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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you write a lot?

Thí sinh

No, but I used to in my college days.

Giám khảo

What do you like to write? Why?

Thí sinh

I love to write about motivation and topics.

Giám khảo

Do you think the things you write would change?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think so.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Thí sinh

I prefer handwriting has content written with hand heart directly connected brain.

Giám khảo

How often do you keep diaries?

Thí sinh

I don't keep diary, I just write my content in notes.

Giám khảo

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Thí sinh

I record myself, drop logging. I do it just for myself. I don't post it if you're polite. Recorded and see. I shot.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.5Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Do you write a lot?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is brief and somewhat natural, but it lacks detail and coherence. Try to provide a complete sentence with a reason or example to make your response more effective and natural.

Ví dụ: No, I don't write much these days, but I used to write a lot during my college days because I enjoyed journaling and writing essays.

What do you like to write? Why?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and incomplete. Specify what kind of topics you like to write about and explain why. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: I love to write about motivational topics because they inspire me and others to stay positive and work hard.

Do you think the things you write would change?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is too short and lacks explanation. Provide reasons or examples to support your opinion and make your answer more natural and effective.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think the things I write would change because my thoughts and values remain consistent over time.

Do you prefer typing or handwriting when you are writing?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and grammatically incorrect. Try to express your preference clearly and explain why, using proper sentence structure and linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because writing by hand helps me connect my thoughts directly with my heart and brain, making the process more personal.

How often do you keep diaries?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be improved by using correct grammar and providing more detail about your note-taking habits.

Ví dụ: I don't keep a diary regularly, but I often write notes to record my thoughts and important information.

What other methods do you use to record your life?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and lacks clarity. Try to organize your ideas logically, use correct grammar, and explain your methods clearly with examples.

Ví dụ: I record my life by making audio or video logs for myself. I don't share them publicly; I just review them later to reflect on my experiences.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I love to write about motivation and topics.

I love writing about motivation and topics.

The verb 'love' is commonly followed by the gerund form (-ing) when expressing likes or preferences. Using 'love to write' is not incorrect but 'love writing' sounds more natural in this context.

Sentence structure errors

× I prefer handwriting has content written with hand heart directly connected brain.

I prefer handwriting because the content written by hand connects the heart directly to the brain.

The original sentence lacks proper conjunctions and clear structure, making it confusing. Adding 'because' and restructuring the sentence clarifies the meaning and improves grammatical correctness.

Singular and plural issue

× I don't keep diary, I just write my content in notes.

I don't keep a diary; I just write my content in notes.

The noun 'diary' is countable and singular here, so it requires the indefinite article 'a'. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

Sentence structure errors

× I record myself, drop logging. I do it just for myself. I don't post it if you're polite. Recorded and see. I shot.

I record myself, doing vlog logging. I do it just for myself. I don't post it if I'm being polite. I record and watch. I shoot videos.

The original sentences are fragmented and unclear. 'Drop logging' is likely a mishearing or typo for 'vlog logging'. Correcting phrases and sentence structure improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

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