Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain briefly with clear and correct sentences. Avoid redundancy and improve coherence by using linking words.

Ví dụ: No, I don't write a lot because I find it tiring. However, when I have to prepare for exams, I need to write more. Fortunately, I can type on a computer now, which makes writing easier and faster.

Gợi ý: Your answer is interesting but incomplete and a bit unclear. Try to complete your sentences and provide specific reasons or examples. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I like to write imaginative stories that include strange ideas, such as a pig flying in the sky. I enjoy this because it allows me to be creative and explore unusual scenarios that people don't usually see.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and completeness. Make sure to fully express your ideas with correct grammar and provide specific examples. Use linking words to explain how your writing has changed over time.

Ví dụ: Yes, my writing has changed. In the past, I often wrote stories based on TV shows I watched. However, now I write more about current events and news because social media has influenced my interests.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and better structured. Use linking words to connect your ideas and avoid repetition. Also, try to use more varied vocabulary.

Ví dụ: I prefer typing because handwriting can be tiring, especially when I have to write many words, sometimes up to 5,000. Typing is much faster and saves time, which is very helpful when working on projects.

× I think writing is a very tiring stuff

✓ I think writing is very tiring stuff

The word 'stuff' is uncountable and does not require a quantifier like 'a'. Using 'a' before 'stuff' is incorrect. The correct form is 'very tiring stuff' without 'a'.

× when I need to prepare for the dsci need to write a lot

✓ when I need to prepare for the DSC, I need to write a lot

The sentence is missing punctuation and has a typo. 'dsci' should be capitalised as 'DSC' if it is an acronym. Also, a comma is needed to separate clauses for clarity.

× But I now I can use computer to typing so I don't.

✓ But now I can use a computer to type, so I don't.

The sentence has redundant 'I' and incorrect verb form 'to typing'. The correct form is 'to type'. Also, 'computer' needs an article 'a' before it.

× I like to write some some stories which may contain some strange ideas

✓ I like to write some stories which may contain strange ideas

The repetition of 'some' is incorrect. Also, 'some' before 'strange ideas' is unnecessary and can be omitted for clarity.

× like a pig can fly in the skies or some weird thing we can see everyday like someone is dancing on the street but he's just a.

✓ like a pig can fly in the sky or some weird things we can see every day, like someone dancing on the street but he's just a...

'Skies' should be singular 'sky' in this context. 'Everyday' is an adjective; the adverb form 'every day' is correct here. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' to match the context. The sentence is incomplete but corrected as far as possible.

× In my in the past I often write some stories which are related to some thing I always watch in the TV.

✓ In the past, I often wrote some stories which were related to things I always watched on TV.

The past tense 'wrote' and 'were' should be used to match 'in the past'. 'Watch' should be in past tense 'watched'. 'On TV' is the correct preposition, not 'in the TV'. 'Some thing' should be 'things'.

× By now the social media has changed inside, so I always write some news about what?

✓ By now, social media has changed a lot, so I always write some news about it.

'Social media' is uncountable and does not need 'the'. 'Changed inside' is incorrect; 'changed a lot' or 'changed significantly' is better. 'About what?' is unclear; 'about it' clarifies the meaning.

× handwriting is quite tiring stuff for me to do

✓ handwriting is quite tiring for me to do

'Stuff' is unnecessary here and sounds informal. Removing 'stuff' makes the sentence clearer and more natural.

× handwriting when I need to handwrite I need to write a lot of words like around 1000 to 5000.

✓ When I need to handwrite, I need to write a lot of words, like around 1000 to 5000.

The sentence needs a comma after 'handwrite' to separate clauses. The phrase 'like around' is acceptable but could be improved by adding commas for clarity.

× typing is a lot faster and save a lot of time when we do some projects.

✓ Typing is a lot faster and saves a lot of time when we do some projects.

The verb 'save' should be in third person singular 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'Typing'. Also, 'Typing' should be capitalised at the start of the sentence.