Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构混乱，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子，注意时态和单复数形式，避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: I live in a place with four distinct seasons. Winters are very cold, summers are hot, and spring and autumn are mild. I really enjoy the weather here.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整，且句子冗长且不连贯。建议使用完整句子，注意介词和动词形式，避免重复和停顿。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I can go to beautiful beaches and swim in the sea during summer. Also, I enjoy wearing bright clothes and traveling outdoors.

Gợi ý: 表达较为清晰，但存在语法错误和重复。建议注意介词使用，避免重复表达，并丰富细节使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather because it is good for my skin. Rainy days are perfect for resting and relaxing, which helps me feel comfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不自然，建议简化句子结构，注意介词和冠词的使用，使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I usually prefer to look out the window to see the weather. However, sometimes I use smartphone apps to check the forecast and decide what to wear.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不连贯且缺乏具体细节。建议理清句子结构，使用连接词，丰富内容并避免口头语。

Ví dụ: I think climate change has serious effects. It harms farming by spreading diseases among crops. Also, it causes heat waves that affect people's health, making them more prone to illness.

Gợi ý: 回答表达基本清楚，但有重复和语法错误。建议避免重复，注意冠词和动词形式，丰富细节使回答更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates because I enjoy traveling around the world. Experiencing different cultures and climates is very fascinating to me.

× There is certain Four Seasons and the winter there are really cold and summer are really hot, hot and spring and festivals, spring and autumns are really mild.

✓ There are certain Four Seasons and the winters there are really cold and summers are really hot, and spring and autumn are really mild.

这里涉及单复数问题。'Four Seasons'是复数，应该用复数动词'are'。'winter'和'summer'应使用复数形式'winter s'和'summer s'，因为指的是多个季节。'spring and autumns'中'spring'是单数，'autumns'是复数，应该统一为复数或单数，这里改为复数'autumn'。

× Well, to be honest, I prefer to hot weather because in summer I can go aboard to some beautiful beach and swimming in the sea.

✓ Well, to be honest, I prefer hot weather because in summer I can go abroad to some beautiful beaches and swim in the sea.

'prefer to hot weather'中'prefer'后不需要' to'，应直接接名词。'go aboard'应为'go abroad'，表示出国。'some beautiful beach'应为复数'some beautiful beaches'，因为通常指多个海滩。'and swimming'应改为动词原形'swim'，与前面的动词并列。

× Well, I prefer to wet weather because I think it's good for my skin and in rainy days I think it's suitable for for sleep and I can have a comfort time.

✓ Well, I prefer wet weather because I think it's good for my skin and on rainy days I think it's suitable for sleep and I can have a comfortable time.

'prefer to wet weather'中'prefer'后不需要' to'。'in rainy days'应为'on rainy days'，表示在雨天。'for for sleep'重复，应为'for sleep'。'comfort time'应为形容词形式'comfortable time'。

× Well to be honest I don't really like to check in on weather forecast because I usually like to through the window and see the how the weather is.

✓ Well, to be honest, I don't really like to check the weather forecast because I usually like to look through the window and see how the weather is.

'check in on weather forecast'中'check'后不需要'in on'，应直接接宾语。'like to through the window'中缺少动词，应为'like to look through the window'。'see the how the weather is'中多余'the'，应为'see how the weather is'。

× But sometimes I use some smartphone apps to check the weather and to decide what I should wear in that day.

✓ But sometimes I use some smartphone apps to check the weather and decide what I should wear that day.

'to decide'前的'to'可以省略，使句子更自然。'in that day'应为'that day'，表示特定的那一天。

× Well, I think uh, climate change and the most important thing is uh, it affects farm farming and uh, umm, spread a lot of disease for crops.

✓ Well, I think, uh, climate change, and the most important thing is, uh, it affects farming and, uh, umm, spreads a lot of diseases to crops.

'affects farm farming'中重复且用词不当，应为'affects farming'。'spread a lot of disease for crops'中'spread'应为第三人称单数'spreads'，'disease'应为复数'diseases'，'for crops'应为'to crops'。

× And besides, umm, people's life also affects by climate change like uh, heat waves and so on and people easy to be ill.

✓ And besides, umm, people's lives are also affected by climate change, like uh, heat waves and so on, and people easily get ill.

'people's life'应为复数'lives'。'also affects by'应为被动语态'are also affected by'。'people easy to be ill'语法错误，应为'people easily get ill'。

× Yes, I really like to visit other cities in different different climates because I like to travel around the around the world and I think it's very interesting to reach a different culture and different climate.

✓ Yes, I really like to visit other cities with different climates because I like to travel around the world and I think it's very interesting to experience different cultures and different climates.

'cities in different different climates'应为'cities with different climates'。'travel around the around the world'重复，应为'travel around the world'。'reach a different culture'用词不当，应为'experience different cultures'。'different climate'应为复数'different climates'。