Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer needs to be clearer and more structured. Start with a direct statement about the weather, then add specific details. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: I live in Mccarroll, which has a warm and rainy climate throughout the year. Because of this, the weather is quite comfortable for people who enjoy mild temperatures and occasional rain.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more direct and grammatically correct. Clearly state your preference first, then explain why with specific reasons. Avoid unclear phrases and improve sentence structure.

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I have never experienced it before. I would love to live somewhere cold to enjoy the beautiful snow and the unique atmosphere it creates.

Gợi ý: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Start with your preference, then explain why with specific details. Avoid filler words and improve sentence flow with linking words.

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me sweat all day, and I dislike the feeling of wet clothes sticking to my skin. Therefore, dry weather is my top choice.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more concise and clear. Begin with a direct response, then explain when and why you check the forecast. Avoid irrelevant information and improve grammar.

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning because it helps me plan my day and decide what to wear.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but needs clearer structure and vocabulary. Start with a general statement, then give specific examples using linking words. Correct grammar and word choice will improve clarity.

Ví dụ: Climate change has caused global warming, which has increased average temperatures worldwide. As a result, we have seen more extreme weather events, such as heavy rainfall and flooding.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more organised and grammatically correct. Clearly state your desire to visit or live in a different climate, then explain why with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in a city in northern Europe because I prefer cold and dry weather. I believe such a climate would suit my personal preferences and make me feel better.

× So Mccarroll located at around the quarter, so we have a warm weather and there is a rainy climate, climate.

✓ So Mccarroll is located around the quarter, so we have warm weather and a rainy climate.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used before 'around the quarter'; 'located around the quarter' is correct. Also, 'a warm weather' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. Instead, just 'warm weather' is correct. Additionally, 'there is a rainy climate, climate' is redundant; 'a rainy climate' suffices.

× So Mccarroll located at around the quarter, so we have a warm weather and there is a rainy climate, climate.

✓ So Mccarroll is located around the quarter, so we have warm weather and a rainy climate.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'Mccarroll' to form the correct 'There be' structure. 'Mccarroll is located' is the correct form.

× And so I do believe that's the weather's top for it, someone that's live in the like here or in the States.

✓ And so I do believe that's the best weather for someone who lives here or in the States.

The pronouns 'that's' and 'someone that's live' are incorrect. 'That's' should be 'that's the best' or 'that's the top', and 'someone that's live' should be 'someone who lives'. Also, 'in the like here' is incorrect; 'here' suffices.

× Personally, I have never seen the wheels, no Sir.

✓ Personally, I have never seen the wheels, no sir.

The phrase 'the wheels' is unclear and likely incorrect in context; possibly a mishearing or misstatement. If the intended meaning is 'wheels' as in weather, it should be 'the weather'. Also, 'no Sir' should be 'no sir' with lowercase 'sir'.

× I want to move to somewhere that always have a cold weather and I want to have a chance or opportunities to get those amazing astonishing snow by myself.

✓ I want to move somewhere that always has cold weather and I want to have a chance or opportunities to experience amazing, astonishing snow by myself.

The phrase 'move to somewhere' is better as 'move somewhere'. 'Always have' should be 'always has' to agree with singular 'somewhere'. 'A cold weather' is incorrect; 'cold weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'Get those amazing astonishing snow' is incorrect; 'experience amazing, astonishing snow' is better.

× I want to move to somewhere that always have a cold weather and I want to have a chance or opportunities to get those amazing astonishing snow by myself.

✓ I want to move somewhere that always has cold weather and I want to have a chance or opportunities to experience amazing, astonishing snow by myself.

The verb 'have' does not agree with the singular subject 'somewhere'; it should be 'has'.

× Honestly I'm really sick about wet weather which makes me umm sweating all the days and I hate the feelings that's the wet clothes must stick to my skin.

✓ Honestly, I'm really sick of wet weather which makes me sweat all day and I hate the feeling that wet clothes stick to my skin.

The phrase 'sick about' should be 'sick of'. 'Sweating all the days' should be 'sweat all day'. 'The feelings that's the wet clothes must stick' is incorrect; it should be 'the feeling that wet clothes stick'.

× So personally dry weathers is my top choice.

✓ So personally, dry weather is my top choice.

'Dry weathers' is incorrect because 'weather' is uncountable and does not have a plural form. It should be 'dry weather'.

× As a tea person swing MBTI, I always plan my day at the morning.

✓ As a tea person according to MBTI, I always plan my day in the morning.

The phrase 'swing MBTI' is incorrect; likely intended 'according to MBTI'. Also, 'at the morning' should be 'in the morning'.

× First thing that I'm gonna check when I woke up is the weather.

✓ The first thing that I check when I wake up is the weather.

The sentence mixes future 'gonna' with past 'woke up'. Since this is a habitual action, present tense 'check' and 'wake up' should be used.

× It it allows me to have a estimations of the day and the feelings.

✓ It allows me to have an estimation of the day and the feelings.

'A estimations' is incorrect; 'estimations' is plural and should not have 'a'. If singular, it should be 'an estimation'.

× So there is lots of consequences of climate change like global warming which turns the average temperatures of the earth in different places become higher and there is a lot of extreme weather which brings an overwhelming ratings and flooding.

✓ There are lots of consequences of climate change like global warming which causes the average temperatures of the earth in different places to become higher and there is a lot of extreme weather which brings overwhelming rains and flooding.

'There is lots of consequences' is incorrect; 'lots' is plural, so 'there are' is correct. 'Turns the average temperatures... become higher' is incorrect; 'causes... to become higher' is correct. 'Overwhelming ratings' is likely a misstatement; 'overwhelming rains' fits better.

× Yeah, I want to move on, move to a city step maybe at at the top of the Europe because I like cold and dry weather and I do believe that those kind of places suit my personal preferences and I have maybe better feeling.

✓ Yeah, I want to move to a city, maybe at the top of Europe, because I like cold and dry weather and I believe that those kinds of places suit my personal preferences and I might feel better.

'Move on, move to a city step' is unclear; 'move to a city' is correct. 'At at the top of the Europe' should be 'at the top of Europe' without 'the'. 'Those kind of places' should be 'those kinds of places'. 'I have maybe better feeling' should be 'I might feel better'.