Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和用词不当，如“whether”应为“weather”，并且句子结构应更简洁自然。建议直接描述天气特点，避免冗长。

Ví dụ: I live in central China, where the weather in summer is extremely hot, often reaching 40°C. It becomes very uncomfortable to study outdoors, especially around noon.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在数字错误（47°C应为40°C），且表达不够连贯。建议使用更准确的数字和连贯的句子表达偏好。

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I find hot weather exhausting, especially when temperatures reach 40°C. It's hard to live without air conditioning in such heat.

Gợi ý: 回答中语言不够正式且表达混乱，建议使用更规范的表达，避免口语化和重复。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because I dislike feeling sweaty all day. However, wet weather can be refreshing and helps moisturize the skin.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“foreign habits”应为“a habit”，且用词不当。建议简洁明了地表达习惯和原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have developed a habit of checking the weather forecast every day since I started university because the weather changes frequently here.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但语法和用词需改进，如“threatens many kinds of animals to get to extinct”应为“threatens many animal species with extinction”。建议注意语法准确性。

Ví dụ: In my opinion, the effects of climate change have become more obvious recently. For example, summer temperatures are rising, glaciers are melting rapidly, and many animal species are threatened with extinction.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“might be get cold”应为“might be cold”，且“skiing stuffs”应为“skiing activities”。建议表达更流畅自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I would like to visit cities with colder climates when it's very hot in my city. For example, I could try skiing, which would broaden my horizons and deepen my understanding of the world.

× I'm currently living in a university that is located in the center of China, and whether there gets extremely hot in summer, sometimes reaching 40°C, it makes it super uncomfortable whenever I have to study outdoors, especially at noon.

✓ I'm currently living in a university that is located in the center of China, and the weather gets extremely hot in summer, sometimes reaching 40°C, which makes it super uncomfortable whenever I have to study outdoors, especially at noon.

句中使用了错误的词“whether”，应为“weather”（天气）。这是典型的“there be”问题，因为“weather”是不可数名词，不能用“there is/are”结构。应直接说“the weather gets extremely hot”。

× I would say if I have to choose I will choose a cold weather and like I said 47°C is just enough for me.

✓ I would say if I have to choose I will choose cold weather and like I said 47°C is just enough for me.

“weather”是不可数名词，不应加冠词“a”。错误地使用了单数可数名词形式。应去掉冠词，直接使用“cold weather”。

× I am tired of just sweating all day long as I live.

✓ I am tired of just sweating all day long where I live.

短语“as I live”用法不当，应使用“where I live”表示“我居住的地方”。这是介词使用错误。

× I would like to say I prefer dry weather 'cause it's disgusting to get sweaty for all day long.

✓ I would like to say I prefer dry weather 'cause it's disgusting to be sweaty all day long.

“get sweaty for all day long”表达不自然，且“for”用法错误。应改为“be sweaty all day long”，更符合英语习惯。

× If you gotta get out in the wet weather, however, you can always use it like moisturizer to help you get through the dry the wet the dry weather.

✓ If you gotta get out in the wet weather, however, you can always use it like moisturizer to help you get through the dry weather.

句中“the dry the wet the dry weather”重复且混乱，应去掉多余部分，保持句子清晰。这里是介词和词序错误。

× Yes, I I have foreign habits of checking the weather forecast ever since I've entered the university because it is an essential part of China.

✓ Yes, I have a habit of checking the weather forecast ever since I've entered the university because it is an essential part of life in China.

“foreign habits”用法错误，应为“a habit”表示习惯；“essential part of China”表达不准确，应为“essential part of life in China”。这是量词和表达错误。

× And the weather just changed very oftenly.

✓ And the weather just changes very often.

“oftenly”不是正确的副词形式，应使用“often”；同时时态应与上下文一致，使用一般现在时“changes”。

× Like it's sunny and the next the next minute it just rains have been raining dog.

✓ Like it's sunny and the next minute it just starts raining cats and dogs.

句子结构混乱，“rains have been raining dog”不合语法，应改为“starts raining cats and dogs”，这是常用表达。

× From my perspective, the effects of climate change in recent years has become more and more obvious.

✓ From my perspective, the effects of climate change in recent years have become more and more obvious.

主语“effects”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“have”，这是主谓一致错误。

× and threatens many kinds of animals to get to extinct.

✓ and threatens many kinds of animals with extinction.

“threatens ... to get to extinct”表达错误，应使用“threatens ... with extinction”，这是介词使用错误。

× Yes, definitely. I think it would be a good experience to visit some cities that might be get cold when it's when it's super hot in my city, like I can try some skiing stuffs.

✓ Yes, definitely. I think it would be a good experience to visit some cities that might get cold when it's super hot in my city, like I can try some skiing stuff.

“might be get cold”结构错误，应为“might get cold”；“stuffs”是不可数名词“stuff”的错误复数形式，应为“stuff”。这是形容词/副词和名词复数错误。