Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免地理错误（杭州不在中国北部），并且表达应更自然流畅。可以简洁描述天气特点，避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: The weather in my hometown, Hangzhou, is quite varied. Summers are hot and humid, which can be uncomfortable, while winters are cold and damp.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。应完整表达观点，避免句子残缺，并使用连贯的连接词。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I can easily stay warm by wearing coats or jackets. However, hot weather makes me feel very uncomfortable and tired.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节描述。

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because I enjoy the sound and smell of rain. On the other hand, dry weather often feels too hot and makes me uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语法错误。应完整表达习惯和原因，避免重复和句子残缺。

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast almost every day, especially to know if I need to bring an umbrella on rainy days or dress warmly in winter.

Gợi ý: 表达不够准确，词汇使用不当（如“some stones”不明确）。应具体说明气候变化的影响并使用恰当词汇。

Ví dụ: In recent years, climate change has caused extreme weather events such as acid rain and storms, which harm the environment and people's health.

Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误（uncles应为uncomfortable），表达重复且不够自然。应简洁表达观点并避免错误。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I prefer not to visit cities with very different climates because I might find it hard to adapt and feel uncomfortable.

× I live in Hangzhou, a northern part of China, and the weather in summer is very hot, which makes me feel uneasy and trouble.

✓ I live in Hangzhou, a northern part of China, and the weather in summer is very hot, which makes me feel uneasy and troubled.

这里的'trouble'用作名词时不合适，应该用形容词'troubled'来描述感受。

× For that I must.

✓ For that, I must avoid it.

句子不完整，缺少谓语动词，导致表达不清楚。需要补充动词使句子完整。

× I need to let with an umbrella if if there is a rainy day or winter day.

✓ I need to take an umbrella if there is a rainy day or winter day.

动词'let'用法错误，应使用'take'表示带伞。重复的'if'应删除。

× In in recent years, climate changes bring some negative effects which can cause some extreme weather events like acid rains or some stones.

✓ In recent years, climate change has brought some negative effects which can cause some extreme weather events like acid rain or hailstones.

'climate changes'应为不可数名词'climate change'；'acid rains'应为不可数名词'acid rain'；'some stones'应具体为'hailstones'。

× which may make me feel uncles, comfortable and uneasy.

✓ which may make me feel unwell, uncomfortable and uneasy.

'uncles'拼写错误，应为'unwell'；'comfortable'与上下文矛盾，应为'uncomfortable'。