Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and directly structured: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief extent), then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid redundancy and long clauses. Also correct minor grammar (e.g., "get a higher band score").

Ví dụ: Yes, I write regularly while preparing for exams. For example, I practice writing essays three times a week to improve grammar and vocabulary so I can achieve a higher band score.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and use correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., "memories," "useful days," "IELTS"). Use linking words to connect reason and example. Be specific about what you record and how you share it. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer writing about my travel experiences because it helps me record memories and share them with friends. For example, on my trip to Singapore last year I kept a travel journal and posted photos online so my friends could see the places I visited.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence answering the question, then explain reasons with linking words (e.g., "because," "so"). Use correct tense and word forms (e.g., "I focused," "I am focusing"). Be specific about how your topics might change in the future.

Ví dụ: Yes, they might change because my priorities have shifted. Last year I mostly wrote about travel experiences and attractions, but now I am focusing on IELTS preparation, so I write more practice essays than personal journals.

Gợi ý: Begin with a clear statement of preference then give 2 specific reasons linked with connectors. Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., "It also feels," "keeping a handwritten journal"). Avoid unclear phrases like "thickness and the style of my stroke."

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because I write faster by hand and it feels more personal and expressive. For example, I enjoy keeping a handwritten journal because the physical pages and my handwriting make memories more memorable than typing.

Gợi ý: Answer directly with a clear past/habitual structure and then contrast with the present using linking words (e.g., "but," "however"). Use correct words ("diary," "almost every day"). Add one specific detail about what you recorded to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: I used to keep a diary almost every day in high school, recording my daily experiences and activities with friends. However, since I started working my schedule is very busy, so I rarely write now.

Gợi ý: Start with a concise topic sentence, then give one or two specific methods with linking words and correct vocabulary (e.g., "I don't have a strict method, but I keep a travel journal"). Be specific about how you arrange photos and notes and avoid filler words. Correct grammar ("I print photos," "they are covered").

Ví dụ: I don't have a strict method, but I keep a travel journal to record trips. For example, after visiting Singapore last year I printed photos and glued them into my journal, added stickers and short notes about where I went and what I ate to make the memories more vivid.

× I don't work very much at the moment because I'm preparing for my other exams, so I often practice writing essays several times a week, focusing on correcting my grammar and improving my vocabulary so I can get a higher score band.

✓ I am not working very much at the moment because I am preparing for my other exams, so I often practice writing essays several times a week, focusing on correcting my grammar and improving my vocabulary so I can achieve a higher band score.

Minor verb choice and word order: 'don't work very much' is acceptable informally but 'I am not working very much' matches the continuous sense 'at the moment'. 'get a higher score band' is unidiomatic; use 'achieve a higher band score'. No explicit Grammar_Problem_Type_List ID applies, so left blank.

× I like writing about my travel experience because it helped me record memory and share useful day with friends.

✓ I like writing about my travel experiences because it helps me record memories and share useful days with friends.

Singular/plural issue: 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' to match general practice; 'helped' should be present tense 'helps' to match habitual action; 'memory' and 'day' need plural forms 'memories' and 'days'.

× For example, during a trip to Singapore last year, I keep travel journal and posted photos so my friend could see the place I visited.

✓ For example, during a trip to Singapore last year, I kept a travel journal and posted photos so my friends could see the places I visited.

Present tense issue: The sentence refers to last year, so past tense should be used consistently: 'keep' -> 'kept', 'posted' is fine but 'my friend' should be plural 'my friends' if sharing with more than one; 'place' -> 'places' to match multiple visits.

× At the moment I realised because I'm focusing on my aisles exam and don't have much free time.

✓ At the moment I realize I am focusing on my IELTS exam and don't have much free time.

Present tense issue and spelling: 'realised' (past) should be 'realize' if referring to current awareness; 'aisles' is misspelling of 'IELTS'. Use present continuous 'I am focusing' (already present).

× Yes, I think it's possible. I think the topic I write last year is about my travel experience where I have travel book and I write the moment or the tourist attraction that I visited.

✓ Yes, I think it's possible. I think the topics I wrote about last year were about my travel experiences, where I kept a travel journal and wrote about moments or the tourist attractions that I visited.

Present tense issue and agreement: 'I write last year' mixes tenses; use past 'I wrote about last year'. 'topic' -> 'topics' and 'experience' -> 'experiences' for plurality; 'have travel book' -> 'kept a travel journal'; 'I write the moment' -> 'wrote about moments'.

× But this time I didn't have much time so instead I focusing more on my IELTS test.

✓ But this time I didn't have much time, so instead I am focusing more on my IELTS test.

Present tense issue: Mixed past and present; 'didn't have' (past) refers to specific past period but speaker means current situation—use present continuous 'I am focusing' to show current action; add comma for clarity.

× So I don't really have time to write.

✓ So I don't really have time to write.

No change needed; sentence correctly uses present tense to describe current lack of time. No Grammar_Problem_Type_List ID applies, so left blank.

× I prefer handwriting because I can write more quickly and the thickness and the style of my stroke make the writing more expressive.

✓ I prefer handwriting because I can write more quickly, and the thickness and style of my strokes make the writing more expressive.

Present tense issue and agreement: 'the style of my stroke' -> 'the style of my strokes' to match plural 'thickness and style' affecting 'strokes'; added comma for readability.

× It also feel more personal and memorable.

✓ It also feels more personal and memorable.

Present tense issue: Subject-verb agreement in present simple requires 'feels' for singular subject 'It'.

× For example, I enjoy keeping high in writing journal rather than typing my talk.

✓ For example, I enjoy keeping a handwritten journal rather than typing my notes.

Singular/plural and word choice: 'keeping high in writing journal' is ungrammatical; 'a handwritten journal' is the correct noun phrase; 'my talk' is unclear—'my notes' fits context.

× I used to keep dairy when I was in high school and I wrote in almost every day, recording my daily experience and the activity I did with my friend.

✓ I used to keep a diary when I was in high school and I wrote in it almost every day, recording my daily experiences and the activities I did with my friends.

Present tense issue and pluralization: 'dairy' -> 'diary'; add 'in it' to clarify; 'experience' -> 'experiences'; 'activity' -> 'activities'; 'my friend' -> 'my friends' for generality.

× But now since I work, my schedule is very busy and I don't really have time to write anymore.

✓ But now that I work, my schedule is very busy and I don't really have time to write anymore.

Present tense issue: 'since I work' is acceptable but 'now that I work' is clearer to indicate cause; sentence otherwise correct.

× I don't have a strict method for recording my live but I keep a travel journal where either comment or own my trip abroad.

✓ I don't have a strict method for recording my life, but I keep a travel journal where I either comment on or note my trips abroad.

Singular/plural and word choice: 'live' -> 'life'; 'either comment or own my trip' is incorrect—use 'either comment on or note my trips' and pluralize 'trips' if more than one.

× For example last year I went to Singapore and I print the photo and put it my journal.

✓ For example, last year I went to Singapore and I printed the photos and put them in my journal.

Present tense issue and pronoun agreement: Past event requires past tense 'printed' not 'print'; 'photo' -> plural 'photos' if multiple; include 'them' as object and 'in' for location.

× They covered with page with sticker and even white uh short note where I'm going, the food I eat and it make memory more vivid and easy to revisit.

✓ They are covered with pages of stickers and even short handwritten notes about where I went, the food I ate, and they make the memories more vivid and easy to revisit.

Incorrect preposition and multiple tense issues: 'covered with page with sticker' -> 'covered with pages of stickers'; 'where I'm going' should be past 'where I went'; 'the food I eat' -> 'the food I ate'; 'it make' -> 'they make' to agree with plural subject 'notes' or 'pages'; corrected for clarity and agreement.