Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct minor grammar/word-choice errors. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition (e.g., “flowers” repeated) and correct phrasing such as “arrange bookings” or “order bouquets.”

Ví dụ: Yes — I love flowers, especially roses. I prefer roses because of their strong fragrance and deep red colour. For special occasions I order fresh bouquets and use them to decorate my home or to welcome visiting friends.

Gợi ý: Provide a slightly fuller answer with a linking phrase and a brief reason or detail about your friend’s preference to make the answer more informative and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, my friend Jasbir really loves flowers. For example, his favourite is the sunflower because it looks cheerful and reminds him of summer.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more organized: start with a topic sentence, then give two clear supporting points. Remove filler words (uh) and correct awkward phrases (e.g., “specific especially”). Use linking words like “also” or “in addition.” Be more specific about the park or types of flowers if possible.

Ví dụ: Yes. I have many flowers at home, and there is also a park next to my house that is full of roses and other blooms. I often visit the park in the evenings to enjoy the scent and calm atmosphere.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear direct statement, avoid filler (“whatever I”) and improve grammar. Use linking words (however, but) and be specific about how often and why you photograph flowers.

Ví dụ: Not every day, but whenever I see beautiful blooms I try to photograph them. I usually post the best shots on Instagram because I enjoy sharing nature’s beauty.

Gợi ý: Organize the response: give a topic sentence, then a specific example and concise explanation. Avoid short sentence fragments like “Or good wishes.” Use smoother linking words such as “for example” or “especially during.”

Ví dụ: Yes. In India people often send flowers to relatives, especially during festivals such as Holi and Diwali. For example, families exchange flower garlands and bouquets as a traditional way to show respect and convey good wishes.

× I enjoy decorating my home with flowers with fresh roses and sometimes arrange booking for my friends when they visit.

✓ I enjoy decorating my home with fresh roses and sometimes arranging bookings for my friends when they visit.

The sentence contains parallel structure issues and incorrect verb forms. After 'enjoy' the gerund form is required, so 'decorating' is correct; however 'sometimes arrange booking' should use the gerund 'arranging' to maintain parallelism. Also 'booking' should be plural or made countable as 'bookings'. Improve by keeping verbs in the same gerund form and using the correct plural for countable nouns.

× His favorite one is Sunflower.

✓ His favorite one is the sunflower.

The noun 'sunflower' here refers to a specific type and needs the definite article 'the' when identifying a single favorite type. Also capitalization is unnecessary; common nouns should be lowercase. Suggest using 'the sunflower' or 'sunflowers' depending on intended meaning.

× Yes, as I mentioned, I have a lot of flowers, uh, in my home and also there is a park next to my home full of different kinds of flowers specific especially roses, and I often go there in the evening and enjoy the fragrance of flowers.

✓ Yes, as I mentioned, I have a lot of flowers in my home, and there is a park next to my home full of different kinds of flowers, especially roses, and I often go there in the evening to enjoy their fragrance.

The original sentence has awkward word order and incorrect use of 'specific' and prepositions. 'Specific especially roses' is incorrect; use 'especially roses'. Use 'to enjoy' (infinitive) to indicate purpose rather than 'and enjoy'. Also replace 'the fragrance of flowers' with 'their fragrance' for smoother reference. Break into clearer segments and use commas appropriately.

× Honestly, I do not take it every day whatever I but whenever I get chance to go out and see some beautiful blooms, I try to capture them and post the best shots on Instagram.

✓ Honestly, I do not take photos every day, but whenever I get a chance to go out and see some beautiful blooms, I try to capture them and post the best shots on Instagram.

The original has incorrect pronoun 'it' and misplaced words ('whatever I but'). Use 'take photos' instead of 'take it', and include the article 'a' in 'a chance'. The structure needs 'but' to contrast, then 'whenever' clause. Use present simple for habitual actions ('do not take', 'try', 'post').

× Yes, people in my country, India, often send flowers to their relatives, especially on festivals such as Holi and Diwali. So it's a traditional way to greet relatives and to show some respect. Or good wishes during family celebrations.

✓ Yes, people in my country, India, often send flowers to their relatives, especially on festivals such as Holi and Diwali. It is a traditional way to greet relatives, show respect, and express good wishes during family celebrations.

The original has sentence fragments ('Or good wishes during family celebrations') and slightly awkward phrasing. Combine ideas into one complete sentence. Replace 'So it's' with 'It is' and remove 'some' before 'respect' for more natural English. Use parallel verbs 'greet', 'show', 'express' for clarity.