Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用正确的时态和单复数形式。

Ví dụ: The weather where I live is very wet and it often rains for several weeks. Because of this, I always have to consider the rain when I wash my clothes.

Gợi ý: 回答结构不清晰，句子不完整且有语法错误。建议直接表达偏好，并用连词连接原因，句子完整。

Ví dụ: I prefer warm weather because it provides a comfortable temperature for jogging and exercising outdoors.

Gợi ý: 表达不流畅且有语法错误，建议简洁明了地说明偏好及原因，避免重复和不必要的词汇。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes my clothes smell strange, which I don't like.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达混乱，建议直接回答习惯并说明原因，句子简洁连贯。

Ví dụ: When I am at school, I often check the weather forecast because I don't have a car, so it's important to know if it will rain tomorrow.

Gợi ý: 句子结构不完整且表达不够清晰，建议使用连词连接观点和原因，表达更具体。

Ví dụ: In recent years, temperatures have risen, so people tend to stay indoors and exercise less, which affects their health.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复，建议简洁表达愿望并说明原因，句子结构完整。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look for cities with comfortable climates, and if I find one, I would like to live there.

× The weather in my live place is so wet and it always rain, uh, rain for the a couple of week, uh, every time I wash my clothes, I always need to consider the occasion about the rainy day.

✓ The weather in my living place is so wet and it always rains, uh, rains for a couple of weeks, uh, every time I wash my clothes, I always need to consider the occasion about the rainy day.

这里“rain”应使用第三人称单数形式“rains”，因为主语是单数“it”。“a couple of week”应改为复数“a couple of weeks”，因为“couple”后面应接复数名词。

× The weather in my live place is so wet and it always rain, uh, rain for the a couple of week, uh, every time I wash my clothes, I always need to consider the occasion about the rainy day.

✓ The weather in my living place is so wet and it always rains, uh, rains for a couple of weeks, uh, every time I wash my clothes, I always need to consider the occasion on the rainy day.

“consider the occasion about the rainy day”中“about”用法不当，应改为“on”，表示“在雨天这个场合”。

× Compare with the cold, cold and hot weather. I prefer the warm weather and because in the warm weather I there is a comfortable body temperature for me to go for jogging and I can do exercises in the.

✓ Compared with cold weather, I prefer warm weather because in warm weather there is a comfortable body temperature for me to go jogging and I can do exercises.

“Compare with”应为过去分词“Compared with”作状语；“cold, cold and hot weather”重复且结构混乱，应简化为“cold weather”；“and because”连接不当，应去掉“and”；“I there is”语序错误，应为“there is”；“go for jogging”应为“go jogging”；句尾“in the”不完整，应删除。

× I prefer the dry weather because in the wet weather and my clothes always they are strange smell, uh, with in my clothes and I know really like it.

✓ I prefer dry weather because in wet weather my clothes always have a strange smell, uh, in my clothes and I really don't like it.

“my clothes always they are strange smell”结构错误，应改为“my clothes always have a strange smell”；“know”应为“don't”，表达否定；“with in”应为“in”。

× I prefer the dry weather because in the wet weather and my clothes always they are strange smell, uh, with in my clothes and I know really like it.

✓ I prefer dry weather because in wet weather my clothes always have a strange smell, uh, in my clothes and I really don't like it.

“my clothes always they are”中“they”多余，应删除。

× We are at school. I I checked the forecast, weather forecast frequently because I have no car to drive in the at school and so it is very important for me to see to know about whether it rain tomorrow.

✓ When I am at school, I check the weather forecast frequently because I have no car to drive at school, so it is very important for me to know whether it will rain tomorrow.

“I checked”应为一般现在时“I check”，因为是习惯动作；“in the at school”介词使用错误，应为“at school”；“whether it rain”应为“whether it will rain”，表示将来时。

× We are at school. I I checked the forecast, weather forecast frequently because I have no car to drive in the at school and so it is very important for me to see to know about whether it rain tomorrow.

✓ When I am at school, I check the weather forecast frequently because I have no car to drive at school, so it is very important for me to know whether it will rain tomorrow.

“whether it rain tomorrow”应使用将来时“whether it will rain tomorrow”，表示对未来天气的预测。

× In my opinion, the temperature of recently years getting higher than before and people don't go outside, do some exercises and they prefer to stay at home and in sleeping.

✓ In my opinion, the temperature in recent years is getting higher than before, and people don't go outside to do exercises; they prefer to stay at home and sleep.

“temperature of recently years”应为“temperature in recent years”；“getting”前缺少助动词“is”；“do some exercises”前应加“to”；“in sleeping”应改为“sleep”。

× In my opinion, the temperature of recently years getting higher than before and people don't go outside, do some exercises and they prefer to stay at home and in sleeping.

✓ In my opinion, the temperature in recent years is getting higher than before, and people don't go outside to do exercises; they prefer to stay at home and sleep.

“temperature of recently years”中“of”用法不当，应改为“in”；“in sleeping”应去掉“in”，直接用动词原形“sleep”。

× In my opinion, the temperature of recently years getting higher than before and people don't go outside, do some exercises and they prefer to stay at home and in sleeping.

✓ In my opinion, the temperature in recent years is getting higher than before, and people don't go outside to do exercises; they prefer to stay at home and sleep.

句中“and”连接多个动作时应注意逻辑和结构，使用分号或逗号分隔更清晰。

× Yes, I, I always uh, to search for some cities where is where have a comfortable climate and if I found some city like about this, I would like to live there.

✓ Yes, I always search for some cities that have a comfortable climate, and if I find a city like this, I would like to live there.

“where is where have”结构重复且错误，应简化为“that have”；“found”应为一般现在时“find”，因为是假设条件句；“like about this”应为“like this”。