Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: In English (Bhutan), try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding repetition and unclear phrases. Use simple, direct sentences and add linking words to connect ideas logically.

Ví dụ: The weather where I live is very unpredictable. For example, it can be sunny one moment and then start raining the next. This sudden change makes it hard to plan outdoor activities.

Gợi ý: In English (Bhutan), focus on clear and correct expressions. Avoid unclear phrases like 'build free freaking coldness' and use simple vocabulary to express your preference and reasons.

Ví dụ: I prefer cold weather because I feel more comfortable in it. I can wear warm clothes and enjoy the cool air, unlike hot weather which makes me feel tired.

Gợi ý: In English (Bhutan), try to use correct grammar and clearer sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and be specific about why you like wet weather.

Ví dụ: I prefer wet weather, especially after rain or early in the morning when there is drizzle on the grass. It creates a calm atmosphere and feels like a fresh new beginning.

Gợi ý: In English (Bhutan), try to complete your sentences clearly and avoid hesitation. Use linking words to explain your habits and reasons logically.

Ví dụ: I usually do not check the weather forecast because I am very busy. However, when I have to travel a long distance, I check it to prepare accordingly.

Gợi ý: In English (Bhutan), express your ideas clearly and use correct grammar. Explain the effects of climate change with specific examples and avoid vague phrases.

Ví dụ: I think one effect of climate change is that people ignore its dangers. For example, burning waste increases pollution and harms the environment.

Gợi ý: In English (Bhutan), try to finish your sentences and use clear reasons. Use linking words to explain your interest in visiting places with different climates.

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to experience autumn in a place where the leaves change color, which is different from my home.

× The weather out here is quite unpredictable, like for example, right now it's worth having a sunny day, sunny day and another another minute it started raining.

✓ The weather out here is quite unpredictable, for example, right now it's a sunny day, and the next minute it starts raining.

The phrase 'it's worth having a sunny day' is incorrect; 'worth having' is not appropriate here. Also, 'another another minute it started raining' is ungrammatical and should be 'the next minute it starts raining' to indicate present habitual action. The verb 'started' should be 'starts' to match the present tense context.

× It's quite unpredictable and I find it really what to say really unmatched with.

✓ It's quite unpredictable and I find it really, how to say, unmatched.

The phrase 'really what to say really unmatched with' is ungrammatical and awkward. The correction simplifies the sentence to 'really, how to say, unmatched' to express hesitation and the intended meaning more clearly.

× I would always prefer cold or winter season because for me or for my perspective, I think that I I have enough capability to build free freaking coldness rather than those who heart sanity.

✓ I would always prefer the cold or winter season because, from my perspective, I think that I have enough capability to bear freezing coldness rather than those who hate sanity.

The original sentence has pronoun misuse and unclear phrases. 'For me or for my perspective' is redundant; 'from my perspective' is correct. 'Build free freaking coldness' is incorrect; 'bear freezing coldness' is appropriate. 'Those who heart sanity' is likely a mishearing or typo; 'those who hate sanity' is assumed but context is unclear; possibly 'those who prefer warmth' would be better.

× I prefer a wet weather, especially after a rain or early in the morning when there is a dizzling on grassy standard because I feel like after a rainy day or in a wet weather it I feel like I it's lent me into an another atmosphere.

✓ I prefer wet weather, especially after rain or early in the morning when there is a drizzle on grassy land because I feel like after a rainy day or in wet weather, it takes me into another atmosphere.

'A wet weather' is incorrect; 'wet weather' is uncountable and does not take 'a'. 'A rain' should be 'rain'. 'Dizzling' is a misspelling of 'drizzle'. 'Grassy standard' is likely a mishearing of 'grassy land'. 'It's lent me into an another atmosphere' is ungrammatical; 'it takes me into another atmosphere' is correct.

× Checking the weather forecast is never in my schedule because being as very busy a businesswoman, I hardly get a time to to or study the weather forecast.

✓ Checking the weather forecast is never in my schedule because, being a very busy businesswoman, I hardly get time to study the weather forecast.

'Being as very busy a businesswoman' is incorrect; 'being a very busy businesswoman' is correct. 'I hardly get a time to to or study' is ungrammatical; 'I hardly get time to study' is correct.

× But sometimes when I have to travel a long distance, I would I, I mean I.

✓ But sometimes, when I have to travel a long distance, I do check the weather forecast.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'I do check the weather forecast' completes the thought and corrects the sentence structure.

× I think the main effect of climate change in a recent year would be ignorance of people like burning off unwanted or anything that have directly impact on climate change and all.

✓ I think the main effect of climate change in recent years would be the ignorance of people, like burning off unwanted things or anything that directly impacts climate change and so on.

'In a recent year' should be 'in recent years' for generalization. 'Ignorance of people like burning off unwanted' is incomplete; 'ignorance of people, like burning off unwanted things' is correct. 'Anything that have' should be 'anything that has' to agree in number. 'And all' is informal; 'and so on' is more appropriate.

× Yes, I love to visit other cities that have totally different climate from from where I'm living right now since I believe that some of the countries are experiencing extra season or like that.

✓ Yes, I love to visit other cities that have a totally different climate from where I live right now since I believe that some countries are experiencing extra seasons or something like that.

'Different climate' is singular and needs the article 'a'. 'From from' is a repetition error. 'Where I'm living' is better as 'where I live' for general statement. 'Some of the countries' can be simplified to 'some countries'. 'Extra season' should be plural 'extra seasons' to match 'some countries'. 'Or like that' is informal; 'or something like that' is better.