Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Answer should be more natural and grammatically correct. Use a clear topic sentence and avoid redundancy. For example, say "I live in Bangkok, where the weather has been very hot in recent years."

Ví dụ: I live in Bangkok, where the weather has been very hot in recent years, especially during the summer months.

Gợi ý: Improve sentence structure and use linking words to make the answer coherent. For example, "I prefer cold weather, like in Japan during spring or fall, because it feels refreshing and comfortable."

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather, like in Japan during spring or fall, because it feels refreshing and comfortable compared to hot weather.

Gợi ý: Avoid repetition and improve vocabulary. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly. For example, "I prefer dry weather because rainy days make me feel gloomy and uncomfortable."

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because rainy days often make me feel gloomy and uncomfortable, which affects my mood.

Gợi ý: Clarify the meaning and use correct verbs. Use linking words to explain frequency and reason. For example, "I usually check the weather forecast before I go running because if it rains, I cannot exercise outside."

Ví dụ: I usually check the weather forecast before I go running because if it rains, I cannot exercise outside.

Gợi ý: Provide clearer and more specific details with better vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "There are many effects of climate change, such as increased air pollution from industries and deforestation caused by human activities."

Ví dụ: There are many effects of climate change, such as increased air pollution from industries and deforestation caused by human activities.

Gợi ý: Make sentences grammatically correct and coherent. Use linking words to express reasons. For example, "Yes, I would like to live in Japan because I enjoy colder weather than in Thailand, and I want to experience how it feels."

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to live in Japan because I enjoy colder weather than in Thailand, and I want to experience how it feels.

× I live in Bangkok, which is place that the weather is so hot in several years.

✓ I live in Bangkok, which is a place where the weather has been very hot for several years.

The original sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'place' and uses incorrect relative clause structure. Also, 'in several years' should be 'for several years' to indicate duration. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× I like cold weather such as Japan in the spring of fall.

✓ I like cold weather, such as in Japan during spring or fall.

The phrase 'such as Japan in the spring of fall' is awkward. Adding commas and using 'during' for seasons is more natural. Also, 'spring of fall' should be 'spring or fall' to indicate two seasons.

× Japan still cold and I love it.

✓ Japan is still cold, and I love it.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject and adjective. Adding 'is' corrects the present tense structure.

× I prefer dry weather because wet weather just like rainy day.

✓ I prefer dry weather because wet weather is just like a rainy day.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' and the article 'a' before 'rainy day'. Including these corrects the sentence structure.

× I I don't like it because the weather seem to be lowly and terrible.

✓ I don't like it because the weather seems to be gloomy and terrible.

The verb 'seem' should be 'seems' to agree with singular subject 'weather'. Also, 'lowly' is incorrect here; 'gloomy' better expresses unpleasant weather.

× I usually shaking the weather forecast because nowadays I'm running for the exercise so and shake the forecast already because if it rainy I cannot run.

✓ I usually check the weather forecast because nowadays I'm running for exercise, so I check the forecast already because if it rains, I cannot run.

'Shaking the weather forecast' is incorrect; 'check' is appropriate. 'Running for the exercise' should be 'running for exercise'. Also, 'if it rainy' should be 'if it rains' to use correct verb form.

× I have it many reason, for example air pollution in the industry.

✓ I have many reasons, for example, air pollution from industry.

The phrase 'I have it many reason' is incorrect; it should be 'I have many reasons'. Also, 'in the industry' is better expressed as 'from industry'.

× Uh, forest has a little tree because people damage or tackle them.

✓ Uh, the forest has few trees because people damage or cut them down.

'Forest has a little tree' is incorrect; 'the forest has few trees' is correct. 'Tackle' is inappropriate here; 'cut them down' is the correct phrase for removing trees.

× Sure, if it's possible I would live in Japan and I feel cold more than in Thailand.

✓ Sure, if it's possible, I would live in Japan because I feel colder there than in Thailand.

The sentence needs a comma after 'possible'. 'Feel cold more than' should be 'feel colder than' to correctly compare temperatures.

× I want to know if I be there, what I am feeling.

✓ I want to know how I would feel if I were there.

'If I be there' is incorrect; the subjunctive 'if I were there' is appropriate. Also, 'what I am feeling' should be 'how I would feel' to express hypothetical feelings.