Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but can be more natural and concise. Avoid repeating 'I write a lot' and use simpler phrases like 'various assignments' instead of 'different type of task'. Also, avoid unnecessary words like 'ma'am'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I write quite often because as a student, I have to complete various assignments given by my teachers.

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer clearer and more natural. Use correct grammar like 'I am able to write' and explain why you like writing stories or essays with specific reasons. Avoid vague phrases like 'it is good for me'.

Ví dụ: I enjoy writing long stories and essays because it helps me improve my writing skills and concentration, and I can write for two to three hours without stopping.

Gợi ý: Your answer is a bit unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to directly answer the question and explain how your writing changes over time with specific reasons. Use linking words for coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe the things I write will change over time because technology keeps evolving, which influences the topics and styles I use in my writing.

Gợi ý: Avoid grammatical errors like 'prefer to handwriting' and 'do not like to typing'. Use correct forms like 'prefer handwriting' and 'I don't like typing'. Also, explain your reasons clearly and politely without calling typing 'lazy'.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it helps me improve my penmanship, and I find typing tiring after a while.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural by using phrases like 'I enjoy keeping a diary' and 'writing about my daily activities'. Also, avoid repeating 'I like' and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: I enjoy keeping a diary and writing about my daily activities because it helps me preserve memories and reflect on my day.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammatical errors and is a bit unclear. Use singular/plural forms correctly and simpler sentences. Explain clearly that people use photos and videos to record life moments.

Ví dụ: People use different methods to record their lives, such as taking photos and videos on their mobile phones to capture special moments.

× I write a different type of task which is provided by my school ma'am.

✓ I write different types of tasks which are provided by my school ma'am.

The adjective 'different' should be used with plural noun 'types' to indicate variety, and 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match. Also, 'which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'tasks'. This improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I like to write long story or essay because it is good for me and I able to write continuously 2 to 3 hours which increase my handwriting also.

✓ I like to write long stories or essays because it is good for me and I am able to write continuously for 2 to 3 hours which also improves my handwriting.

'Story' and 'essay' should be plural to match 'long stories or essays'. The phrase 'I able' is missing the verb 'am'. 'Increase' should be 'improves' to agree with singular subject 'which'. Adding 'for' before '2 to 3 hours' is necessary for correct time expression.

× According to modern time period everything get changed day by day because technology is innovative and make different type of structure which is helpful for individual and save time.

✓ According to the modern time period, everything changes day by day because technology is innovative and makes different types of structures which are helpful for individuals and save time.

The verb 'get changed' should be 'changes' to correctly express present simple tense. 'Make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'technology'. 'Type' and 'structure' should be plural to match 'different types of structures'. 'Individual' should be plural 'individuals' to generalize. Adding 'the' before 'modern time period' is necessary.

× I prefer to handwriting because it enhances my handwriting and I do not like to typing because it is very lazy task for me and I feel very tired when I prefer to do typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it enhances my handwriting and I do not like typing because it is a very lazy task for me and I feel very tired when I do typing.

The verb 'prefer' is followed directly by the gerund without 'to'. So 'prefer to handwriting' should be 'prefer handwriting'. Similarly, 'like to typing' should be 'like typing'. 'A' is needed before 'very lazy task'. 'When I prefer to do typing' is incorrect; it should be 'when I do typing'.

× There are different type of method which is used by every individual to record their life structures such as photos or videos.

✓ There are different types of methods which are used by every individual to record their life events such as photos or videos.

'Type' and 'method' should be plural 'types' and 'methods' to agree with 'different'. 'Which is' should be 'which are' to agree with plural 'methods'. 'Life structures' is unclear; 'life events' is more appropriate.

× Individual use both these activity and capture their movements in a mobile phone for making memory.

✓ Individuals use both these activities and capture their movements on a mobile phone to make memories.

'Individual' should be plural 'Individuals' to match plural verb 'use'. 'Activity' should be plural 'activities' to match 'both these'. 'In a mobile phone' should be 'on a mobile phone'. 'For making memory' should be 'to make memories' for correct purpose expression.