Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to use correct grammar and more natural sentence structures. For example, use 'It is the rainy season now, so it rains a lot, and sometimes we have floods when there is too much rain.' This will make your answer clearer and more natural.

Ví dụ: It is the rainy season now, so it rains a lot, and sometimes we have floods when there is too much rain.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence clarity and grammar. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, 'I personally prefer cold weather because I enjoy going outside to play or walk in the park. However, when it's hot, I sweat a lot, which feels uncomfortable and unhygienic, so I prefer to stay indoors.'

Ví dụ: I personally prefer cold weather because I enjoy going outside to play or walk in the park. However, when it's hot, I sweat a lot, which feels uncomfortable and unhygienic, so I prefer to stay indoors.

Gợi ý: Focus on clear and correct grammar and vocabulary. Also, explain your reasons more clearly. For example, 'I definitely prefer dry weather because when it rains, my clothes and socks get wet and start to smell bad, which I don't like.'

Ví dụ: I definitely prefer dry weather because when it rains, my clothes and socks get wet and start to smell bad, which I don't like.

Gợi ý: Try to use smoother sentence structures and correct grammar. For example, 'I check the weather forecast quite often because I work in the aviation industry. I need to know if it will rain or when the rain will stop to plan my work.'

Ví dụ: I check the weather forecast quite often because I work in the aviation industry. I need to know if it will rain or when the rain will stop to plan my work.

Gợi ý: Use clearer sentence structures and linking words. For example, 'I think climate change affects us a lot. For instance, increased rainfall can cause floods. Also, the ice at the North Pole is melting, causing sea levels to rise, which is harmful in the long run.'

Ví dụ: I think climate change affects us a lot. For instance, increased rainfall can cause floods. Also, the ice at the North Pole is melting, causing sea levels to rise, which is harmful in the long run.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and natural by removing fillers and improving grammar. For example, 'Yes, definitely. I live in Bangkok, Thailand, where we don't have snowy winters. I would like to visit a country with snow to experience it for the first time.'

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. I live in Bangkok, Thailand, where we don't have snowy winters. I would like to visit a country with snow to experience it for the first time.

× Now it rainy season so it raining a lot and sometimes we have the water flood when the water is too much from the rainy.

✓ Now it is the rainy season so it is raining a lot and sometimes we have flooding when there is too much rain.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' before 'rainy season' and 'raining'. Also, 'the water flood' is incorrect; 'flooding' is the correct noun form. 'Too much from the rainy' is incorrect; it should be 'too much rain'. Use 'there is' to indicate existence of flooding.

× For me personally I prefer cold because really cold but not too cold. I tend to like to go outside playing, walking in the park or something like that. But it's hot, I will sweat a lot and it not hygienic for me so I tend to like stay.

✓ For me personally, I prefer cold because I like it really cold but not too cold. I tend to like going outside to play, walk in the park, or do something like that. But when it's hot, I sweat a lot and it is not hygienic for me, so I tend to stay indoors.

The sentence misses auxiliary verbs and correct verb forms. 'I tend to like to go outside playing' should be 'I tend to like going outside to play'. 'It not hygienic' needs 'is'. Also, 'I tend to like stay' should be 'I tend to stay'. Adding 'when' before 'it's hot' clarifies the condition.

× Umm for me life for sure because if it wait or it's raining my child will wait and as well as my socks and it will get stink of bad smell and I don't think I like that so I prefer dry.

✓ Umm for me, life is better for sure because if it rains or is raining, my clothes will get wet as well as my socks, and they will start to smell bad. I don't think I like that, so I prefer dry weather.

'Life for sure' is unclear; 'life is better for sure' clarifies meaning. 'If it wait' should be 'if it rains'. 'My child will wait' is incorrect; likely meant 'my clothes will get wet'. 'It will get stink of bad smell' should be 'they will start to smell bad'. Pronouns and nouns must agree in number and meaning.

× I check the weather forecast quite a lot because I work in the aviation industry so I often look to the weather forecast to know that the is it going to rain or when is the rain going to stop so I can plan my work.

✓ I check the weather forecast quite a lot because I work in the aviation industry, so I often look at the weather forecast to know if it is going to rain or when the rain is going to stop so I can plan my work.

'Look to the weather forecast' should be 'look at the weather forecast'. 'To know that the is it going to rain' is incorrect; it should be 'to know if it is going to rain'. The sentence structure is corrected for clarity and proper pronoun use.

× I think the climate affect us a lot, like now, is it raining? Are the water going to flood? Or even the North Pole, The ice is starting to melt and the water level is rising. So in the long run is not good for us.

✓ I think the climate affects us a lot. Like now, is it raining? Is the water going to flood? Even at the North Pole, the ice is starting to melt and the water level is rising. So in the long run, it is not good for us.

'Climate affect' should be 'climate affects' to agree with singular subject. 'Are the water going to flood?' should be 'Is the water going to flood?' because 'water' is singular. Added missing subjects and articles for clarity.

× Yes, for sure. I live in Thailand, Bangkok, uh, we don't have winter snow weather, so I would like to visit the other country that have snow so I can feel the snow for the first time, I think.

✓ Yes, for sure. I live in Bangkok, Thailand. We don't have winter snow weather, so I would like to visit another country that has snow so I can experience snow for the first time, I think.

'The other country that have snow' should be 'another country that has snow' to match singular subject and verb. 'Thailand, Bangkok' order is better as 'Bangkok, Thailand'. 'Feel the snow' is better expressed as 'experience snow'.