Writing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: start with a short topic sentence stating whether you write a lot, then give 1–2 brief supporting reasons using simple linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Avoid unclear fragments and keep sentences grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: No, I don't write a lot. I usually type on my mobile device for messages and notes, so I rarely write by hand.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly: say what you like to write (e.g., diary, stories, lists) and give a clear reason. Use one linking word (because/so) and provide a concrete detail or example.

Ví dụ: I like to write a personal diary because it helps me record important moments and reflect on my day. For example, I write about meetings or conversations that affected me.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion and explain why with 1–2 supporting points. Use clear linking words (e.g., "because", "so") and avoid repetition. Mention how editing or new experiences can change your writing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think my writing will change because I often edit and improve my texts. Also, as I gain new experiences my topics and style will become more mature.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference (typing or handwriting) and give one or two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Mention a concrete detail such as speed, convenience, or tactile feeling.

Ví dụ: I prefer handwriting because it feels natural to me and I enjoy the tactile sensation of pen on paper. However, I also type when I need speed or to share something online.

Gợi ý: Give a clear frequency (e.g., daily, weekly) and explain briefly why you follow that routine, using a linking word like "but" or "so". Keep sentences simple and grammatical.

Ví dụ: I don't write daily; I try to update my diary about once a week because writing every day is difficult with my busy schedule.

Gợi ý: Answer directly by naming methods (photos, videos, apps) and give a clear reason or example for each. Use linking words (e.g., "for example", "because") and keep sentences concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: Besides writing, I record my life with photos and videos because they capture moments more vividly. For example, I take short videos when I travel to remember places and sounds.

× No, I'm not. I'm not language only if I click on that I think and usually mobile devices.

✓ No, I don't. I don't write by hand; I only do it when I type on my mobile device.

The student used incorrect pronouns and auxiliary verbs ('I'm not' for 'I do not') and unclear phrasing. Use 'do' as the auxiliary for the present simple negative 'I don't write'. Replace 'language only if I click on that I think' with a clear clause: 'I only do it when I type on my mobile device.' This fixes pronoun/auxiliary misuse and clarifies meaning.

× I like to watch because it is recognize my life and we've covered my and I can.

✓ I like to write because it helps me reflect on my life and I can cover my experiences.

The student used incorrect verbs and pronouns ('watch', 'it is recognize my life', 'we've covered my'). The intended meaning is about writing, so change 'watch' to 'write' and use 'helps me reflect on my life' and 'cover my experiences' to make pronoun reference and verb choice correct.

× Yeah, absolutely. Right it is. It's a right. It can change because we we have to, we have make to, we have to make this type and we can correct it.

✓ Yeah, absolutely. It can change because we have to make changes and we can correct them.

Problems include redundant fragments and incorrect verb forms ('have make to'). Use present simple 'we have to' plus infinitive 'make changes' and plural 'them' for 'changes'. This corrects tense and verb form and clarifies meaning.

× I prefer and write and write to write our writing because it is it used to me, because when I grow up I usually write things or not by my hands and I like the pasture feeling.

✓ I prefer typing rather than handwriting because I'm used to it; when I was growing up I usually typed things, and I like the tactile feeling of a keyboard.

Pronoun and phrasing errors ('I prefer and write and write to write our writing', 'it used to me'). Use 'prefer typing rather than handwriting' to express preference, 'I'm used to it' for habitual state, and correct tense for past habit 'when I was growing up'. Clarify 'pasture' to 'tactile' or 'tactile feeling of a keyboard' based on intended meaning.

× I in my diary was great, I wanted write every day but it is pretty hard work for me so I try to like my diary once a week.

✓ When I kept a diary it was great; I wanted to write every day, but it was too hard for me, so I try to write in my diary once a week.

Errors include incorrect word order ('I in my diary was great'), missing past tense forms ('wanted write' → 'wanted to write'), and inconsistent tense. Use past tense 'kept', 'wanted', 'was', and present habit 'I try to write once a week' to match the meaning.

× What are you repeated by life is taking picture or video? I think it is more video and I can capture for effectually to your hotel and I can fill the deployment in so.

✓ The ways I record my life are taking pictures or videos. I prefer videos because I can capture moments more effectively and store them on my phone.

Sentence had many pronoun and word-choice errors ('What are you repeated by life is taking picture or video', 'capture for effectually to your hotel', 'fill the deployment in'). Rewrite to 'The ways I record my life are taking pictures or videos.' Use 'prefer videos' and 'capture moments more effectively' and 'store them on my phone' to convey intended meaning. This fixes pronoun use and incorrect vocabulary.