Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中时态使用不准确，语法错误较多，表达不自然。建议使用简单现在时或过去时，句子结构应更清晰，避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite often. I learned how to write when I was six years old, and during school, we usually write assignments by hand.

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰，词汇使用错误（如'diet'应为'diary'），句子结构混乱。建议用正确词汇，表达喜欢写日记的原因，并使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I like to write in my diary because it helps me remember important events and feelings from the past.

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱，语法错误，表达不明确。建议直接回答问题，并用清晰的理由支持观点。

Ví dụ: No, I don't think what I write will change because they are records of past events, which remain the same over time.

Gợi ý: 回答较为完整，表达了个人偏好和原因，但部分句子结构可更简洁自然。建议简化句子，避免重复。

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I have a special diary. Writing by hand feels more personal and helps me express my thoughts better.

× When I was six years old, I have been learnt about how to write and when we gather assignment, we usually write by our hands.

✓ When I was six years old, I learned how to write, and when we gathered assignments, we usually wrote by hand.

句子中使用了现在完成时态“have been learnt”，但描述的是过去发生的事情，应该使用一般过去时“learned”。另外，“gather assignment”应为过去式“gathered assignments”，且“write by our hands”表达不自然，改为“wrote by hand”。

× I have a notebook that I write a diary in it.

✓ I have a notebook in which I write a diary.

“write a diary in it”中“in it”重复且位置不当，应该使用“in which”来引导定语从句，避免重复。

× I very like writing diet because I think it is memorized when I sit after years.

✓ I really like writing a diary because I think it helps me remember when I look back after years.

“very like”用法错误，应该用副词“really like”。“writing diet”应为“writing a diary”。“it is memorized when I sit after years”表达不清，改为“helps me remember when I look back after years”更通顺。

× No, I don't think the things I would write will be change because the events happened many years ago and the facts there cannot be ordered.

✓ No, I don't think the things I write will change because the events happened many years ago and the facts cannot be changed.

“would write”与“will be change”时态和语态错误，应改为一般现在时“write”和一般将来时“will change”。“facts there cannot be ordered”表达不当，改为“facts cannot be changed”更符合语境。

× Therefore, my writing.

✓ Therefore, my writing remains unchanged.

该句缺少谓语动词，导致句子不完整，应补充谓语使句子完整。