Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议简化句子结构，准确描述天气情况，并避免矛盾（如“cold and raining”与“high temperature”不符）。

Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually hot and rainy because the city is near the equator. For example, in summer, temperatures often rise above 30 degrees Celsius.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法不完整的问题，建议使用连贯的句子表达偏好，并用连接词清晰说明原因。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because although it can be sweaty, I dislike wearing many layers in cold weather. Also, cold weather often keeps me indoors, which I find boring.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较具体，但语法和表达需改进，建议注意时态和词汇准确性，避免拼写错误。

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because dry weather makes my skin crack and feel uncomfortable. For example, when I was in Egypt, my skin became dry and irritated.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，建议简化句子，正确使用时间表达和词汇，避免重复和错误。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually check the weather forecast every evening to see if it will rain the next day. This helps me remember to bring an umbrella.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不清，建议使用简单句子准确描述气候变化的影响，并避免拼写错误。

Ví dụ: Climate change has caused summers to become hotter than before. Also, extreme events like floods happen more often now.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅，建议用连贯的句子表达观点，并正确使用时态和词汇。

Ví dụ: I would not like to visit cities with different climates. For example, when I visited the UK two years ago, it rained every day, so I had to carry an umbrella all the time, which was uncomfortable for me.

× Wild weathered in my living place is always cold and raining because this city is really near the equator, so its location always brings to a high temperature.

✓ The weather in my living place is always cold and rainy because this city is really near the equator, so its location always brings a high temperature.

“Wild weathered”是错误的表达，应为“the weather”。“raining”是动词形式，需改为形容词“rainy”来描述天气。

× Wild weathered in my living place is always cold and raining because this city is really near the equator, so its location always brings to a high temperature.

✓ The weather in my living place is always cold and rainy because this city is really near the equator, so its location always brings a high temperature.

“brings to a high temperature”中“to”是不必要的，应直接用“brings a high temperature”。

× In the summer, for example, the temperature is always above 30 percent, 30° and.

✓ In the summer, for example, the temperature is always above 30 degrees Celsius.

“30 percent”用法错误，应使用“30 degrees Celsius”表示温度。句尾“30° and”不完整，应删除。

× All I do prefer hot weather, although the hot weather means uh, I'll be always wet, but uh, compared to the cold weather, I need to wear layers on layers clothes, which I don't really like it.

✓ I do prefer hot weather, although hot weather means I'll always be wet, but compared to cold weather, I need to wear layers of clothes, which I don't really like.

“All I do prefer”结构不正确，应为“I do prefer”。“layers on layers clothes”应为“layers of clothes”。“I don't really like it”中“it”多余。

× All I do prefer hot weather, although the hot weather means uh, I'll be always wet, but uh, compared to the cold weather, I need to wear layers on layers clothes, which I don't really like it.

✓ I do prefer hot weather, although hot weather means I'll always be wet, but compared to cold weather, I need to wear layers of clothes, which I don't really like.

“which I don't really like it”中“it”是多余的代词，应删除。

× And in the cold weather I must stay at home because outside is too cold, which.

✓ And in cold weather, I must stay at home because it is too cold outside.

句子末尾“which”无意义，且句子结构不完整，应改为完整句子。

× I do prefer the wet weather because when the weather is really dry, my skins will soon become cracking which is really uncomfortable for me.

✓ I do prefer wet weather because when the weather is really dry, my skin soon becomes cracked, which is really uncomfortable for me.

“skins”应为不可数名词“skin”。“become cracking”应改为“becomes cracked”或“cracks”。

× So for example, when I was located in some places like WE Egypt, my skins are really uncomfortable and pink.

✓ For example, when I was in some places like Egypt, my skin was really uncomfortable and pink.

“was located in”用法不自然，改为“was in”。“skins”应为“skin”。“are”应改为过去时“was”，与时间状语“when I was”一致。

× Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast in the evening before the tomorrow before the next day.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast in the evening before tomorrow or the next day.

“before the tomorrow before the next day”表达重复且错误，应简化为“before tomorrow or the next day”。

× Because I if tomorrow it will be raining, it's better for me to note it in the wounds so I can bring a umbrella.

✓ Because if it will rain tomorrow, it's better for me to note it down so I can bring an umbrella.

“note it in the wounds”错误，应为“note it down”。“a umbrella”前应使用“an”。

× An umbrella with meat to avoid potential wet.

✓ An umbrella with me to avoid getting wet.

“with meat”应为“with me”。“potential wet”表达不自然，应改为“getting wet”。

× Well, there are several effects. For example, the weather in summer nowadays are small, it's much hotter than before and extremely phenomenons has been occurred.

✓ Well, there are several effects. For example, the weather in summer nowadays is hotter than before and extreme phenomena have occurred.

“weather ... are”应为“weather ... is”。“phenomenons”应为复数“phenomena”。“has been occurred”错误，应为“have occurred”。

× For example, the Super big floor is frequently than before.

✓ For example, the super big flood is more frequent than before.

“floor”应为“flood”。“is frequently than before”应为“is more frequent than before”。

× Note, I would not like to do that.

✓ No, I would not like to do that.

“Note”应为“No”，表示否定回答。

× For example, when I visited the United Kingdom two years ago, the weather there was always rainy, which so I need to bring brought my umbrella with me every time, every day.

✓ For example, when I visited the United Kingdom two years ago, the weather there was always rainy, so I needed to bring my umbrella with me every day.

“which so”应为“so”。“need to bring brought”时态混乱，应为过去时“needed to bring”。

× It made me feel really uncomfortable.

✓ It made me feel really uncomfortable.

此句无语法错误，无需修改。