Part 1
Giám khảo
What's the weather like where you live?
Thí sinh
Umm, the weather is kinda sunny. It's not that always sunny, but usually the weather is sunny because we'll, even the, uh, Middle East and that's why we always see the sun every day. So, and I love sunny days and so that affects my mood in a very good way.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Thí sinh
I think I would prefer sun a hot weather because I love sunny days and when the sunny days comes up I just want to lay down at my house and it's do nothing and just chill with the sun and be happy with the hot weather.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Thí sinh
Actually I wouldn't prefer them both, but if I have to pick someone I would pick a wet weather because dry waters weather always it affects my skin that way and that's why I would prefer wet weather.
Giám khảo
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Thí sinh
No, because in my country I the weather is always kind of same because we live in the Middle East so we usually go out in the same weather. So I don't always check the weather forecast.
Giám khảo
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Thí sinh
I think it has affects the world a lot and in a few years we will see the pronouns of the, uh, weather changing and climate changing.
Giám khảo
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Thí sinh
Yes, I would like to visit and explore the new cities because I love exploring new places and I love to explore the new weather with it. So yes, I would love that.
What's the weather like where you live?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızda daha doğal ve akıcı ifadeler kullanmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarları azaltarak ve cümlelerinizi daha kısa ve net yaparak daha etkili olabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, bağlaçları kullanarak cümleler arasında daha iyi bağlantı kurabilirsiniz.
Ví dụ: The weather where I live is usually sunny, although it's not always like that. Since I live in the Middle East, we see the sun almost every day. I really enjoy sunny days because they improve my mood significantly.
Do you prefer cold or hot weather?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi hataları var ve ifadeler biraz karışık. Daha doğru ve doğal cümle yapıları kullanmalısınız. Ayrıca, neden tercih ettiğinizi açıkça belirtmek için daha spesifik detaylar ekleyebilirsiniz.
Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I enjoy sunny days. When it's sunny, I like to relax at home, soak up the sun, and feel happy in the warm weather.
Do you prefer dry or wet weather?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime kullanımı hataları mevcut. Ayrıca, cümlenizi daha akıcı ve mantıklı hale getirmek için bağlaçlar kullanmalısınız. Tercihinizi açık ve net bir şekilde ifade edin.
Ví dụ: I don't really prefer either dry or wet weather, but if I have to choose, I would pick wet weather because dry weather often affects my skin negatively.
Are you in the habit of checking the weather forecast? When and how often?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: Cevabınızı daha net ve akıcı yapmalısınız. Gereksiz tekrarları azaltarak ve cümleler arasında bağlaçlar kullanarak daha etkili bir cevap verebilirsiniz.
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually check the weather forecast because the weather in my country is quite consistent. Since we live in the Middle East, the weather is mostly the same every day.
What do you think are the effects of climate change in recent years?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Cümlenizde dilbilgisi ve kelime hataları var. Daha açık ve detaylı açıklamalar yaparak görüşünüzü destekleyin. Bağlaçlar kullanarak cümlelerinizi daha tutarlı hale getirin.
Ví dụ: I believe climate change has had a significant impact on the world. In the coming years, we will notice more extreme weather patterns and changes in the climate.
Would you like to visit other cities that have different climates from where you live?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır ancak daha çeşitli kelimeler kullanarak ve cümleleri bağlaçlarla bağlayarak daha etkili yapabilirsiniz.
Ví dụ: Yes, I would love to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy exploring new places. Experiencing different weather conditions would be exciting and interesting for me.
× the weather is kinda sunny
✓ the weather is kind of sunny
'kinda' is informal and should be replaced with 'kind of' for proper grammar and clarity.
× It's not that always sunny
✓ It's not always that sunny
The adverb 'always' should be placed before 'that' to maintain correct word order in English.
× when the sunny days comes up
✓ when the sunny days come up
'Days' is plural, so the verb should be 'come' instead of 'comes' to agree in number.
× I think I would prefer sun a hot weather
✓ I think I would prefer sunny hot weather
'Sun a hot weather' is incorrect; 'sunny hot weather' correctly uses the adjective 'sunny' and removes the unnecessary article.
× dry waters weather always it affects my skin that way
✓ dry weather always affects my skin that way
'Waters weather' is incorrect; 'weather' is uncountable and should not be pluralized or combined with 'waters'.
× I the weather is always kind of same
✓ the weather is always kind of the same
The sentence is missing a subject and article; 'I' is unnecessary here, and 'the same' requires the definite article.
× I think it has affects the world a lot
✓ I think it has affected the world a lot
'Has affects' is incorrect; the present perfect form requires the past participle 'affected' after 'has'.
× we will see the pronouns of the, uh, weather changing
✓ we will see the patterns of the, uh, weather changing
'Pronouns' is incorrect in this context; 'patterns' or 'changes' is appropriate to describe weather changes.
× I love to explore the new weather with it
✓ I love to explore the new weather there
'With it' is incorrect; 'there' correctly refers to the place with the new weather.