Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use correct tense and sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, then add specific details using linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: The weather where I live is mostly chilly, although sometimes it can be sunny. People generally prefer this kind of weather because it is comfortable and pleasant.

Gợi ý: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and improve sentence clarity. Begin with a direct answer, then explain your preference with specific reasons and linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I enjoy the cozy atmosphere during winter. The beautiful scenery from my room makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Gợi ý: Make your sentences more concise and clear. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons for your preference.

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather, especially during the monsoon season, because I live in Gujarat, which is known for its wet climate. Many people enjoy this refreshing weather.

Gợi ý: Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Start with a clear statement, then explain your reason with specific examples and linking words.

Ví dụ: No, I do not check the weather forecast daily because it is often inaccurate. For example, sometimes it shows rain, but it does not actually rain.

Gợi ý: Clarify your ideas and use correct terminology. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain causes and effects with linking words and specific details.

Ví dụ: One major effect of climate change in recent years is global warming. This is mainly caused by deforestation, which reduces the absorption of CO2, leading to higher temperatures.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and clarity. Start with a direct answer, then provide specific reasons and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For instance, I live in a dry state, but I enjoy the cozy weather in Maharashtra, which makes it an attractive place to visit.

× I lived in the weather like sometimes it should be sunny and sometimes it should be a chilly but additionally the weather I lived is mostly a chilly type and everyone and the weather is preferable for all the people where I lived.

✓ I live in a place where sometimes it is sunny and sometimes it is chilly, but mostly the weather is chilly and preferable for all the people where I live.

The student incorrectly used the past tense 'lived' instead of the present tense 'live' to describe their current living situation. Since the question asks about the current weather, present tense should be used. Also, 'should be' is incorrect here; 'is' is appropriate to describe habitual or general truths.

× sometimes it should be sunny and sometimes it should be a chilly

✓ sometimes it is sunny and sometimes it is chilly

The use of 'should be' is incorrect when describing usual weather conditions. 'Should' implies obligation or expectation, which is not suitable here. The correct verb is 'is' to state facts about the weather.

× sometimes it should be a chilly

✓ sometimes it is chilly

'Chilly' is an adjective and should not be preceded by the article 'a'. The phrase 'a chilly' is incorrect. The correct form is 'it is chilly'.

× the weather I lived is mostly a chilly type

✓ the weather where I live is mostly chilly

The phrase 'a chilly type' is awkward and incorrect. 'Chilly' is an adjective describing the weather, so 'mostly chilly' is correct. Also, 'I lived' should be 'I live' as explained earlier.

× and everyone and the weather is preferable for all the people where I lived.

✓ and the weather is preferable for all the people where I live.

The phrase 'and everyone and the weather' is redundant and confusing. Removing the extra 'and everyone' clarifies the sentence. Also, 'where I lived' should be 'where I live' for present tense.

× I like winter season because in winter season, I love the cozy atmosphere and it and the scenario from my room should be a beautiful and it gives me happiness.

✓ I like the winter season because I love the cozy atmosphere and the view from my room is beautiful, which gives me happiness.

'Should be a beautiful' is incorrect; 'is beautiful' is appropriate to describe a fact. Also, 'scenario' is better replaced with 'view' in this context. The sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× I prefer wet weather because I like mostly monsoon season as I lived in a wet state like Gujarat and mostly Gujarat is preferred to be as wet state and everyone can enjoy in this weather.

✓ I prefer wet weather because I mostly like the monsoon season as I live in a wet state like Gujarat, and mostly Gujarat is considered a wet state where everyone can enjoy this weather.

'I lived' should be 'I live' for present tense. 'Preferred to be as wet state' is incorrect; 'considered a wet state' is correct. Also, 'enjoy in this weather' should be 'enjoy this weather' without 'in'.

× everyone can enjoy in this weather.

✓ everyone can enjoy this weather.

The preposition 'in' is unnecessary here. The verb 'enjoy' is directly followed by the object without a preposition.

× No, I'm not that type of person who daily checking the weather forecast because, uh, not for weather forecasting is correct all the time and when it should be show that it's raining today it's not.

✓ No, I'm not the type of person who checks the weather forecast daily because weather forecasts are not always correct, and sometimes it shows that it's raining today when it is not.

'Who daily checking' is incorrect; it should be 'who checks daily' to maintain subject-verb agreement and proper tense. 'Not for weather forecasting is correct' is awkward; 'weather forecasts are not always correct' is clearer. 'When it should be show' is incorrect; 'sometimes it shows' is correct.

× I don't have that habit to checking the weather for.

✓ I don't have the habit of checking the weather.

After 'habit', the correct preposition is 'of' followed by the gerund form 'checking'. 'To checking' is incorrect.

× The effect of climate change in the recent years is mostly the global warming because, uh, global warming is mainly affected through the societies, like societies cutting the trees and uh, through the tree cutting of the trees, there is a decrease in the CO2 process and with the help of that, people are more likely.

✓ The effect of climate change in recent years is mostly global warming because global warming is mainly caused by societies cutting trees, which decreases the absorption of CO2, and as a result, people are more affected.

'The global warming' should be 'global warming' without 'the'. 'Societies cutting the trees' is awkward; 'societies cutting trees' is better. 'Decrease in the CO2 process' is unclear; it should be 'decreases the absorption of CO2'. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× Yes, I like to visit other cities that have different climates like I am lived in dry state but I mostly like Maharashtra city because in Maharashtra cities people lived in like in people lived in cozy, uh, weather and there.

✓ Yes, I like to visit other cities that have different climates. I live in a dry state, but I mostly like Maharashtra because people there live in a cozy climate.

'I am lived' is incorrect; it should be 'I live'. 'People lived in' should be 'people live in' for present tense. The sentence is simplified and corrected for grammar and clarity.