Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复表达，句子应更流畅自然。例如，“less is so uncomfortable”表达不清，应改为“it is very uncomfortable”。建议使用连贯的句子结构，避免断句。

Ví dụ: I live in Taipei, where the weather is quite changeable. Summers are usually hot and wet, which I find very uncomfortable when I'm outside.

Gợi ý: 回答中有许多语法错误和重复，表达不清晰。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并用连贯的句子连接理由。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I prefer cold weather because I can wear more clothes to keep warm, but when it's hot, I have to wear fewer clothes, which is less comfortable.

Gợi ý: 表达不够自然，语法和用词错误较多。建议使用正确的句型和词汇，避免重复和不连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because it feels more comfortable when I'm outside. On rainy days, I always have to use an umbrella and avoid puddles, which is quite inconvenient.

Gợi ý: 回答较完整，但句子结构不够流畅，存在语法错误。建议简化句子，使用连贯的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every night before I go to bed. It helps me decide what clothes to wear and whether I need to take an umbrella.

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰，语法错误较多。建议用更准确的词汇和句子表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

Ví dụ: I think climate change has caused the weather to become more extreme. Many places that used to be cold are now very hot in summer. For example, in Europe, people didn't need air conditioners before, but now they use them during summer.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议简洁明了地表达愿望，并用完整句子说明原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because my country doesn't have snow. I want to experience snow in winter, which I think would be very interesting.

× The weather in summer always wet and hot and I think less is so uncomfortable.

✓ The weather in summer is always wet and hot and I think it is so uncomfortable.

句子中缺少动词“is”，导致主语和谓语不匹配。需要加上“is”来表示天气的状态。

× I think less is so uncomfortable.

✓ I think it is so uncomfortable.

“less”用法错误，应使用代词“it”指代天气。

× Uncomfortable in the outside.

✓ Uncomfortable outside.

“in the outside”用法错误，正确表达应为“outside”，表示在户外。

× if I feel cold I can wear more and more clothes on my body to warm my to to warm so but if I got her if I feel hot I can less I can wear less clothes.

✓ If I feel cold, I can wear more and more clothes on my body to keep warm, but if I feel hot, I can wear less clothes.

句子中“to warm my to to warm so”无意义且重复，且“got her”错误，应删除。代词使用不当，需调整句子结构使其通顺。

× I like dry weather because less feel more comfortable in outside.

✓ I like dry weather because I feel more comfortable outside.

“less”用法错误，应使用主语“I”。“in outside”错误，正确用法是“outside”。

× If uh in a rainy day I always need to use umbrella or avoid the water on the road.

✓ If on a rainy day, I always need to use an umbrella or avoid the water on the road.

“in a rainy day”应改为“on a rainy day”，表示具体某一天。

× If uh in a rainy day I always need to use umbrella or avoid the water on the road.

✓ If on a rainy day, I always need to use an umbrella or avoid the water on the road.

“use umbrella”缺少冠词“an”，应为“use an umbrella”。

× It's very bad experience when I walking.

✓ It's a very bad experience when I am walking.

“when I walking”缺少助动词“am”，应为现在进行时“when I am walking”。

× I always check the weather forecast before I go to bed because I need to know the weather tomorrow that can help me how to choose my clothes and I need to take the umbrella.

✓ I always check the weather forecast before I go to bed because I need to know tomorrow's weather that can help me choose my clothes and decide whether to take an umbrella.

“the weather tomorrow”应改为“tomorrow's weather”，更自然。句子中“help me how to choose”结构不正确，应为“help me choose”。“take the umbrella”应为“take an umbrella”。

× I think climate change let the weather become climate.

✓ I think climate change has made the weather become extreme.

原句“become climate”不通顺，推测意为“变得极端”，需改为“become extreme”。

× Many place was was cold before and now become very hot in summer.

✓ Many places were cold before and now have become very hot in summer.

“place”应为复数“places”，动词“was”应为复数过去式“were”，且“now become”应为现在完成时“have become”。

× Like Europe when they need they don't need, they don't need air conditioner, but now they need to use it in the summer.

✓ Like Europe, when they didn't need air conditioners before, but now they need to use them in the summer.

句子结构混乱，需调整为“when they didn't need air conditioners before”。“air conditioner”应为复数“air conditioners”，代词“it”应改为“them”。

× Yes, I would like to visit other cities because, umm, my country hasn't has uh, snow, so I really want to express the uh, the snow in the summer, the snow in the winter.

✓ Yes, I would like to visit other cities because, umm, my country doesn't have snow, so I really want to experience snow in the summer and in the winter.

“hasn't has”错误，应为“doesn't have”。“express the snow”用词错误，应为“experience snow”。