Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and natural, but it repeats the idea (adore/ love) and has a sentence fragment. Aim for a single concise topic sentence followed by one specific detail. Use a linking word if adding detail and avoid repeating the same word.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers because they brighten my mood and make my home feel welcoming. For example, when I place fresh roses on the table, their scent and color immediately lift my spirits.

Gợi ý: Good content and personal detail, but there are hesitations and repetition (“I just I just”) and a small grammar error (“a beautiful flowers”). Make one clear statement then support it with a short specific example; eliminate filler words.

Ví dụ: Yes — my mother loves flowers, so I often buy them for her on special occasions. For instance, I usually give her a bouquet of lilies on her birthday because she likes their scent.

Gợi ý: You referred back to a previous answer, which is fine, but the reply is short, has hesitation and a singular/plural error (“rose”). Begin with a direct topic sentence about your area, then add a specific detail and use a linking word to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, there are quite a few flowers around my home; for example, my mother tends a small garden where she grows roses and marigolds. As a result, our front yard looks colorful in spring.

Gợi ý: The answer is honest and natural but a bit wordy and contains a small article error (“a photos”). Provide a short direct answer, then give one specific reason and, if possible, offer a brief contrast or example.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually photograph flowers every day because they are so common in our garden that I rarely think to take pictures. However, I do photograph them occasionally when I see an unusual bloom.

Gợi ý: You make a valid point but there are grammar mistakes and hesitation, and the idea is repetitive. Avoid vague phrases like “beating on any occasions” and give a clearer, more accurate statement with a specific example of occasions.

Ví dụ: Yes, flowers are a common gift in my country, especially for women on occasions such as birthdays, anniversaries, and Mother’s Day. For example, it is common to give a bouquet of roses on Valentine’s Day.

× Definitely yes, because when it comes to flowers.

✓ Definitely yes, because when it comes to flowers, I really like them.

The original is a sentence fragment lacking a main clause after 'when it comes to flowers'. Add a main clause (I really like them) to complete the sentence and make the idea clear; maintain present-tense general statement.

× I just I just buy a beautiful flowers and present them to my mother.

✓ I just buy beautiful flowers and present them to my mother.

The phrase 'a beautiful flowers' mixes singular article 'a' with plural 'flowers'. Remove the article and the duplicated 'I just' and use plural 'flowers' to match the intended meaning.

× my mom adores flowers and when it comes to like special occasions I just I just buy a beautiful flowers and present them to my mother.

✓ My mom adores flowers, and when it comes to special occasions, I buy beautiful flowers and present them to my mother.

Remove the filler 'like' and repeated wording, add commas for clarity, and correct article/plural as above. 'When it comes to special occasions' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× As I have mentioned earlier, my mom adores flowers. So, uh, in our garden my mom nurtures some flowers like rose.

✓ As I mentioned earlier, my mom adores flowers, so in our garden she nurtures some flowers such as roses.

Use 'As I mentioned earlier' (more natural), combine clauses to avoid choppiness, replace 'like rose' with 'such as roses' and pluralize 'rose' to match 'some flowers'.

× No, I don't usually take a photos of flowers on a daily basis and I don't know the reason why.

✓ No, I don't usually take photos of flowers on a daily basis and I don't know why.

Do not use 'a' before the plural 'photos'. Also 'I don't know why' is more concise than 'I don't know the reason why'.

× Maybe it's just because we have a lot of flowers in our garden.

✓ Maybe it's just because we have a lot of flowers in our garden.

This sentence is correct; 'a lot of flowers' appropriately uses quantifier and articles. No change needed.

× In my country, flowers are popular gifts for women or girls beating on any occasions.

✓ In my country, flowers are popular gifts for women and girls on many occasions.

Replace incorrect word 'beating' with 'on' and 'any occasions' with 'many occasions' for correct collocation and clearer meaning.

× People usually buy a flower and just give as a gift.

✓ People usually buy flowers and give them as gifts.

Singular 'a flower' is acceptable but less natural; better to use plural 'flowers' and include object pronoun 'them' and plural 'gifts' to match. This corrects article and adds the necessary pronoun.