Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: start with a concise topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and sentence structure, avoid repetition, and limit to 2–3 sentences. Practice linking ideas with simple connectors (e.g., "but", "however").

Ví dụ: No, I don't write a lot nowadays. I usually read news PDFs and articles, but when I was in college I wrote many essays and notes for my classes.

Gợi ý: Respond with a clear topic sentence stating what you like to write, then explain why with specific reasons. Use correct word forms (important, important notes) and avoid filler sounds. Keep it to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: Nowadays I only write important notes that I need to remember because I want to keep key information. In college I used to write longer essays and study notes for every subject.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a specific reason with correct grammar. Avoid word repetition and use a linking phrase such as "because" or "since". One or two clear sentences are enough.

Ví dụ: No, I don't think what I write will change much because I typically note only important points that help me remember key information.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference sentence ("I prefer handwriting") and follow with a specific reason using correct grammar. Use linking words like "because" and avoid repeated words. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because writing by hand helps me remember information better. When I physically write notes, the ideas stick in my mind more easily.

Gợi ý: Give a direct frequency statement (e.g., "I rarely keep a diary") and explain your alternative method with specific details. Use correct verb forms and simple linking words. Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I rarely keep a diary, but I often use the notes app on my phone because it is always available. I quickly record thoughts or plans on my phone whenever I need to.

Gợi ý: Answer with a clear topic sentence naming the method (e.g., "I use photographs") and add a specific example or context. Use correct verb forms and avoid filler words. Keep it to 2–3 concise sentences and use linking words like "for example" or "when".

Ví dụ: One main method I use is taking photographs to record my life. For example, I usually take pictures when I prepare for trips or go out with friends to remember those moments.

× No, I don't write a lot nowadays.

✓ No, I don't write a lot nowadays.

No grammar error from the provided list. Sentence is acceptable.

× I say on the PDF or the article for the for the recent news.

✓ I read PDFs or articles about recent news.

Present tense usage and verb choice: 'say on' is incorrect for referring to reading written material. Use present simple 'read' for habitual action. Also pluralize 'PDFs' and use 'about' instead of 'for the'. Suggestion: use 'I read PDFs or articles about recent news.'

× But when I was in college when I lots of the.

✓ But when I was in college, I wrote a lot.

Past tense issue: the student mixes present words with past context. Use past simple 'wrote' for actions in college. Also 'lots of the' is ungrammatical; use 'a lot' or 'many things.'

× Uh, the nowadays I will write only a important things that, uh, have to I remember.

✓ Nowadays I only write important things that I have to remember.

Present tense and word order: 'the nowadays' and 'will write' are incorrect for habitual present; use present simple 'write'. Article use: 'a important things' should be 'important things' (no 'a' with plural). Also the relative clause order should be 'that I have to remember.'

× But when I was in a college, I write importers Importance not.

✓ But when I was in college, I wrote important notes.

Past tense issue and word choice: 'write' should be 'wrote' for past. 'importers Importance not' is unclear; likely 'important notes.' Remove articles: 'in college' not 'in a college.'

× No, I don't think the things I write would change because I write those who who are the important important notes so I can easily remember it.

✓ No, I don't think the things I write will change because I write important notes so I can easily remember them.

Future tense and pronoun/agreement issues: 'would change' is less appropriate than 'will change' for a prediction; both can be used but 'will' fits here. 'Those who who are the important important notes' is incorrect wording — use 'important notes.' Pronoun agreement: 'it' should be 'them' to agree with 'notes.'

× I prefer a handwriting because of the when I I am write some things so I can easily uh, remembering the mind and the my handle hand handle is writing the things so it can be easy to memorizing the thing.

✓ I prefer handwriting because when I write things, I can remember them more easily.

Article errors and verb forms: 'a handwriting' is incorrect; 'handwriting' is uncountable so no article. Remove filler words. Use present simple 'write' for habitual action. Use correct verb form 'remember' (not 'remembering') and plural pronoun 'them' to match 'things.' Simplify sentence for clarity.

× No I don't often keep Diaries but I often not down in my mobile phone notes app because they are the easily available with me.

✓ No, I don't often keep a diary, but I often write notes in my phone's Notes app because it is easily available to me.

Article and noun errors: 'Diaries' with capitalization is odd; use singular 'a diary' for habit or 'diaries' plural with different structure. Use verb 'write' instead of 'not down.' Possessive: 'my mobile phone notes app' should be 'my phone's Notes app.' Use singular agreement 'it is' for the app. 'easily available to me' is correct phrasing.

× Mobile phone are always available so I can whenever I have to the write down so I open the mobile.

✓ My mobile phone is always available, so whenever I need to write something down, I open it.

Subject-verb agreement and word order: 'Mobile phone are' should be 'My mobile phone is.' Word order: 'whenever I have to write down' should be 'whenever I need to write something down.' Use pronoun 'it' for the phone.

× So there are the 1 so based method to record my life is the photograph I whenever I getting the get get ready or the outside outside for the trip.

✓ One basic way I record my life is with photographs; I take pictures whenever I get ready or go out for a trip.

Sentence structure errors: 'So there are the 1 so based method' is ungrammatical. Use 'One basic way' or 'One method' and correct verb phrases: 'I take pictures whenever I get ready or go out for a trip.' Remove repeated words.

× So uh, that was I clicking the pictures. So there are the record my life.

✓ So I click pictures to record my life.

Sentence structure and tense: 'that was I clicking the pictures' is incorrect; use simple present 'I click pictures' or 'I take pictures' for habitual action. Simplify to 'I click pictures to record my life.'