Weather— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法和表达不够自然，有重复和停顿，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，使用更地道的表达。

Ví dụ: My hometown has a mild climate, with cool winters and warm summers. It's known as the 'small springs city' because of its many natural springs, making it a comfortable place to live all year round.

Gợi ý: 表达不够连贯，语法错误较多，建议使用更准确的句型和连接词，避免重复和不自然的比喻。

Ví dụ: I prefer hot weather because I can wear beautiful clothes like dresses and T-shirts. It makes me feel happy and confident, like a butterfly fluttering in the wind.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不清晰，表达混乱，建议理清思路，使用准确的词汇和句子表达观点，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me uncomfortable. For example, clothes dry faster and smell fresher in dry weather, while in wet weather they can feel heavy and damp.

Gợi ý: 表达有些冗长且语法不准确，建议简洁明了地回答问题，并注意句子结构和时态的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I check the weather forecast every morning because I have an 11-year-old son. This helps me choose appropriate clothes for him and keep him healthy.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误严重，建议先理清思路，完整表达观点，使用正确的句子结构和词汇。

Ví dụ: Climate change is caused by excessive carbon dioxide emissions and deforestation. For example, people cut down forests to make money, which harms the environment and worsens climate change.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不流畅，建议完整表达想法，避免停顿和重复，使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I would like to visit cities with different climates. For example, I want to visit Liaoning Province to experience the cold weather and see beautiful ice sculptures.

× My hometown wise, uh is really comfortable.

✓ My hometown is really comfortable.

句中“wise”用法错误，应去掉。这里想表达“我的家乡很舒适”，不需要“wise”。

× It is famous for the small springs city.

✓ It is famous as a small spring city.

“famous for the small springs city”表达不正确，应改为“famous as a small spring city”，表示“作为一个小温泉城市而闻名”。

× So in in my hometown, the weather is not too chilly in the winter and not too hot in the summer.

✓ So in my hometown, the weather is not too chilly in winter and not too hot in summer.

“in the winter”与“in the summer”中冠词“the”可省略，通常说“in winter”和“in summer”。

× It's really comfortable for people to live here every year.

✓ It's really comfortable for people to live here all year round.

“every year”指每年一次，不符合语境，应改为“all year round”，表示全年都舒适。

× I prefer hot weather because when the weather become hot I can dress my beautiful clothes such as dress and T-shirt.

✓ I prefer hot weather because when the weather becomes hot I can wear my beautiful clothes such as dresses and T-shirts.

“become”应使用第三人称单数形式“becomes”，且“dress”应复数“dresses”，动词“dress”用错，应为“wear”。

× It's like make me look like beautiful such as a butterfly in the in the wind.

✓ It makes me look beautiful, like a butterfly in the wind.

“It's like make me look like beautiful”结构错误，应改为“It makes me look beautiful”，且“such as”用法不当，改为“like”。

× I prefer dry weather because the wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable.

✓ I prefer dry weather because wet weather makes me feel uncomfortable.

“the wet weather”前冠词“the”可省略，泛指湿润天气。

× For example, when I wash wash the clothes in the dry weather the clothes smell a stranger taste but in the dry weather the clothes are very light to.

✓ For example, when I wash clothes in dry weather, the clothes smell strange, but in wet weather the clothes are very heavy too.

重复“wash wash”应去掉一个，“a stranger taste”应为“strange smell”，“dry weather”与“wet weather”混淆，且“light to”应为“heavy too”。

× Yes, I usually like to check it because I have a son and my son is about 11 years old in order to avoid he become sick.

✓ Yes, I usually like to check it because I have a son who is about 11 years old in order to avoid him becoming sick.

“avoid he become sick”中“he”应为宾格“him”，“become”应用动名词“becoming”，且需用关系代词“who”。

× So every morning I like to check the forecast to put the feet clothes for him.

✓ So every morning I like to check the forecast to put the right clothes on him.

“put the feet clothes”表达错误，应为“put the right clothes on him”，表示给他穿合适的衣服。

× The too many carbon dioxide, carbon dioxide are put in the in the air and another reason is the forests are cut down to many, for example, some people in order to make more money and then they.

✓ There is too much carbon dioxide put into the air, and another reason is that too many forests are cut down. For example, some people do this to make more money.

“The too many carbon dioxide”错误，二氧化碳不可数，应用“too much”；“carbon dioxide are”主谓不一致，应为“is”；“to many”应为“too many”；句子结构不完整，需补充。

× Yes, I'd like to because the different weather means different scenery, so I like to visit the frozen city such as Liaoning Province.

✓ Yes, I'd like to because different weather means different scenery, so I like to visit cold places such as Liaoning Province.

“the different weather”冠词“the”不当，应去掉；“frozen city”表达不自然，改为“cold places”。

× I can see the uh, ice, ice productions and the.

✓ I can see ice and ice sculptures there.

句子不完整且“ice productions”表达错误，应为“ice sculptures”，且补全句子。