Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法有小错误，如"make"应为"makes"，且表达可以更自然流畅。建议简化句子结构，避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: The weather in my city is usually very hot during summer, with temperatures reaching nearly 40°C, which makes it uncomfortable to go outside.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，如"make"应为"makes"，表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并注意语法一致性。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I dislike wearing many layers of clothing in winter, which makes me feel uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复且表达不够连贯，建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复。

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because it keeps my fish healthy and helps my plants stay moist, so I don't have to water them often.

Gợi ý: 回答较完整，但有语法错误，如"so it I can"应为"so I can"。建议注意句子结构和语法准确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning using a weather app on my phone so I can dress appropriately and be prepared for any changes.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达错误，如"hurricane Toronto"不准确，句子不完整。建议使用准确的词汇和完整句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has caused more extreme weather events like hurricanes, floods, and droughts, which have seriously damaged ecosystems.

Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议简化句子，注意主谓一致，并清楚表达意图。

Ví dụ: Yes, I want to visit cities with different climates to experience them and decide which one suits me best for living in the future.

× It can be very hot with temperature reaching almost 40°C, which make it uncomfortable for people to go outside.

✓ It can be very hot with temperatures reaching almost 40°C, which makes it uncomfortable for people to go outside.

temperature 应该用复数形式 temperatures，因为这里指的是多次或多种温度情况；动词 make 应该用第三人称单数 makes，因为主语是 which 指代前面的单数主语 temperature(s)的整体情况。

× I think it's just like make me uncomfortable.

✓ I think it just makes me uncomfortable.

句中 'just like make' 结构不正确，应改为 'just makes'，使句子语法正确且表达清晰。

× It can make my plantation more moist and I don't need to water them.

✓ It can make my plants more moist and I don't need to water them.

plantation 通常指大面积种植园，不适合此处表达，改为复数 plants 更合适，且与后文的代词 them 一致。

× I often use a weather app on my phone to get the latest information of the weather so it I can be prepared for any changes in the weather.

✓ I often use a weather app on my phone to get the latest information about the weather so I can be prepared for any changes in the weather.

介词 'information' 后应接 about 而非 of，且句中多余的 it 应删除。

× In recent years, climate change has had significant effects on both the environment and society For example, we have seen an increase in extreme weather events such as hurricane Toronto, floods and droughts, which have caused many. Damage to ecosystem.

✓ In recent years, climate change has had significant effects on both the environment and society. For example, we have seen an increase in extreme weather events such as hurricanes, tornadoes, floods, and droughts, which have caused much damage to ecosystems.

句子缺少句号导致结构混乱；hurricane Toronto 应为 hurricanes 和 tornadoes；Damage 前不应有句号；ecosystem 应用复数 ecosystems。

× Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because it allow me to have a chance to experience different climate and I can select the suitable one for me to live in and in the future may I can select relevant.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities with different climates because it allows me to have a chance to experience different climates and I can select the suitable one for me to live in, and in the future I may select a relevant one.

allow 应用第三人称单数 allows；climate 应用复数 climates；句子结构混乱，需调整连接词和语序；may I can 语法错误，应改为 I may。