Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, correct grammar and use varied vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details linked with a connector. Avoid repetition (e.g., 'flower' repeated) and correct verb forms and articles.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers, especially fresh ones. They can change the mood of a room because their colours are cheerful and their scent is pleasant, so I often buy them to brighten my home.

Gợi ý: Clarify who you mean and use consistent pronouns. Use a simple topic sentence, then give specific examples connected with linking words. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., 'keeps', 'likes', 'buys bouquets').

Ví dụ: Yes, my sister loves flowers. She keeps several potted plants in her room because she enjoys their fragrance and often buys bouquets to decorate her bedside table.

Gợi ý: Make grammar accurate and avoid awkward phrases. Use one clear topic sentence then a supporting detail with a linking word. Replace incorrect words ('furnace') with correct ones ('fragrance' or 'appearance').

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers in my garden. I grow a variety of species because their colours and fragrance make the atmosphere pleasant and refreshing.

Gợi ý: Be concise and avoid hesitations. Use proper verb forms and clearer expressions (e.g., 'I don't take them daily, but I often photograph flowers'). Give one specific reason or example and link ideas coherently.

Ví dụ: Not every day, but I often photograph flowers when I walk in the park because I enjoy capturing colours and textures that remind me of natural landscapes and help me relax.

Gợi ý: Provide a complete sentence with specific occasions and use linking words. Avoid trailing off and give one or two concrete examples (e.g., weddings, funerals, festivals).

Ví dụ: Yes, people often send flowers for special occasions. For example, bouquets are common at weddings and on festivals like Diwali, and flowers are also sent to express sympathy at funerals.

× Flower could change the mood of the place and the fragrance of flower was so good, so I love flowers.

✓ Flowers can change the mood of a place, and the fragrance of flowers is very pleasant, so I love them.

Singular/plural and article/quantifier errors: 'Flower' should be plural 'Flowers' when speaking generally. Use modal 'can' for general ability rather than 'could'. 'the mood of the place' is better as 'the mood of a place' for general statements. 'the fragrance of flower was so good' needs plural 'flowers' and present tense 'is' for a general truth. Use pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition. Suggestions: Use plural nouns for general statements, use 'can' for general ability, use present simple for general truths, and use pronouns to avoid repetition.

× My sister really loved the flowers, she is quite interesting to keep a flower in her room.

✓ My sister really loves flowers; she is quite interested in keeping flowers in her room.

Tense and pronoun/adjective issues: 'loved' should be present 'loves' to match current habit. 'interesting to keep a flower' is incorrect: 'interesting' describes something that causes interest; the correct adjective is 'interested' describing a person. Use 'interested in' plus gerund 'keeping'. Use plural 'flowers' for general preference. Suggestions: Use 'interested in' + gerund, keep consistent tense for habits, use plural for general likes.

× So he liked pleasant fragrance of flower.

✓ She likes the pleasant fragrance of flowers.

Pronoun and tense errors: The sister is female, so use 'she' consistently. 'liked' should be present 'likes' for a habitual preference. 'fragrance of flower' needs the definite article 'the' and plural 'flowers' for a general sense. Suggestions: Ensure correct gender pronouns, use present simple for habitual actions, and include articles and plural forms where needed.

× He bowed.

✓ (Remove this sentence as it is unclear)

The sentence 'He bowed.' is contextually unclear and inconsistent with previous references to the sister. It may be a transcription error. If the speaker meant 'She bought', correct to that; otherwise remove. Suggestions: Clarify unclear utterances or correct to the intended action (e.g., 'She bought them.').

× She bought all bouquet for a room to decorate.

✓ She bought a bouquet to decorate her room.

Incorrect article and word order: 'all bouquet' is incorrect; use 'a bouquet'. 'for a room' should be 'to decorate her room' to show purpose and possession. Use possessive adjective 'her' to indicate whose room. Suggestions: Use 'a bouquet' for a single bunch of flowers, and use 'to' + verb to express purpose; include possessive adjectives when appropriate.

× Yes definitely like in my garden there are lots of flowers are grown and I also prefer to grow different variety of flowers which makes our environment or atmosphere so good and their furnace was refreshing our mind.

✓ Yes, definitely. In my garden many flowers grow, and I also prefer to grow different varieties of flowers, which make our environment pleasant and whose fragrance refreshes the mind.

Redundant 'are' with 'there are' and subject-verb agreement: original has 'there are lots of flowers are grown'—remove extra 'are'. Use 'many' or 'lots of' and plural 'varieties'. 'which makes' should be 'which make' to agree with plural 'different varieties of flowers'. 'their furnace' is incorrect word choice; should be 'their fragrance'. Use present simple for general facts and 'refreshes the mind' for singular noun 'fragrance'. Suggestions: Avoid redundant verbs, ensure subject-verb agreement, use correct vocabulary ('fragrance'), and choose plural/singular forms correctly.

× So not daily, but I like to prefer take a photos of flowers because I like to capture the photo of natural landscapes.

✓ Not daily, but I prefer to take photos of flowers because I like to capture natural landscapes.

Redundant modal/verb forms and article errors: 'I like to prefer take a photos' mixes 'like' and 'prefer' and has wrong verb form and plural. Use either 'I prefer to take photos' or 'I like taking photos'. Remove 'a' before 'photos'. 'capture the photo of natural landscapes' is awkward; use 'capture natural landscapes' or 'take photos of natural landscapes'. Suggestions: Use one verb of preference (prefer/like), use correct infinitive or gerund forms ('prefer to take' or 'like taking'), and match singular/plural nouns.

× Flowers also include a variety of natural landscape which helps my mind, uh, fresh and.

✓ Flowers are also part of natural landscapes, which help me feel refreshed.

Incorrect use of verb and noun forms: 'include a variety of natural landscape' is awkward—use 'are part of' or 'are among'. 'which helps my mind, uh, fresh and' is ungrammatical; use 'which help me feel refreshed'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'landscapes' plural with 'help'. Use appropriate verb phrase 'feel refreshed'. Suggestions: Use natural collocations like 'feel refreshed', ensure plural agreement, and avoid filler words when possible.

× Yes, definitely. Like in different occasion festivals or what day people send bouquet or flowers to decorate and.

✓ Yes, definitely. On different occasions, festivals, or special days people send bouquets or flowers to decorate.

Preposition and quantifier errors: Use 'on different occasions' or 'on occasions' rather than 'in different occasion'. Use plural 'occasions' and 'bouquets'. Remove trailing 'and'. Suggestions: Use correct prepositions with 'occasion' ('on occasions'), pluralize countable nouns for general statements, and complete the sentence.