, especially for special occasions. For example, on March 8th (International Women's Day) it is common to give bouquets to mothers, wives and female colleagues as a sign of appreciation.

× Of course, I really like flowers and in my opinion, a lot of women fans of it.

✓ Of course, I really like flowers and, in my opinion, many women are fans of them.

The sentence misuses pronouns and word order. 'a lot of women fans of it' is ungrammatical. Use 'many women' (quantifier) and 'are fans of them' to agree with plural 'flowers'. Also add commas for clarity.

× In my opinion, it is the best present for girls and women in the world.

✓ In my opinion, it is the best present for girls and women in the world.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable; no change needed. Keep structure and superlative 'the best' because this is an opinion.

× So the most interesting and fascinating flower for me is rose.

✓ So the most interesting and fascinating flower for me is the rose.

Missing definite article 'the' before a singular countable noun used to refer to a class or species. Use 'the rose' to indicate the flower type generally.

× In my opinion, it's really.

✓ In my opinion, it really is.

Fragment 'it's really' is vague and misplaced. Reordering to 'it really is' completes the clause and matches natural emphasis.

× Of course, I know a lot of people who loves flowers.

✓ Of course, I know a lot of people who love flowers.

Relative clause subject 'people' is plural, so verb must be 'love' not 'loves'.

× For example, my mom very like chrysanthemums, my best friend like roses and she's a florist and she always do very beautiful bouquets for my relatives and for me.

✓ For example, my mom really likes chrysanthemums, my best friend likes roses, she is a florist, and she always makes very beautiful bouquets for my relatives and for me.

Multiple errors: adverb use 'very like' should be 'really likes'; subject-verb agreement 'my best friend like' -> 'likes'; use 'is' instead of contraction 'she's' optionally fine but keep consistent; verb 'do' should be 'makes' for producing bouquets.

× And in my opinion it's the best profession.

✓ And, in my opinion, it's the best profession.

Grammatically fine; added commas for clarity. No pronoun error present.

× Are there a lot of flowers where you live?

✓ Are there many flowers where you live?

Question uses 'a lot of' which is informal but acceptable; 'many' is more appropriate in questions. No major grammar error, but adjusted for formality.

× Suddenly we don't have a lot of flowers and the place where I live because the weather where is really cold and and sunny.

✓ Unfortunately, we don't have many flowers in the place where I live because the weather is really cold and snowy.

Sentence has wrong adverb 'Suddenly' (contextual error) and word order issues. 'a lot of' changed to 'many' for negative statements, 'in the place where I live' is correct order, and 'where is really cold' should be 'the weather is really cold'. 'and and sunny' was duplicated and contradictory with cold; replaced with 'snowy' to match cold climate.

× Also it is windy and rainy.

✓ Also, it is windy and rainy.

Add comma after 'Also' for clarity. Sentence is otherwise correct.

× So in my opinion it's not really good climate for flowers.

✓ So, in my opinion, it's not a very good climate for flowers.

Missing article 'a' before 'good climate' and 'not really good' is better phrased as 'not a very good' for naturalness.

× Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

✓ Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?

Question sentence is correct in present simple for habitual actions; no correction needed.

× Of course, I usually take photos of flowers in my daily life.

✓ Of course, I usually take photos of flowers in my daily life.

Sentence is grammatically correct; it uses present simple correctly for habitual action.

× In my opinion, it's the best thing that you can see.

✓ In my opinion, they're the most beautiful things you can see.

Original 'it's the best thing that you can see' is vague and mismatches plural 'flowers' — 'they're the most beautiful things' agrees with plural and is more natural.

× So I think that it's really good opportunity to be a florist because you will work with flowers and you will see them every day.

✓ So I think that it's a really good opportunity to be a florist because you will work with flowers and see them every day.

Missing article 'a' before 'really good opportunity'. Also remove redundant 'you' before second verb 'see' for naturalness; future 'will' is acceptable.

× Of course, people in my country usually send flowers to ours also, we have a lot of different holidays for it.

✓ Of course, people in my country usually send flowers to others; we also have many different holidays for that.

'send flowers to ours' is wrong pronoun; should be 'others'. Use semicolon or period to separate clauses. 'a lot of' changed to 'many' for formality; 'for it' -> 'for that' or 'for them'.

× For example, in the 8th of March you can send different beautiful flowers for your women and it will be very beautiful present for them.

✓ For example, on the 8th of March you can send beautiful flowers to the women in your life, and it will be a very lovely present for them.

Preposition for dates is 'on' not 'in'. 'different beautiful flowers' is awkward; reorder to 'beautiful flowers'. Use 'to the women in your life' instead of 'for your women'. Add article 'a' before 'very lovely present'.